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7/8/2012 c9 
17RikuAnimeloverButler
Yep :p I found the time to finish this to find out the story's not finished no! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Seto is a real ** to people...Meanie..T-T..I hate you and what did Atem mean by Seto unfortunately being jou's lover in the past and that Yugi only cared about him cuz he was with jou..T-T..That's kinda mean Yugi but I still love you)
Yes it's a VERY good thing to end a chappie with a lemon it makes lemonade or jou's bad cake expression XD
Riku16
Ps:Norway is awesome like the DMV
17RikuAnimeloverButlerYep :p I found the time to finish this to find out the story's not finished no! PLEASE UPDATE SOON
Seto is a real ** to people...Meanie..T-T..I hate you and what did Atem mean by Seto unfortunately being jou's lover in the past and that Yugi only cared about him cuz he was with jou..T-T..That's kinda mean Yugi but I still love you)
Yes it's a VERY good thing to end a chappie with a lemon it makes lemonade or jou's bad cake expression XD
Riku16
Ps:Norway is awesome like the DMV
6/26/2012 c6 RikuAnimeloverButler
Yeah I can review again first off I just wanna say Im a real big fan of this story,The plot is amazing,It's moving I wanted to cry in the first story I went from hating you to loving you and a mix of the two :D really you killed of grandpa meanie[Yugi's dad was a B*itch I really hated him I so so glad when he died[in da past XD]And wooohooo there devored finally
My favorite story has to be hands down the second part to this the past was great,good,amazing[Kami need a better word]I loved that d*ame waiter he was so awsome giving there free whine[The world needs more people like him]
I died when Atem got all those leather pants and Yugi hit him[The nerve of some people xc]The commet on why girls have so many choices for clothes made me ask myself 'Why do we have so many clothes?
I know I wear skinny jeans[boy]polo's[boy] and for my girl stuff I wear plaid skirts,fishnet tights,arm warmers,bows,hairbands,rubber bands,studded belts,lether pants..XD,checkered shoes,converse,anime T's,band T's,arm bands and eye liner and crosses:D[well most of this is gender newtrul,see if you can guess my style]Mostly all of this is black or white or very dark colors
They could have got married in deilwear where it's legal! Power to the yaoi!
Yugi was a sexy kitty ohhh me likes a lot,Thank you Tea[finally a no bashing Tea story_ ]
I have the same original yugioh deck as Yugi,Joey,Seto,and the dude from 5D's XD took me 1 year and $350 later and there all laminated[yeah so worth it for resell value XD]
Riku16OuT
Yeah I can review again first off I just wanna say Im a real big fan of this story,The plot is amazing,It's moving I wanted to cry in the first story I went from hating you to loving you and a mix of the two :D really you killed of grandpa meanie[Yugi's dad was a B*itch I really hated him I so so glad when he died[in da past XD]And wooohooo there devored finally
My favorite story has to be hands down the second part to this the past was great,good,amazing[Kami need a better word]I loved that d*ame waiter he was so awsome giving there free whine[The world needs more people like him]
I died when Atem got all those leather pants and Yugi hit him[The nerve of some people xc]The commet on why girls have so many choices for clothes made me ask myself 'Why do we have so many clothes?
I know I wear skinny jeans[boy]polo's[boy] and for my girl stuff I wear plaid skirts,fishnet tights,arm warmers,bows,hairbands,rubber bands,studded belts,lether pants..XD,checkered shoes,converse,anime T's,band T's,arm bands and eye liner and crosses:D[well most of this is gender newtrul,see if you can guess my style]Mostly all of this is black or white or very dark colors
They could have got married in deilwear where it's legal! Power to the yaoi!
Yugi was a sexy kitty ohhh me likes a lot,Thank you Tea[finally a no bashing Tea story_ ]
I have the same original yugioh deck as Yugi,Joey,Seto,and the dude from 5D's XD took me 1 year and $350 later and there all laminated[yeah so worth it for resell value XD]
Riku16OuT
6/18/2012 c10 32Nekoyasha12
Hun, I strongly advice taking all your 'petition' uploads down. I did tyne same you're doing and got one of the Admins' to remove one saying it isolated a guideline, which in fact this does.
When I apologized and explained he was quite understanding but said for me not to worry for this wouldn't affect the "mature members".
This meaning that what FF is doing is weeding out members who SHOULD not be posting/writing mature literature. Those of age like you and me will be unaffected. I've noticed that only members who are underage are getting penalized. But if you continue with this 'petition' you too with get a strike-warning.
Please, hun, I deeply love your work and I would absolutely hate too see you penalized for something that's completely not your fault.
Even a friend of mine, s2Teennovelist, she's here on this site, had encountered the same issuer. Here's her say:
SPECIAL NOTE: Apparently there have been a LOT of rumors going on now that FF has reposted a reminded about its not MA policy crap, apparently a bunch of **, trolls and losers on their periods who think they have a right to tell US what qualifies as M-rated stuff and have been reporting anything they don't like to the administration and because they've had no corroboration they'd been listening to them: This was six days ago, since then NO ONE who is a good writer, and barely anyone on the Yugioh fandom has been hit, I'm here to tell everyone to NOT PANIC! First of all, as i said, NO ONE who is more or less a good writer has been hit, this, I think, is something to weed out the underaged and newbies who they don't think should be writing about sex. The administration however is NOT stupid, there have been petitions ALL over this site including another one that it linkable via my fanfic page and viewable here: www dot change dot org /petitions/fanfiction-net-stop-the-destruction-of-fanfiction-net (remove spaced and replace dots). This petition has been going on for six days: it have 26,057 signatures! If the Administration does NOT take this seriously, they are idiots!
