for Less Than Perfection8/28/2012 c1 
12IrishPanther
May I say that this was a good one-shot you've written. I love the bond that you have Molly and Lucy go through, and all between a subject I will not bring up here (or a word that I won't say since others could read this review...).
Lucy feeling nervous about what she wants to do, Molly calming her down and opening up...this I rarely read from any fic and yet, I've read it and it seems normal to me. Maybe it's my instincts kicking in, but I was glad to see Molly being protective of Lucy (with a few threats here and there...)
I found no grammatical errors while reading, so a job well done on that! Once again, nice one-shot you've written as I enjoyed reading it! :)
12IrishPantherMay I say that this was a good one-shot you've written. I love the bond that you have Molly and Lucy go through, and all between a subject I will not bring up here (or a word that I won't say since others could read this review...).
Lucy feeling nervous about what she wants to do, Molly calming her down and opening up...this I rarely read from any fic and yet, I've read it and it seems normal to me. Maybe it's my instincts kicking in, but I was glad to see Molly being protective of Lucy (with a few threats here and there...)
I found no grammatical errors while reading, so a job well done on that! Once again, nice one-shot you've written as I enjoyed reading it! :)
3/24/2012 c1 121MissingMommy
Lucy and Molly in this piece reminds me a lot of me and my sister. We promised to tell each other everything even if we lied to our dad about it.
When you wrote the part about Lucy's poem, I realized it was sort of linked to a Challenge of Epic Proportions.
But you characterized Lucy and Molly wonderfully and I really liked it.
Overall, lovely
121MissingMommyLucy and Molly in this piece reminds me a lot of me and my sister. We promised to tell each other everything even if we lied to our dad about it.
When you wrote the part about Lucy's poem, I realized it was sort of linked to a Challenge of Epic Proportions.
But you characterized Lucy and Molly wonderfully and I really liked it.
Overall, lovely
3/22/2012 c1 9MissSadieKane
I really liked this. I know next to nothing about Lucy and Molly so I couldn't tell you whether or not they were in character, but I thought this was really realistic. I like the idea of Lucy and Lysander being together and I like it that she is nervous seeing as this her first time. Molly is a really good sister, and all her advice is really good. That night really doesn't sound like the best first time at all. Poor Molly. I hope it goes sweetly and smoothly for Lucy.
9MissSadieKaneI really liked this. I know next to nothing about Lucy and Molly so I couldn't tell you whether or not they were in character, but I thought this was really realistic. I like the idea of Lucy and Lysander being together and I like it that she is nervous seeing as this her first time. Molly is a really good sister, and all her advice is really good. That night really doesn't sound like the best first time at all. Poor Molly. I hope it goes sweetly and smoothly for Lucy.
1/29/2012 c1 60OCDdegrassi
This was awesome! He treated her breasts like stress balls? Classic. So many guys are the same way. And let me tell you what, if a guy played Disturbed while I was having sex, I would smack him! This was very realistic, yet also humorous, and I love the sisterly bond. Awesome job.
60OCDdegrassiThis was awesome! He treated her breasts like stress balls? Classic. So many guys are the same way. And let me tell you what, if a guy played Disturbed while I was having sex, I would smack him! This was very realistic, yet also humorous, and I love the sisterly bond. Awesome job.
1/29/2012 c1 24keeptheotherone
This is sweet. It feels like a real relationship between sisters, and both Lucy's nervousness and Molly's embarrassment were realistic as well.
24keeptheotheroneThis is sweet. It feels like a real relationship between sisters, and both Lucy's nervousness and Molly's embarrassment were realistic as well.
1/28/2012 c1 1293 Diagon Alley
This was great! I'd never read a fic highlighting the relationship between Molly and Lucy before. I really liked this, great job :)
1293 Diagon AlleyThis was great! I'd never read a fic highlighting the relationship between Molly and Lucy before. I really liked this, great job :)