for An Act Of Fate2/26 c9 
7Mrs. Shelley Black
This is so very good, but I think you need to get rid of Jane he always tired of his whore quickly.
And after Anne had given him his long awaited son he would not have treated her so poorly and with ill-discassed contempt.
7Mrs. Shelley BlackThis is so very good, but I think you need to get rid of Jane he always tired of his whore quickly.
And after Anne had given him his long awaited son he would not have treated her so poorly and with ill-discassed contempt.
2/23 c1 french girl 2
Sorry for this, a mistake from my part. I did not intend toi send thé previous message since it wasn't complete.
I was saying that if you tant to add France to the United Kingdom in this story, it is your right.
But please note that you cannot include King Francis in this fic or any other french character. And if you don't mind, could you please also add to your list of historical changes that you decided to erase the history of my country and my country itself from the map?
Thanks a lot.
Sorry for this, a mistake from my part. I did not intend toi send thé previous message since it wasn't complete.
I was saying that if you tant to add France to the United Kingdom in this story, it is your right.
But please note that you cannot include King Francis in this fic or any other french character. And if you don't mind, could you please also add to your list of historical changes that you decided to erase the history of my country and my country itself from the map?
Thanks a lot.
2/23 c1 french girl
Greetings.
I don't presume to know the history of my country by heart but as a french girl, I can tell you with certainty that Anne Boleyn never was crowned Queen of my country. Since this is a fanfiction, you are free to do as you wish. But since you went to great lengths to explain all the changes you made in this story compaired with, please add
Greetings.
I don't presume to know the history of my country by heart but as a french girl, I can tell you with certainty that Anne Boleyn never was crowned Queen of my country. Since this is a fanfiction, you are free to do as you wish. But since you went to great lengths to explain all the changes you made in this story compaired with, please add
2/4 c9 cheriblossem
Its been a long time since my last review. Your story is really sad and great. I can really feel the pain of anne. How much can she take? She deserves so much more and better. I really start to hate henry..not knowing what he wants and what he does to anne. I hope anne does something.. charles..i like him (in your story that is)hope the friendschip between anne and him grows. And please get rid of that whore..excuse me for my language. I have so much hate for jane in this story. Anyways lovely chapter please update soon!
Its been a long time since my last review. Your story is really sad and great. I can really feel the pain of anne. How much can she take? She deserves so much more and better. I really start to hate henry..not knowing what he wants and what he does to anne. I hope anne does something.. charles..i like him (in your story that is)hope the friendschip between anne and him grows. And please get rid of that whore..excuse me for my language. I have so much hate for jane in this story. Anyways lovely chapter please update soon!
12/20/2012 c9 1LadyShard
This has to be one of the most exceptional pieces of work I've read in a long time. Original concept that no their marriage does not get better with the birth of a son. Its something that needs to be worked on and faced. I hpoe you update soon.
1LadyShardThis has to be one of the most exceptional pieces of work I've read in a long time. Original concept that no their marriage does not get better with the birth of a son. Its something that needs to be worked on and faced. I hpoe you update soon.
12/2/2012 c9 11asiacheetah
Regarding your question of the Jane, Anne, and Henry love triangle, it's not much of one since Jane is so completely not in love with the king. In fact, I hate Henry so much, I want him to divorce Anne so that she could find happiness with some one much more deserving.
I'm interested in seeing how Anne and Mary's relationship develop. Charles Brandon's sympathy toward the queen's distress was also interesting to see and I half want them to become friends and maybe even more.
11asiacheetahRegarding your question of the Jane, Anne, and Henry love triangle, it's not much of one since Jane is so completely not in love with the king. In fact, I hate Henry so much, I want him to divorce Anne so that she could find happiness with some one much more deserving.
I'm interested in seeing how Anne and Mary's relationship develop. Charles Brandon's sympathy toward the queen's distress was also interesting to see and I half want them to become friends and maybe even more.
11/29/2012 c9 nesciamema
Can't wait to figure out the october surprise! And go Anne, I think a bit of his own medicine is in order...
Can't wait to figure out the october surprise! And go Anne, I think a bit of his own medicine is in order...