With that in mind I'm telling everyone DO NOT PANIC! Do not take down your lemons or go nuts because of this, that is exactly what there trolls want! NO NOT give into them! Just check your ratings and rate everything M for safety, check your summaries so they're k-rated and back up ALL of your stories and reviews. That is my advice.
So please…?
32Nekoyasha12Hun, I strongly advice taking all your 'petition' uploads down. I did tyne same you're doing and got one of the Admins' to remove one saying it isolated a guideline, which in fact this does.
When I apologized and explained he was quite understanding but said for me not to worry for this wouldn't affect the "mature members".
This meaning that what FF is doing is weeding out members who SHOULD not be posting/writing mature literature. Those of age like you and me will be unaffected. I've noticed that only members who are underage are getting penalized. But if you continue with this 'petition' you too with get a strike-warning.
Please, hun, I deeply love your work and I would absolutely hate too see you penalized for something that's completely not your fault.
Even a friend of mine, s2Teennovelist, she's here on this site, had encountered the same issuer. Here's her say:
SPECIAL NOTE: Apparently there have been a LOT of rumors going on now that FF has reposted a reminded about its not MA policy crap, apparently a bunch of **, trolls and losers on their periods who think they have a right to tell US what qualifies as M-rated stuff and have been reporting anything they don't like to the administration and because they've had no corroboration they'd been listening to them: This was six days ago, since then NO ONE who is a good writer, and barely anyone on the Yugioh fandom has been hit, I'm here to tell everyone to NOT PANIC! First of all, as i said, NO ONE who is more or less a good writer has been hit, this, I think, is something to weed out the underaged and newbies who they don't think should be writing about sex. The administration however is NOT stupid, there have been petitions ALL over this site including another one that it linkable via my fanfic page and viewable here: www dot change dot org /petitions/fanfiction-net-stop-the-destruction-of-fanfiction-net (remove spaced and replace dots). This petition has been going on for six days: it have 26,057 signatures! If the Administration does NOT take this seriously, they are idiots!
With that in mind I'm telling everyone DO NOT PANIC! Do not take down your lemons or go nuts because of this, that is exactly what there trolls want! NO NOT give into them! Just check your ratings and rate everything M for safety, check your summaries so they're k-rated and back up ALL of your stories and reviews. That is my advice.
So please…?
4/21/2012 c8 cinderpelt9
I nearly peed my pants when I got the email alert for this chapter! At least Atem's father isn't a total ** like Yugi's. Since discovering fanfiction I have never been able to look at a lemon the same way. ;P And it's not a bad thing to end with a lemon, it's sometimes better to provide a bit of fanservice once in a while. Not that your stories aren't entertaining as it is. Can't wait for more!
I nearly peed my pants when I got the email alert for this chapter! At least Atem's father isn't a total ** like Yugi's. Since discovering fanfiction I have never been able to look at a lemon the same way. ;P And it's not a bad thing to end with a lemon, it's sometimes better to provide a bit of fanservice once in a while. Not that your stories aren't entertaining as it is. Can't wait for more!
4/19/2012 c7 1Foxluna
wow im glad Yugi and Yami were finally able to get married in this life, unlike in all their past lives. also what was with Atem having Yugi's last name instead of Yugi having Atem's last name? and what was the movie called where Yugi, Jaden, and Yusei were all fighting together? cuz i've never seen it at all. hell there's probably alot of things i havn't seen. and if there's more Yu-Gi-Oh! movies out then i hav not seen any of them then. -pouts- so unfair! -whines-
well please make sure to update VERY SOON! please and thank u!
laters,
Fox
also i loved it when Atem said Kaiba could kiss his ** lol INFRONT OF YUGI'S MOTHER NO LESS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA lmao!
wooooo boy! -giggling-
laters!
Fox
1Foxlunawow im glad Yugi and Yami were finally able to get married in this life, unlike in all their past lives. also what was with Atem having Yugi's last name instead of Yugi having Atem's last name? and what was the movie called where Yugi, Jaden, and Yusei were all fighting together? cuz i've never seen it at all. hell there's probably alot of things i havn't seen. and if there's more Yu-Gi-Oh! movies out then i hav not seen any of them then. -pouts- so unfair! -whines-
well please make sure to update VERY SOON! please and thank u!
laters,
Fox
also i loved it when Atem said Kaiba could kiss his ** lol INFRONT OF YUGI'S MOTHER NO LESS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA lmao!
wooooo boy! -giggling-
laters!
Fox
4/8/2012 c7 cinderpelt9
YAAAAAAY! I loved the new chapter, as always you never fail to disappoint Tomyo. Go Jaden Go! At least Yugi didn't have a wrench. X3
YAAAAAAY! I loved the new chapter, as always you never fail to disappoint Tomyo. Go Jaden Go! At least Yugi didn't have a wrench. X3
3/31/2012 c6 cinderpelt9
*squeals loudly* so happy with the new chapter! I liked that sentence too. haha synchro-what? I love references. I love the mountains. I live in colorado so they're right in my backyard. :D
*squeals loudly* so happy with the new chapter! I liked that sentence too. haha synchro-what? I love references. I love the mountains. I live in colorado so they're right in my backyard. :D
3/18/2012 c5 One-With-Darkness
*nosebleed* oh. My. God...best lime ever! Yugoslav so cute!
Noooooo! Cliffhanger! Gah! I wanna read more of your story!
*nosebleed* oh. My. God...best lime ever! Yugoslav so cute!
Noooooo! Cliffhanger! Gah! I wanna read more of your story!