for Forgotten Memories5/23/2012 c9 00FanFic reader00
Wow, how did I forget about this story?
I like it, hope you get an idea to go on.
Wow, how did I forget about this story?
I like it, hope you get an idea to go on.
4/1/2012 c8 Choco
Hello, I really like your Fan Fic Stories, they are so cute and sweet 3
Please I hope you write more and continue the stories with Cornelius and Wilbur :)
Awesome Job with your works 333
Hello, I really like your Fan Fic Stories, they are so cute and sweet 3
Please I hope you write more and continue the stories with Cornelius and Wilbur :)
Awesome Job with your works 333
3/24/2012 c8 
6EmmerzK
okay... so things are looking better... sorta... kinda zooming through aren't ya? no rush ya know :) how's all this connect to wilbur's nightmares and hospital days?
6EmmerzKokay... so things are looking better... sorta... kinda zooming through aren't ya? no rush ya know :) how's all this connect to wilbur's nightmares and hospital days?
3/24/2012 c6 EmmerzK
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HOW COULD YOU! U JUST DESTROYED TODAYLAND AS WE KNOW IT! D8 I'M SO APPALLED RIGHT NOW! Ugh... okay, next chapter :/ :)
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HOW COULD YOU! U JUST DESTROYED TODAYLAND AS WE KNOW IT! D8 I'M SO APPALLED RIGHT NOW! Ugh... okay, next chapter :/ :)
3/6/2012 c5 EmmerzK
good so far! put some bold "xxx" in b/t the changes of time so it isn't so confusing :)
i didn't quite get the significance of strike 1...
Update soon! :)
good so far! put some bold "xxx" in b/t the changes of time so it isn't so confusing :)
i didn't quite get the significance of strike 1...
Update soon! :)
3/6/2012 c4 EmmerzK
oh boy, things just got interesting. He's gonna drink tea w/ queen victoria isn't he? LOL okay jk :)
oh boy, things just got interesting. He's gonna drink tea w/ queen victoria isn't he? LOL okay jk :)
3/6/2012 c3 EmmerzK
dream was good in the sense that it shows what is going on in his subconscious; good! can't wait to see what's gonna happen!
dream was good in the sense that it shows what is going on in his subconscious; good! can't wait to see what's gonna happen!
3/6/2012 c2 EmmerzK
me like :) just a thought for the future though: for your Author's Notes, why don't you bold them so we can tell what are notes and what are chapters? :) Makes it a little easier to read ;) Good job!
me like :) just a thought for the future though: for your Author's Notes, why don't you bold them so we can tell what are notes and what are chapters? :) Makes it a little easier to read ;) Good job!
3/6/2012 c1 EmmerzK
some clone is taking over his mind, isn't it? really liking this story so far! great job! :)
some clone is taking over his mind, isn't it? really liking this story so far! great job! :)
3/5/2012 c6 9theaterinspired
*Gasp* I cant believe that i didnt get updates for this story. That ticks me off because I was fully planning on reviewing every time like I do for most stories I enjoy. Oh well, keep moving forward I guess.
I like where you are going, although it seems like you werent sure that this is where you were going to go from the begining, but then again, you might have had this planned and im just too tired to see it.
Anyway, dont worry about the cliffhanger. It works. If you keep working on them, they will get better, but this is a good one.
Also, as far as confusion, it might also help if you continually post Wilbur as first person. You switched that i think for the first time last chapter and it had me confused. I'd pick a voice from his side of the story and stick to it. But that's just me. Sometimes it makes sense not to do that. I can be wrong, I would be the first to say that.
Anyway, keep going. You have my attention. Dont waste it (not that I think you would). You have tons of potential and its fun to watch you try things out as you write. Thanks for the posts and I swear I'll do better at reading each chapter :D
9theaterinspired*Gasp* I cant believe that i didnt get updates for this story. That ticks me off because I was fully planning on reviewing every time like I do for most stories I enjoy. Oh well, keep moving forward I guess.
I like where you are going, although it seems like you werent sure that this is where you were going to go from the begining, but then again, you might have had this planned and im just too tired to see it.
Anyway, dont worry about the cliffhanger. It works. If you keep working on them, they will get better, but this is a good one.
Also, as far as confusion, it might also help if you continually post Wilbur as first person. You switched that i think for the first time last chapter and it had me confused. I'd pick a voice from his side of the story and stick to it. But that's just me. Sometimes it makes sense not to do that. I can be wrong, I would be the first to say that.
Anyway, keep going. You have my attention. Dont waste it (not that I think you would). You have tons of potential and its fun to watch you try things out as you write. Thanks for the posts and I swear I'll do better at reading each chapter :D
2/26/2012 c5 00FanFic reader00
Lewis is in the story! :D I love him.
This chapter is cool, I just thought it was confusing when it changed from the past to the future. Try to separate a little.
Lewis is in the story! :D I love him.
This chapter is cool, I just thought it was confusing when it changed from the past to the future. Try to separate a little.
2/26/2012 c3 00FanFic reader00
Hey, I just have to say...
first, I'm glad that you continued this story... it's getting more and more interesting.
and I like wilbur's dream, specially when he can hear his dad's voice before waking up.(so cool)
Hey, I just have to say...
first, I'm glad that you continued this story... it's getting more and more interesting.
and I like wilbur's dream, specially when he can hear his dad's voice before waking up.(so cool)
1/30/2012 c2 RedRose2012
"Wilbur looks up to his dad with a cheeky grin "so I'm no longer grounded?" he asks.
"Not quite" his dad says ruffling his hair and Wilbur for once lets him."
Love it :)
It would be nice for the chapters to be longer, but it's still an interesting story so far.
Looking forward to the next update.
"Wilbur looks up to his dad with a cheeky grin "so I'm no longer grounded?" he asks.
"Not quite" his dad says ruffling his hair and Wilbur for once lets him."
Love it :)
It would be nice for the chapters to be longer, but it's still an interesting story so far.
Looking forward to the next update.