for Racing Heart3/4/2012 c6
46Dark Wings Of Imagination
Amazing ending girl! You're welcome, write the hurt/comfor part of the story was very pleasant and fun, whenever you need me again you know where to find me. lol
46Dark Wings Of ImaginationAmazing ending girl! You're welcome, write the hurt/comfor part of the story was very pleasant and fun, whenever you need me again you know where to find me. lol
3/4/2012 c6
3loopydreamer
that was such a great story. It was a great storyn idea and it worked. fantastic :)
3loopydreamerthat was such a great story. It was a great storyn idea and it worked. fantastic :)
2/28/2012 c5 charmed16m2
I can't wait for the next chapter. What will happen now? Will there be a wedding or past hurt will resurface again? Will Mac Move to DC or Jo will move to NY to be with Mac?
I can't wait for the next chapter. What will happen now? Will there be a wedding or past hurt will resurface again? Will Mac Move to DC or Jo will move to NY to be with Mac?
2/27/2012 c5 loopydreamer
hey girl! You just rocked this chapter. I loved the touch of angst and it was just so yummy :)
hey girl! You just rocked this chapter. I loved the touch of angst and it was just so yummy :)
2/20/2012 c4 charmed16m2
poor Mac as well as Jo. i really like this story. it really makes me cry. Both are heart broken but i hope things will get better in the next chapter.
poor Mac as well as Jo. i really like this story. it really makes me cry. Both are heart broken but i hope things will get better in the next chapter.
2/20/2012 c3 bueemo
Now that was much in a chapter. I got a bit confused a ittle when Jo gave birth to her son and she didn‘t name him. Just another line, you called him Matt. I think it jumped too long from one scene to another. Just my suggestion, anywy you‘re doing good with this story and youbare amazing bbut I think you can do better,so keeping up! :)
Now that was much in a chapter. I got a bit confused a ittle when Jo gave birth to her son and she didn‘t name him. Just another line, you called him Matt. I think it jumped too long from one scene to another. Just my suggestion, anywy you‘re doing good with this story and youbare amazing bbut I think you can do better,so keeping up! :)
2/1/2012 c2 loopydreamer
ahhh! so juicy and gorgeous! ;D soooo soooo beautiful! My little heart is beating. That was just the sweetest episode ever ;)
ahhh! so juicy and gorgeous! ;D soooo soooo beautiful! My little heart is beating. That was just the sweetest episode ever ;)
1/24/2012 c1
46Dark Wings Of Imagination
It seems very interesting... lol! Look what I am talking. I'm not normal. People give it a shot, it worth.
46Dark Wings Of ImaginationIt seems very interesting... lol! Look what I am talking. I'm not normal. People give it a shot, it worth.
