for goldeneye2: revenge of the russias9/8/2012 c1 
10Lewis Moore
Hideous spelling and English. No offense, but I don't think you're cut out for writing stories in English.
10Lewis MooreHideous spelling and English. No offense, but I don't think you're cut out for writing stories in English.
6/29/2012 c4 Guest
But seriously. If you're gonna write a story, here are some pointers:
1) Make double sure that everything is spelled and used correctly
2) Don't make the ending so fecking dumb
3) Don't write unless you have a good story to tell
But seriously. If you're gonna write a story, here are some pointers:
1) Make double sure that everything is spelled and used correctly
2) Don't make the ending so fecking dumb
3) Don't write unless you have a good story to tell
6/28/2012 c4 Guest
Oh thank God kicking someone in the crotch killed them!
Oh thank God kicking someone in the crotch killed them!
3/4/2012 c2 IDIOTICFAN
No offense man, but you cannot write nor spell. I hope you go to school, so you can learn English.
No offense man, but you cannot write nor spell. I hope you go to school, so you can learn English.
2/3/2012 c1 63RebaForever15
Sorry but this isn't a great start for you. Your English and general spelling is terrible. If your going to write here then get a spell check first.
63RebaForever15Sorry but this isn't a great start for you. Your English and general spelling is terrible. If your going to write here then get a spell check first.