for Ocular7/8/2012 c1 
5Daedalus370
Greetings, authoress, and, as you may have guessed, I am here to review. A few hours ago I read this one "The Crow" fan-fic of yours from 2005 and was astounded by your vocabulary and ability to piece shattered thoughts together, so I decided to check out something more recent, hence here I am:
You seem to have kept the same style over the years - short paragraphs filled with thoughts, colourful wordplay, and decent description. I don't think I understood what the colons and the parentheses meant in either story beyond quasi-voiced thought, meaning that I probably need to visit these Valdemar books myself, but everything pieced themselves together into a tapestry of lovely things. Good work.
Next up, I love your characters' names and personae; Never have I come across a name like "Robur", and only once have I seen the name "Teva"; they roll off the tongue without getting annoying as I stroll along the chapter, and cuddly personalities make them that much more enjoyable.
Altogether, this was an amusing story filled with lots of fun stuff, and while it served almost no plot I enjoyed reading about these characters, making this a rare case for a one-shot. I'm glad to see that the "The Crow" story caught my eye, and I wish you the best in the rest of your stories new and old. Adieu, and may your skills as a wordsmith never falter.
5Daedalus370Greetings, authoress, and, as you may have guessed, I am here to review. A few hours ago I read this one "The Crow" fan-fic of yours from 2005 and was astounded by your vocabulary and ability to piece shattered thoughts together, so I decided to check out something more recent, hence here I am:
You seem to have kept the same style over the years - short paragraphs filled with thoughts, colourful wordplay, and decent description. I don't think I understood what the colons and the parentheses meant in either story beyond quasi-voiced thought, meaning that I probably need to visit these Valdemar books myself, but everything pieced themselves together into a tapestry of lovely things. Good work.
Next up, I love your characters' names and personae; Never have I come across a name like "Robur", and only once have I seen the name "Teva"; they roll off the tongue without getting annoying as I stroll along the chapter, and cuddly personalities make them that much more enjoyable.
Altogether, this was an amusing story filled with lots of fun stuff, and while it served almost no plot I enjoyed reading about these characters, making this a rare case for a one-shot. I'm glad to see that the "The Crow" story caught my eye, and I wish you the best in the rest of your stories new and old. Adieu, and may your skills as a wordsmith never falter.
1/31/2012 c1 Trinati
I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. You have my attention. I've been sitting here for hours and I still can't blink!
I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. You have my attention. I've been sitting here for hours and I still can't blink!
1/29/2012 c1 2MCH
Saw that Dr who episode poor Alex did he know what he was going himself into when Teva.
Thanks for the story and the laugh. is this a one chapter or is there some more. (Puppy eyes).
2MCHSaw that Dr who episode poor Alex did he know what he was going himself into when Teva.
Thanks for the story and the laugh. is this a one chapter or is there some more. (Puppy eyes).
1/28/2012 c1 Gwendolene Mac
Very cute, nice to see a Companion with an Interesting point of view...Poor Alex... Thanks for the smile!
Very cute, nice to see a Companion with an Interesting point of view...Poor Alex... Thanks for the smile!