for Kingdom Hearts: Twilight Chaos6/20/2012 c4 
5Mr. Martin
I got the Python reference immediately.
"Looka tha' BONES!"
This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. I can't wait to see where it leads.
5Mr. MartinI got the Python reference immediately.
"Looka tha' BONES!"
This is shaping up to be a very interesting story. I can't wait to see where it leads.
5/29/2012 c4 1Nazo18
I am actually really bummed you decided to take out the twilight heart series, I really enjoyed Hiro's romp through space, and also how he had to find bits and pieces of his heart in the second.
However being a writer myself, I know how it feels to think you have a better way to do it, and start over. and I respect that decision. I look forward to what happens next and how this story will end.
1Nazo18I am actually really bummed you decided to take out the twilight heart series, I really enjoyed Hiro's romp through space, and also how he had to find bits and pieces of his heart in the second.
However being a writer myself, I know how it feels to think you have a better way to do it, and start over. and I respect that decision. I look forward to what happens next and how this story will end.
3/28/2012 c4 17KHLegacy
Yeah good chapter I like the pattern you have out I also like how Comsos is a guy and Chaos is a girl and waahh you left it on a cliff hanger, but where is Riku? and I heard of that video game, I'm so glad she got her head back good chapter!
17KHLegacyYeah good chapter I like the pattern you have out I also like how Comsos is a guy and Chaos is a girl and waahh you left it on a cliff hanger, but where is Riku? and I heard of that video game, I'm so glad she got her head back good chapter!
3/9/2012 c3 Twilit Storm
Yeah, it is always satisfying to murder a behemoth. Though the incarnations that cast Meteor on death can be a pain. Not as much as they would have been casting Meteor in FF7, of course.
If the disney worlds you were set on using are taken, you might consider looking into other disneylike movies-something from Pixar, maybe, or whoever made Shrek. That way you open up a bunch of worlds unlikely to be taken by Dream Drop Distance but still keep the general feel of Disney + Squeenix. Just a suggestion.
For your further consideration; given that Prince is Sora's ally and they use what looks like different incarnations of the same weapon (not just the Keyblade, but the Kingdom Key (which I think might actually be meant to use the power of Kingdom Hearts itself; another consideration, since it looks like Sora is going to have to play Godslayer)) there is another ability you might attribute to the Behemoth Fang crystal, though I'd like to see Comet Rain. Prince does summon his beasts from Crystals, after all...
Yeah, it is always satisfying to murder a behemoth. Though the incarnations that cast Meteor on death can be a pain. Not as much as they would have been casting Meteor in FF7, of course.
If the disney worlds you were set on using are taken, you might consider looking into other disneylike movies-something from Pixar, maybe, or whoever made Shrek. That way you open up a bunch of worlds unlikely to be taken by Dream Drop Distance but still keep the general feel of Disney + Squeenix. Just a suggestion.
For your further consideration; given that Prince is Sora's ally and they use what looks like different incarnations of the same weapon (not just the Keyblade, but the Kingdom Key (which I think might actually be meant to use the power of Kingdom Hearts itself; another consideration, since it looks like Sora is going to have to play Godslayer)) there is another ability you might attribute to the Behemoth Fang crystal, though I'd like to see Comet Rain. Prince does summon his beasts from Crystals, after all...
3/1/2012 c3 JapanRules555
Good chapter
Good chapter
2/29/2012 c3 1the Zogg
I think you still need to work on yor fight scenes a bit but otherwise I liked this chapter. Also how is Sora going to react when he finds out tha Chaos uses light. Or has to fight light aligned Chaos Spawn his powers won't be very effective on them. Maybe he will have to take a step into the Darkness to survive?
1the ZoggI think you still need to work on yor fight scenes a bit but otherwise I liked this chapter. Also how is Sora going to react when he finds out tha Chaos uses light. Or has to fight light aligned Chaos Spawn his powers won't be very effective on them. Maybe he will have to take a step into the Darkness to survive?
2/29/2012 c3 17KHLegacy
YEAH! I've been waiting for this...several things I hope for
1: the BBS trio make an appearance along with the ORg XIII trio
2: Riku is okay and is some where in the void or some how wound up back in destiny islans
3: you find new insperation soon
4: Sora makes it out alive
5: the next update comes soon good chapter!
