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5/21 c13 8CassandraLowery
Really loving this story-I spent all afternoon reading it instead of grading essays. But it was worth it, LOL! :)

Excellent story! Can't wait to see what happens!

xxxooo,
Cassandra :)
5/21 c3 CassandraLowery
I've met some of the "lost boys"-one came to our library and gave a talk. He was amazing. A lot of them have settled in the San Diego area where I live, and their stories are incredible.

Loving this story-so touching!

Warmly,
Cassandra :)
5/12 c13 InMahMind
Are you on a hiatus? Please continue this story! It's far to good to abandone!
4/28 c10 Sarah Amin
Damn , didnt see that one coming .. the cullens have more power and money , why would Ben work for Eleazar when he could take everything from the cullens !
4/28 c9 Sarah Amin
so instead of working with his wife and protecting her , he left her unprotected knowing there's a crazed psycho after her .. i hate him now even more ..
4/28 c7 Sarah Amin
even if he has a valid excuse , i still dont see him doing anything other than provoking her and not telling her why he wasnt man enough for her !
4/28 c6 Sarah Amin
i hate himmmmmm ...
4/28 c5 Sarah Amin
They're major assholes .. she shouldnt have made jenks release that statement .. since they dont want to respect her and leave her alone they dont deserve the same !
4/28 c13 hippie starr
I hope this one gets picked back up soon.
4/28 c4 Sarah Amin
Even if they had some miracle explanation for what they did , nothing excuses them dumping her like that .. They werent just her inlaws , they were her freaking Family !
4/28 c3 Sarah Amin
so basically the cullens are disgusting inhumane vile people .. First he leaves his wife , pregnant at that , then she's beaten and miscarried and they dont have the decency to call or check on her ..
4/28 c2 Sarah Amin
somehow i hate him already .. where are his so called parents that raised her since infancy ..
4/23 c13 Yin - Yang M
Is that guy finally going to tell Bella why he hate her update soon
4/14 c13 misslimelight
Hoping to read more soon. :)
4/4 c2 TheMrsW
More please. ;) It is so hard to find good story lines that are written properly. Please continue.
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