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3/5/2012 c6 fart fart
Great ending.
3/4/2012 c6 46Dark Wings Of Imagination
Amazing ending girl! You're welcome, write the hurt/comfor part of the story was very pleasant and fun, whenever you need me again you know where to find me. lol
3/4/2012 c6 3loopydreamer
that was such a great story. It was a great storyn idea and it worked. fantastic :)
2/28/2012 c5 charmed16m2
I can't wait for the next chapter. What will happen now? Will there be a wedding or past hurt will resurface again? Will Mac Move to DC or Jo will move to NY to be with Mac?
2/27/2012 c5 loopydreamer
hey girl! You just rocked this chapter. I loved the touch of angst and it was just so yummy :)
2/27/2012 c5 fart fart
Great update.
2/21/2012 c4 fart fart
Great update.
2/20/2012 c4 charmed16m2
poor Mac as well as Jo. i really like this story. it really makes me cry. Both are heart broken but i hope things will get better in the next chapter.
2/20/2012 c3 fart fart
That was a a great and sad update.
2/20/2012 c3 bueemo
Now that was much in a chapter. I got a bit confused a ittle when Jo gave birth to her son and she didn‘t name him. Just another line, you called him Matt. I think it jumped too long from one scene to another. Just my suggestion, anywy you‘re doing good with this story and youbare amazing bbut I think you can do better,so keeping up! :)
2/6/2012 c2 charmed16m2
wonder what will happen next? waiting for the next update. :)
2/2/2012 c2 fart fart
Great update.
2/1/2012 c2 loopydreamer
ahhh! so juicy and gorgeous! ;D soooo soooo beautiful! My little heart is beating. That was just the sweetest episode ever ;)
1/24/2012 c1 46Dark Wings Of Imagination
It seems very interesting... lol! Look what I am talking. I'm not normal. People give it a shot, it worth.
1/24/2012 c1 fart fart
Great start to your story.
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