for Ora e Sempre3/10 c4 MonkeyLover422
Then here comes along you-know-who with his "bride" and they kill me. Am I not supposed to be confused? xD
I reading this now! :3 And me likey so far! :D
Then here comes along you-know-who with his "bride" and they kill me. Am I not supposed to be confused? xD
I reading this now! :3 And me likey so far! :D
6/21/2012 c18 SunshineWriterGirl
beautiful! I'm glad Francesco had a change of heart towards Daniel :) And they're gonna get married! :DD You HAVE to do a sequel! We don't even know her answer!
beautiful! I'm glad Francesco had a change of heart towards Daniel :) And they're gonna get married! :DD You HAVE to do a sequel! We don't even know her answer!
6/7/2012 c18 MissCarrera
Well, the ending chapters felt a little rushed to me but once I realized you were setting it up for a sequel it made more sense. Overall, great for your first fic. Looking forward to more from you :)
MissCarrera
Well, the ending chapters felt a little rushed to me but once I realized you were setting it up for a sequel it made more sense. Overall, great for your first fic. Looking forward to more from you :)
MissCarrera
6/4/2012 c1 
5tinkfan14
What an adorable story! I love your OC, Emily. The ending sentence is so kool! I like neat endings! It leaves an impression on you. :)
5tinkfan14What an adorable story! I love your OC, Emily. The ending sentence is so kool! I like neat endings! It leaves an impression on you. :)
6/4/2012 c14 MissCarrera
"I always think about things while doing 280 kph" I don't know why but I found that a humourous line XD I'm not quite done reading the story but chapter fourteen was definitely one of your strongest. Good job!
MissCarrera
"I always think about things while doing 280 kph" I don't know why but I found that a humourous line XD I'm not quite done reading the story but chapter fourteen was definitely one of your strongest. Good job!
MissCarrera