17KHLegacyYEAH! I've been waiting for this...several things I hope for
1: the BBS trio make an appearance along with the ORg XIII trio
2: Riku is okay and is some where in the void or some how wound up back in destiny islans
3: you find new insperation soon
4: Sora makes it out alive
5: the next update comes soon good chapter!
2/6/2012 c2 KHLegacy
HORAAAYY! you updated! I thought Namine would be Kishi's mom
Roxas threw a brick at you huh? to be honest I'm more for RoxasxXion anyway! good chapter I can't wait to see what's next or what worlds they go too!
HORAAAYY! you updated! I thought Namine would be Kishi's mom
Roxas threw a brick at you huh? to be honest I'm more for RoxasxXion anyway! good chapter I can't wait to see what's next or what worlds they go too!
2/6/2012 c2 1the Zogg
Interesting premise However as a concerned reviewer I want to say a few things first I think your fight scenes are to short the spawn didn't really convey a bigger threat then the heartless make the heroes work harder for their victories remember this is a story not a video game you aren't limited to video game logic It dosen't have to be Sora was knocked back or Sora used strike raid you have no censors let the heroes bleed come up with over the top attacks for both the heroes and villains. Secondly don't make Darkness the final enemy in this story make the final enemy Light. In your previous stories you talked about balance but Darkness always ended up as the bad guy try to avoid that this time. Third of all I suggest Chaos makes lots and lots of light elemental monsters that are pure evil and do lots of evil things like gleefully killing innocent people to sucker punch the heroes and truly convey the sense that light is not good.
Anyways I am a fan of your work I loved SINful Rose it was hilarious! I also liked your .hack/ fic can you please re-post it I look forward to big things Blu Rose.
Oh yeah I am not flaming you I am being a critic I believe all true fans should critique the authors work to help make it better. Tell me if I was too much of a dick.
1the ZoggInteresting premise However as a concerned reviewer I want to say a few things first I think your fight scenes are to short the spawn didn't really convey a bigger threat then the heartless make the heroes work harder for their victories remember this is a story not a video game you aren't limited to video game logic It dosen't have to be Sora was knocked back or Sora used strike raid you have no censors let the heroes bleed come up with over the top attacks for both the heroes and villains. Secondly don't make Darkness the final enemy in this story make the final enemy Light. In your previous stories you talked about balance but Darkness always ended up as the bad guy try to avoid that this time. Third of all I suggest Chaos makes lots and lots of light elemental monsters that are pure evil and do lots of evil things like gleefully killing innocent people to sucker punch the heroes and truly convey the sense that light is not good.
Anyways I am a fan of your work I loved SINful Rose it was hilarious! I also liked your .hack/ fic can you please re-post it I look forward to big things Blu Rose.
Oh yeah I am not flaming you I am being a critic I believe all true fans should critique the authors work to help make it better. Tell me if I was too much of a dick.
1/29/2012 c1 twilightdreamer18
ARRRG! Cliffy on the first chapter! I've already enjoyed your stories for quite some time now and for this new revamp you're doing I'm already enjoying the first chapter. A little bummed about Twilight Heart being taken off (wanted to re-read it :'D ), but understand the reason why. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
ARRRG! Cliffy on the first chapter! I've already enjoyed your stories for quite some time now and for this new revamp you're doing I'm already enjoying the first chapter. A little bummed about Twilight Heart being taken off (wanted to re-read it :'D ), but understand the reason why. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
1/25/2012 c1 Lexcia
Sorry, I cba to log in, but this sounds really good so far! Please update soon!
Sorry, I cba to log in, but this sounds really good so far! Please update soon!
1/25/2012 c1 5rockhard034
Hey there, Blu. Long time no see. Remember me?
Good chapter, hope to see most of your work in the future.
It's been a long time since you updated your journal. How have you been doing? How's college been? Hopefully nothings happened that makes you wanna write "I wanna Kill myself" in your notebook, again. lol
5rockhard034Hey there, Blu. Long time no see. Remember me?
Good chapter, hope to see most of your work in the future.
It's been a long time since you updated your journal. How have you been doing? How's college been? Hopefully nothings happened that makes you wanna write "I wanna Kill myself" in your notebook, again. lol