for Misty Secret1/30 c13 ARavenDetached
That was...aaaaahhhhhhhh. (Nervous laugh)
Despite the confusion, I loved it. The story and concept was so ointresting and unique that it could be its own story. But some of the hooking vagueness would have been lost if time was spent developing charachters. Since it didn't say complete I was terrified it would just end and not resolve envy thing, but it does, thank God.
Looking foreword to the sequel.
That was...aaaaahhhhhhhh. (Nervous laugh)
Despite the confusion, I loved it. The story and concept was so ointresting and unique that it could be its own story. But some of the hooking vagueness would have been lost if time was spent developing charachters. Since it didn't say complete I was terrified it would just end and not resolve envy thing, but it does, thank God.
Looking foreword to the sequel.
1/30/2012 c13 
13ckittykatty
Djinni: a spritual embodiment of nature. an ice djinni would fall under mercury djinni class, correct? cant wait for the next one, this was a bit confusing, for the first half, i thought danny was a halfa
13ckittykattyDjinni: a spritual embodiment of nature. an ice djinni would fall under mercury djinni class, correct? cant wait for the next one, this was a bit confusing, for the first half, i thought danny was a halfa
1/30/2012 c13 Spider's Claw
I fear that this has far to quickly grown on to me. The story, now that I understand it more, is quite interesting to read and held my attention throughout each chapter. Its only fault is the short chapters, they leave me leaving more.
As a suggestion, you could merge together some of your next chapters to extend their length.
I hate to criticize on an AU story like this, but regardless of the circumstances some of the characters, seem to be out of character. Not enough to make people turn away from this story (as far as I can tell), but enough to annoy a few readers.
In the end, great job and I look forward to reading more to this unique tale.
I fear that this has far to quickly grown on to me. The story, now that I understand it more, is quite interesting to read and held my attention throughout each chapter. Its only fault is the short chapters, they leave me leaving more.
As a suggestion, you could merge together some of your next chapters to extend their length.
I hate to criticize on an AU story like this, but regardless of the circumstances some of the characters, seem to be out of character. Not enough to make people turn away from this story (as far as I can tell), but enough to annoy a few readers.
In the end, great job and I look forward to reading more to this unique tale.