for A Game of Annoyance6/9/2012 c4 Annie
I read a review on this chapter that accussed you of copying another piece of work but I have to say: there are many fics on the pairing were they go to a place with a lake (sometimes even a waterfall) and they end up skinny dippping and having sex, that doesn't mean you copied that specific author...it's a very commonly used idea. Anyway enough of my ranting, I loved Danny having to approve of Steve's plans it was hilarious! The part about Old Friends was good too and I like that you linked the annoyances thing with the title of the fic. Hope you'll be coming back with more; please update soon!
I read a review on this chapter that accussed you of copying another piece of work but I have to say: there are many fics on the pairing were they go to a place with a lake (sometimes even a waterfall) and they end up skinny dippping and having sex, that doesn't mean you copied that specific author...it's a very commonly used idea. Anyway enough of my ranting, I loved Danny having to approve of Steve's plans it was hilarious! The part about Old Friends was good too and I like that you linked the annoyances thing with the title of the fic. Hope you'll be coming back with more; please update soon!
6/9/2012 c3 Annie
The first part was so hot: that was certainly an effective way to get Kono to tell. I ike that you didn't have Steve make a huge speech asking Kono to move in because that would've been OOC, the actions thing seemed more accurate for him. Now I shall read the final chapter.
The first part was so hot: that was certainly an effective way to get Kono to tell. I ike that you didn't have Steve make a huge speech asking Kono to move in because that would've been OOC, the actions thing seemed more accurate for him. Now I shall read the final chapter.
6/9/2012 c2 Annie
I'm glad that instead of the usual Chin threatening Steve like in most Steve/Kono fics, you also had Danny not excatly threatening but telling Kono not to hurt Steve. I loved relationship counsellor Danny, so hilarious! As was the last part. Now I shall read the next chapters.
I'm glad that instead of the usual Chin threatening Steve like in most Steve/Kono fics, you also had Danny not excatly threatening but telling Kono not to hurt Steve. I loved relationship counsellor Danny, so hilarious! As was the last part. Now I shall read the next chapters.
6/9/2012 c1 Annie
Are these things that annoy the both of them? Anyway great idea and hilarious as well. My favourite was Judgements because some of the issues you brought up there are realistc repercussion of sleeping with your superior. Now I'm gonna read the other 3 chapters!
Are these things that annoy the both of them? Anyway great idea and hilarious as well. My favourite was Judgements because some of the issues you brought up there are realistc repercussion of sleeping with your superior. Now I'm gonna read the other 3 chapters!
3/11/2012 c4 sphekie
Good chapter so far, we finally get to see his past ex gf. Wondering if kono will be jealous if Tina want Steve back..I dunno..just a thought.
Luv Danny giving or approve Steve romantic plan.
Good chapter so far, we finally get to see his past ex gf. Wondering if kono will be jealous if Tina want Steve back..I dunno..just a thought.
Luv Danny giving or approve Steve romantic plan.
3/10/2012 c4 
36francis2
Thank you for this. Ideas huh? How about: Navy-Tidyness, Unability to sleep in, something about food, nosy cousins, meddling parents, annoying hobbies, habits like leaving the toothpaste uncapped...
36francis2Thank you for this. Ideas huh? How about: Navy-Tidyness, Unability to sleep in, something about food, nosy cousins, meddling parents, annoying hobbies, habits like leaving the toothpaste uncapped...
3/9/2012 c4 3TvFanatic97
I liked this chapter, it was hilarious but I kind of feel like you took aspects of other people's fics which the authors may not be happy about. I guess it's sad that you won't be updating soon but if it means your focus is now on Close Proximity then that's good!
3TvFanatic97I liked this chapter, it was hilarious but I kind of feel like you took aspects of other people's fics which the authors may not be happy about. I guess it's sad that you won't be updating soon but if it means your focus is now on Close Proximity then that's good!
3/9/2012 c4 anon
'He's quite possessive and animalistic'
'fresh water lake'
'Skinny dipping'
So, I begin reading this and it's really good and funny and interesting and yes, that first part where Kono's describing sex with Steve gets me all hot and bothered too. But by the end of the first part alone, something bugs me. It's almost like I've read this before and then I realize why. But you have stolen ideas from another fic that was posted only last night; 'The Description of Us'. Stealing ideas from another author's fic is wrong, unless you have permission. If that is true, please state it. If you haven't got permission, then I suggest you ask for it after-hand from the author before they read this and reports you to the bots.
Good fic other wise.
'He's quite possessive and animalistic'
'fresh water lake'
'Skinny dipping'
So, I begin reading this and it's really good and funny and interesting and yes, that first part where Kono's describing sex with Steve gets me all hot and bothered too. But by the end of the first part alone, something bugs me. It's almost like I've read this before and then I realize why. But you have stolen ideas from another fic that was posted only last night; 'The Description of Us'. Stealing ideas from another author's fic is wrong, unless you have permission. If that is true, please state it. If you haven't got permission, then I suggest you ask for it after-hand from the author before they read this and reports you to the bots.
Good fic other wise.
2/29/2012 c3 3TvFanatic97
I hadn't realised you'd updated this story! Brilliant chapter especially the beginning part ;) can't wait for your next chapter!
3TvFanatic97I hadn't realised you'd updated this story! Brilliant chapter especially the beginning part ;) can't wait for your next chapter!
2/27/2012 c3 sphekie
Yay u r back!
The scene w/Steve & kono was hot... luv how Danny alway putting his 2 cents in..He crack me up. The chapter was amazing..I luv everything about it...good job on ur work! :D
Yay u r back!
The scene w/Steve & kono was hot... luv how Danny alway putting his 2 cents in..He crack me up. The chapter was amazing..I luv everything about it...good job on ur work! :D
2/26/2012 c3 DaReelDeel
Another great chapter. You should write them in the bedroom more often ;) Steve and Kono are so cute. More Danny! He's awesome.
Another great chapter. You should write them in the bedroom more often ;) Steve and Kono are so cute. More Danny! He's awesome.
2/17/2012 c2 Amanda
I've just realised I hadn't read this before and I'm glad I found it. It's funny and I like how you write Steve/Kono although I'm surprised you don't have way more reviews! Update soon please!
I've just realised I hadn't read this before and I'm glad I found it. It's funny and I like how you write Steve/Kono although I'm surprised you don't have way more reviews! Update soon please!