for Darkness1/28/2012 c1 
5Sadie Sil - English stories
Sad and beautiful. Some lines touched me deeply. You are a great writer.
Sadie
5Sadie Sil - English storiesSad and beautiful. Some lines touched me deeply. You are a great writer.
Sadie
1/28/2012 c1 41Mornen
Another story that is going to make me cry. Especially the line about the weaver. In a moment of despair, she would seem almost uncaring, aloof.
The style was very strange, whatwith the spontaneous rhythming, but it was still quite good.
41MornenAnother story that is going to make me cry. Especially the line about the weaver. In a moment of despair, she would seem almost uncaring, aloof.
The style was very strange, whatwith the spontaneous rhythming, but it was still quite good.
1/28/2012 c1 27CrackinAndProudOfIt
I loved it! That was dark, intense, and emotional. I liked the style of the poem, the interspersed rhymes, and all of your word choices. I'll admit that at first I was unsure of whose perspective it was, but I got it figured out after reading Galad Estel's review. :) Awesome work!
-Crackers
27CrackinAndProudOfItI loved it! That was dark, intense, and emotional. I liked the style of the poem, the interspersed rhymes, and all of your word choices. I'll admit that at first I was unsure of whose perspective it was, but I got it figured out after reading Galad Estel's review. :) Awesome work!
-Crackers
1/28/2012 c1 20Galad Estel
I have always felt sorry for Elwing's brothers, poor children. They hadn't done anything wrong.
20Galad EstelI have always felt sorry for Elwing's brothers, poor children. They hadn't done anything wrong.