for Shiver8/2/2012 c20 
2hardydrew222
Aboslutely brilliant piece of work! I have to admit, it was damn creepy too! I hope you write more HB/ND stoies sooon! :D
2hardydrew222Aboslutely brilliant piece of work! I have to admit, it was damn creepy too! I hope you write more HB/ND stoies sooon! :D
8/1/2012 c20 Guest
AWESOME IT WAS JUST WOW .IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MADE THESE LETTERS BIGGER
AWESOME IT WAS JUST WOW .IF ONLY I COULD HAVE MADE THESE LETTERS BIGGER
7/27/2012 c20 Lys
Can't wait for ur next story! Happy/sad that Shiver's over, it was gr8!
Can't wait for ur next story! Happy/sad that Shiver's over, it was gr8!
7/27/2012 c20 Lys
hey, thanks for updating :) meanwhile, read all ur other stories, good ones! :) Dom was scary! (yikes!)
hey, thanks for updating :) meanwhile, read all ur other stories, good ones! :) Dom was scary! (yikes!)
7/26/2012 c20 TeamWhoeverHitBellaWithTheCar
wasnt sure about it at first but im glad i kept reading. glad you didnt kill off nancy or joe. SCARY!
wasnt sure about it at first but im glad i kept reading. glad you didnt kill off nancy or joe. SCARY!
7/25/2012 c20 27Liliththestormgoddess
Wow, great story! You wrapped the end up nicely. I enjoyed this story very much.
27LiliththestormgoddessWow, great story! You wrapped the end up nicely. I enjoyed this story very much.
7/25/2012 c20 8rangermaid
Aw...no more... :( Well, guess I'll have to wait for the next one. Well done, a strong ending.
8rangermaidAw...no more... :( Well, guess I'll have to wait for the next one. Well done, a strong ending.
7/25/2012 c20 Cupcake
Omg! This is DEFINITELY one of my most favorite stories! It was so awesome! I can't believe Frank acted like such a b***! Wow.. OOC much? Usually Frank is a little .. er.. nicer to her. I mean if he was in her shoes... Either way - please write more! Like maybe their wedding.. but not just a short fluff story. More like a longer one where something goes horribly wrong. :) I'm so devious..
- Cupcake out! **Peace!**
Omg! This is DEFINITELY one of my most favorite stories! It was so awesome! I can't believe Frank acted like such a b***! Wow.. OOC much? Usually Frank is a little .. er.. nicer to her. I mean if he was in her shoes... Either way - please write more! Like maybe their wedding.. but not just a short fluff story. More like a longer one where something goes horribly wrong. :) I'm so devious..
- Cupcake out! **Peace!**
7/25/2012 c20 10SarahE7191
Wait its over? But there was not nearly enough fluff. Lol. But I loved it anyway. Good work!
10SarahE7191Wait its over? But there was not nearly enough fluff. Lol. But I loved it anyway. Good work!
7/25/2012 c20 Guest
What a great way to end a great story. Looking forward to more soon.
What a great way to end a great story. Looking forward to more soon.
7/25/2012 c20 20Caranath
nice wrap up. even if it does have the rare and unusual concept of *gasp* everyone being straightforward and honest with each other.
looking forward to your next tale!
20Caranathnice wrap up. even if it does have the rare and unusual concept of *gasp* everyone being straightforward and honest with each other.
looking forward to your next tale!
7/25/2012 c20 4nicolelylewis
Amazing story! I loved every minute of it! :D
And Joe is so amazing...he was able to have everyone say what they were feeling, he was the funny man at the perfect moments, and he was the referee! And Frank and Nancy are so cute! Lol
You really did an awesome job! :)
4nicolelylewisAmazing story! I loved every minute of it! :D
And Joe is so amazing...he was able to have everyone say what they were feeling, he was the funny man at the perfect moments, and he was the referee! And Frank and Nancy are so cute! Lol
You really did an awesome job! :)
7/24/2012 c20 78Lady Emily
Aw, lovely ending. I liked seeing the three of them open up to each other, instead of trying to bury their fears. And I'm not surprised that they chose that option rather than seeing a shrink after that particular case lol. Loved Joe joking that he would have been perfectly content to nearly burn to death out of the way somewhere rather than in Frank's apartment.
Poor Nancy, her confession about the unloaded gun was heartbreaking, and Frank reacted to it just as badly as I thought he would. I'm glad Joe was around to get Frank to see that he wasn't really upset with Nancy, just shocked and scared that he'd come even closer to losing her.
Again, great story. You really delivered on the chills, the suspense, and the drama (as usual!) Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us!
78Lady EmilyAw, lovely ending. I liked seeing the three of them open up to each other, instead of trying to bury their fears. And I'm not surprised that they chose that option rather than seeing a shrink after that particular case lol. Loved Joe joking that he would have been perfectly content to nearly burn to death out of the way somewhere rather than in Frank's apartment.
Poor Nancy, her confession about the unloaded gun was heartbreaking, and Frank reacted to it just as badly as I thought he would. I'm glad Joe was around to get Frank to see that he wasn't really upset with Nancy, just shocked and scared that he'd come even closer to losing her.
Again, great story. You really delivered on the chills, the suspense, and the drama (as usual!) Can't wait to see what else you've got in store for us!