for Burn Series I: Fire4/23/2012 c27 Mnmmmufadkuhgdeyu
I get really sad when I don't see updates :/
I get really sad when I don't see updates :/
4/23/2012 c27 
10pirate-princess1
I love this! Update soon! Thanks so much for the comment about my blog. I loved it! It made me want to go on tumblr more! Update soon! :)
10pirate-princess1I love this! Update soon! Thanks so much for the comment about my blog. I loved it! It made me want to go on tumblr more! Update soon! :)
4/23/2012 c27 Violet
Love your story so so much!
Love your story so so much!
4/22/2012 c17 ArtemisDestiny
Loving the story so far, can't wait to read more! I really want Madge to survive, and I am curious about the Gus's motives. Keep up the good work
Loving the story so far, can't wait to read more! I really want Madge to survive, and I am curious about the Gus's motives. Keep up the good work
4/22/2012 c27 23alindy
Ok, sorry I haven't reviewed yet, but this story is so freakin' good that I couldn't waste the time pausing to review until this point.
1. Your characterization is phenomenal. I love how you display every character because none of them are to far from what I envision them. You kept them who they are and still bended them perfectly for what you wanted to do, good job!
2. The plot is riveting. Like I said, I have honestly been reading this all day non-stop. I'm consistently on the edge of my seat and I can not WAIT to see what happens next. The way you crafted this Hunger Games that Madge is in is so believable I'm honestly really impressed. It sounds like Suzanne could have created it
3.Your grammar is good, besides for a few sentences where it seems you may have either misplaced words or forgotten them. These are most likely typing errors that would be fixed with a quick read-through, but they really aren't that bad. It wasn't horribly distracting.
Please update soon! This story is so good and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Happy Writing (:
23alindyOk, sorry I haven't reviewed yet, but this story is so freakin' good that I couldn't waste the time pausing to review until this point.
1. Your characterization is phenomenal. I love how you display every character because none of them are to far from what I envision them. You kept them who they are and still bended them perfectly for what you wanted to do, good job!
2. The plot is riveting. Like I said, I have honestly been reading this all day non-stop. I'm consistently on the edge of my seat and I can not WAIT to see what happens next. The way you crafted this Hunger Games that Madge is in is so believable I'm honestly really impressed. It sounds like Suzanne could have created it
3.Your grammar is good, besides for a few sentences where it seems you may have either misplaced words or forgotten them. These are most likely typing errors that would be fixed with a quick read-through, but they really aren't that bad. It wasn't horribly distracting.
Please update soon! This story is so good and I can't wait to see where it goes.
Happy Writing (:
4/22/2012 c27 pyatpree
the gale/rory relationship is so cute and i love the dymanic in the careers. keep writing!
the gale/rory relationship is so cute and i love the dymanic in the careers. keep writing!
4/21/2012 c27 lilyland10177
I was so exited to see your update in my inbox and thanks for the luck for my exams, I definitely need some!
I was really excited to see a Gale POV this chapter. I feel bad for him sometimes because he seems like someone who needs to act so being unable to do anything for Madge must be killing him. Not only that, but the poor guy can't seem to catch a break when it comes to women. I'm surprised that he hasn't volunteered for monkshood or something considering that every girl her falls in love with gets sentence to possible death.
You mentioned your concern about making the action more clear and I can definitely say that you have nothing to worry about with this chapter. Not only was it action packed, but it was easy to understand what was going on. I really like how you've put a lot of detail into the District 3 tributes. I don't think anyone suspected them as a viable threat when you first introduced them and it'll be sad to see them die (I'm assuming that there going to die sooner or later) because they're so clever.
I didn't see Gus being gay at all! Did you plan that from the beginning? I was always rooting for a side romance between Gus and Madge but now that I see it as more of a brotherly figure, it'll take me some time to adjust. I'm really concerned with him being injured through, considering that I really don't want to see him die yet. At least, I don't want to see him die before Calista and Clarity do.
I think you did a great job on the ending scene with Madge and Brooklyn. I get why she did it and I think she did the right thing killing her quickly rather than leaving her there to suffer. I really wonder how the viewers are going to interpret her actions,considering that Gale couldn't hear what she was mumbling to her. She could be seen as either a mercy killer or a vicious one thats willing to take out an opponent when they're weak. Regardless, I think the viewers know that Madge isn't beyond killing tributes and with Clarity assuming the alliance is broken, there is bound to be a lot of violence in the future.
