for The Missing8/17/2012 c13 spobyfanforever
Awww...It made me sad and happy at the same time :(
Wonderful Story!
Is it finished or will there be more?
Awww...It made me sad and happy at the same time :(
Wonderful Story!
Is it finished or will there be more?
7/2/2012 c13 Guest
amazing. please update soon?
amazing. please update soon?
6/15/2012 c13 StealingSeedsFromAGardenOfHope
I about died reading this. Oh my heavens! I was so worried about what "condition" Holly was going to be in. But I'm past that, I think you did a very good job on this story. It was very interesting and you tapped into Spencer's and Toby's emotions just right, you could see the pain clearly, as in not an overload of grief. There was still fluff. So now I just want to say two things. The first is well done. You should have them trying to adjust back, it would be interesting to see. Difficult, but I think you could do it. It would take a while for Holly to adjust to a new sister, same with Shilo. It would be interesting though. I kind of want to see a little more personality from the kids. Them involved more. But regardless I love it. Also you should add what happened to Holly, her parents not exactly prying, but her opening up when she was ready (she's obviously scared/traumatized that she was taken from her parents). Think about it, even at 6 that would be hard to deal with, at any age. Also, maybe even more of Garret's explanation, news stories, etc. That would be really cool. Okay, have fun writing.
I about died reading this. Oh my heavens! I was so worried about what "condition" Holly was going to be in. But I'm past that, I think you did a very good job on this story. It was very interesting and you tapped into Spencer's and Toby's emotions just right, you could see the pain clearly, as in not an overload of grief. There was still fluff. So now I just want to say two things. The first is well done. You should have them trying to adjust back, it would be interesting to see. Difficult, but I think you could do it. It would take a while for Holly to adjust to a new sister, same with Shilo. It would be interesting though. I kind of want to see a little more personality from the kids. Them involved more. But regardless I love it. Also you should add what happened to Holly, her parents not exactly prying, but her opening up when she was ready (she's obviously scared/traumatized that she was taken from her parents). Think about it, even at 6 that would be hard to deal with, at any age. Also, maybe even more of Garret's explanation, news stories, etc. That would be really cool. Okay, have fun writing.
5/30/2012 c13 Chloe
Update. Update. Update. Update. Update. Pleeeaaseeee I love this story :)
Update. Update. Update. Update. Update. Pleeeaaseeee I love this story :)
5/18/2012 c13 
2PurpleLover91399
Wow ok I read this story and now i caught up.
Can you PLEEEEASE update soon?
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G story!
2PurpleLover91399Wow ok I read this story and now i caught up.
Can you PLEEEEASE update soon?
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G story!
5/10/2012 c3 2PurpleLover91399
Hey do you know the song, "God Gave Me You" by Blake...uh Shelton I think?
2PurpleLover91399Hey do you know the song, "God Gave Me You" by Blake...uh Shelton I think?
4/30/2012 c13 2Tiva Shaye
Loved the flashbacks and hope to find out more about what happened those three years to Holly:)
2Tiva ShayeLoved the flashbacks and hope to find out more about what happened those three years to Holly:)
4/30/2012 c12 5Prettylittlefan
Oh my god that's terrible! I'm a little late but of course I'll spread the word. xx
5PrettylittlefanOh my god that's terrible! I'm a little late but of course I'll spread the word. xx
4/29/2012 c13 2HesMkngUScrmWitHisHndsOnUrHips
Please give Ezria a miracle baby. That part made me cry so hard.
2HesMkngUScrmWitHisHndsOnUrHipsPlease give Ezria a miracle baby. That part made me cry so hard.
4/28/2012 c13 c
this is so gooood
this is so gooood
4/28/2012 c13 11Golden Immortality
Great chapter, I loved the end with them all laying together. :) please upate soon.
11Golden ImmortalityGreat chapter, I loved the end with them all laying together. :) please upate soon.
4/28/2012 c13 tweetsaboutpll
AMAZING. wow this was such a good chapter! Your story is amazing! :) the only feedback I could give would be to have some toby and spencer alone scenes. or a face off with garret and jenna! i love the flashbacks too
AMAZING. wow this was such a good chapter! Your story is amazing! :) the only feedback I could give would be to have some toby and spencer alone scenes. or a face off with garret and jenna! i love the flashbacks too
4/28/2012 c13 7Music and Angels
Wonderful chapter! I love all the flashbacks mixed with the current story. I am so happy they're all safe and sound now, and that Shiloh got to meet her sister! It was so sweet when she called Holly pretty. I can see them becoming very good friends, unlike Spencer and Melissa as children. Anyway, amazing update and please write more!
7Music and AngelsWonderful chapter! I love all the flashbacks mixed with the current story. I am so happy they're all safe and sound now, and that Shiloh got to meet her sister! It was so sweet when she called Holly pretty. I can see them becoming very good friends, unlike Spencer and Melissa as children. Anyway, amazing update and please write more!