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5/7 c16 5middlewife
I loved this epiplogue! Rather than being rushed, I think it is an apt ending to a lovely story. Thank you for all your efforts writing and sharing it.
5/7 c15 middlewife
Yay! I love how well things are working out for them all.
5/7 c14 middlewife
AW, the proposal was lovely. There are really coming along as a family. I just hope whatever Kate is trying to do fails.
5/7 c13 middlewife
What a great birthday!
5/7 c12 middlewife
Its a hard lesson for parents to learn that saying no is actually good for your children. Giving them everything does not teach them what real life is like. Material things can not replace lessons of values, morals, learning to deal with dissappointment and failure. Resilence is an important life skill, learning to use a credit card you never have to foot the bill for yourself is not.
5/7 c11 middlewife
Its nice to see how the ghost of Kate has only lead to Edwards family embracing Bella, rather than rejecting her.
5/7 c10 middlewife
I've been so caught up with the story that I have been terribly rude and not reviewed. I'm loving this stoy and your characterisation so far. You write really well and its a pleasure to read your work :)
4/24 c16 dbpbatm
Loved the epilogue! Fun read. Thank you for sharing this.
4/24 c2 dbpbatm
I've never heard of this reading program but it sounds great!
4/16 c16 momams
I loves the Epilogue! And the whole story, it was wonderful. Thanks gor sharing it!
4/16 c15 momams
Way to go Esme and Bella!
They didn't let Kate's bark scare them, on the contrary, they got ready to fight and they did it more than well.
Plans had to change, but that's life and they did good fighting back.
4/16 c14 momams
I loved the proposal! It was wonderful and perfect for them.
The clinic opening was amazing too, and seeing Marcus and Jo there was great too.
Bertie is adorable!
4/16 c13 momams
I think I might skip looking for the first reference and go to the other two.
It was a great birthday, especially for how confident Mag has become. That's the best part of it. Not that anything else wasn't great.
4/16 c12 momams
It was very different to what Edward had imagined, and it was a huge surprise. Edward is a good guy and wants the best for Mag, as long as she doesn't get hurt. She'll just have more grandparents, any kid has to love that.
4/16 c11 momams
Lets hope the kids forget about the singing bees for a while ;) that was a clise call.
So it seems Marcus and Jo really wanted to see Mag with no hidden agenda. That's a huge relief.
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