I really hope you found some new inspiration to help to get over your writing block. I completely understand how difficult it is to write when you've reached a roadblock. Making music playlist for characters, discussing with readers there theories on your plot and improving with random words usually help me get out of my writer funks. Hopefully you find ways to cope with yours. Anyways, you've managed to once again make me hang onto everyone work and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter :)
I was so exited to see your update in my inbox and thanks for the luck for my exams, I definitely need some!
I was really excited to see a Gale POV this chapter. I feel bad for him sometimes because he seems like someone who needs to act so being unable to do anything for Madge must be killing him. Not only that, but the poor guy can't seem to catch a break when it comes to women. I'm surprised that he hasn't volunteered for monkshood or something considering that every girl her falls in love with gets sentence to possible death.
You mentioned your concern about making the action more clear and I can definitely say that you have nothing to worry about with this chapter. Not only was it action packed, but it was easy to understand what was going on. I really like how you've put a lot of detail into the District 3 tributes. I don't think anyone suspected them as a viable threat when you first introduced them and it'll be sad to see them die (I'm assuming that there going to die sooner or later) because they're so clever.
I didn't see Gus being gay at all! Did you plan that from the beginning? I was always rooting for a side romance between Gus and Madge but now that I see it as more of a brotherly figure, it'll take me some time to adjust. I'm really concerned with him being injured through, considering that I really don't want to see him die yet. At least, I don't want to see him die before Calista and Clarity do.
I think you did a great job on the ending scene with Madge and Brooklyn. I get why she did it and I think she did the right thing killing her quickly rather than leaving her there to suffer. I really wonder how the viewers are going to interpret her actions,considering that Gale couldn't hear what she was mumbling to her. She could be seen as either a mercy killer or a vicious one thats willing to take out an opponent when they're weak. Regardless, I think the viewers know that Madge isn't beyond killing tributes and with Clarity assuming the alliance is broken, there is bound to be a lot of violence in the future.
I really hope you found some new inspiration to help to get over your writing block. I completely understand how difficult it is to write when you've reached a roadblock. Making music playlist for characters, discussing with readers there theories on your plot and improving with random words usually help me get out of my writer funks. Hopefully you find ways to cope with yours. Anyways, you've managed to once again make me hang onto everyone work and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapter :)
4/21/2012 c27 61A Fire in the Attic
Aw, man, this is pretty fabulous. Considering that it's told from so many separate points of view, I'm very impressed with the continuity. Great job. :)
61A Fire in the AtticAw, man, this is pretty fabulous. Considering that it's told from so many separate points of view, I'm very impressed with the continuity. Great job. :)
4/21/2012 c27 7BlossomOnATree
Oh wow! Gus is gay? Thats great! Lol and I think it's funny that Gale thinks its great too :)
UD soon!
7BlossomOnATreeOh wow! Gus is gay? Thats great! Lol and I think it's funny that Gale thinks its great too :)
UD soon!
4/21/2012 c27 1ThatChick101
Ahh you updated! I flipped when I saw this! Dude I'm freaking out so bad right now! Oh and thanks for the birthday wish :D But anyways, throughout all of that I was just holding my breath, hoping that Madge would survive. Thank God she did! Man this is getting intense, I was really scared that Gus was going to be killed by those traps. At least it was only a few careers, that's less people that Madge has to get rid of. And WOAH, Gus is gay, didn't see that coming AT ALL! I could have sworn that he was straightand had a little crush on Madge, but I'm glad I was wrong. Now Gale doesn't have to worry about losing her to some guy she met in the games. This chapter was amazing, please update again as soon as you can! :)
1ThatChick101Ahh you updated! I flipped when I saw this! Dude I'm freaking out so bad right now! Oh and thanks for the birthday wish :D But anyways, throughout all of that I was just holding my breath, hoping that Madge would survive. Thank God she did! Man this is getting intense, I was really scared that Gus was going to be killed by those traps. At least it was only a few careers, that's less people that Madge has to get rid of. And WOAH, Gus is gay, didn't see that coming AT ALL! I could have sworn that he was straightand had a little crush on Madge, but I'm glad I was wrong. Now Gale doesn't have to worry about losing her to some guy she met in the games. This chapter was amazing, please update again as soon as you can! :)
4/21/2012 c27 K
as;slgkd'sa omg its so amazing lol, please update soon!
as;slgkd'sa omg its so amazing lol, please update soon!
4/21/2012 c27 Guest
Love this, the writing is great and the storyline is very suspenseful.
Love this, the writing is great and the storyline is very suspenseful.