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1Liwliwa-Janoah
Well it was interesting to see the Past of Kul Elna, but I can't believe that the Pharoah would order the massacre of an entire village, that's inhumane! They both killed people to stay alive. I honestly thought he was gonna hold her captive for a little longer. You began to confuse me: you said that the dragon was in her body and she was on the ground and looked up and saw herself shimmering with wings? I'm confused. If the dragon is in her body, shouldn't she be the one floating in the air? Please clarify that scene. And the dragon took over her body when Bakura showed up and tried to run away but got caught because it's not as fast a runner as she is? So why didn't she just run instead (or was she incapable of doing this because he knocked her unconcious? But if he did knock her unconcious how can an unconcious body run?
1Liwliwa-JanoahWell it was interesting to see the Past of Kul Elna, but I can't believe that the Pharoah would order the massacre of an entire village, that's inhumane! They both killed people to stay alive. I honestly thought he was gonna hold her captive for a little longer. You began to confuse me: you said that the dragon was in her body and she was on the ground and looked up and saw herself shimmering with wings? I'm confused. If the dragon is in her body, shouldn't she be the one floating in the air? Please clarify that scene. And the dragon took over her body when Bakura showed up and tried to run away but got caught because it's not as fast a runner as she is? So why didn't she just run instead (or was she incapable of doing this because he knocked her unconcious? But if he did knock her unconcious how can an unconcious body run?
2/26 c7 Liwliwa-Janoah
Great Chapter! What are all those shippings? Am I that behind on Anime or is that just a fanfic thing? Kisara and King of Thieves Bakura grew up in Kul Elna..interesting. Kaiba invited her out. Nice! She got kidnapped from Bakura. ( So I'm guess the next scene will probably go back to Chapter 1? She shouldn't be ashamed of her apartment and if she had left with Kaiba none of the kidnapping would be happening, but you have to make the story interesting so things have to happen to keep us in Suspense. So I'm wondering what Kaiba will think when he doesn't see her at school or at the benefit and thinks that she blew him off. I hope she doesn't wear something that isn't appropriate for the benefit because she doesn't have the same calibre of clothes as him...what she may think is decent, he may think it's not.
Great Chapter! What are all those shippings? Am I that behind on Anime or is that just a fanfic thing? Kisara and King of Thieves Bakura grew up in Kul Elna..interesting. Kaiba invited her out. Nice! She got kidnapped from Bakura. ( So I'm guess the next scene will probably go back to Chapter 1? She shouldn't be ashamed of her apartment and if she had left with Kaiba none of the kidnapping would be happening, but you have to make the story interesting so things have to happen to keep us in Suspense. So I'm wondering what Kaiba will think when he doesn't see her at school or at the benefit and thinks that she blew him off. I hope she doesn't wear something that isn't appropriate for the benefit because she doesn't have the same calibre of clothes as him...what she may think is decent, he may think it's not.
2/26 c6 Liwliwa-Janoah
Great Chapter. Why was Kisara questioning Kaiba's actions so much and his attitude. She just met him a day ago and she should not me this judgemental and he was nicer to her than all the others. Is she going off of what she's heard about him? Walking around in a cap to not be "noticed" is what every famous/rich person does, but she recognised those blue eyes! It's great to see them socialising and now going to a hang out. Why can't the Pharoah remember Kisara? And why is letting out the Dragon a bad thing? And why is the Pharoah going to be over thrown by Kisara? (the old one)
Great Chapter. Why was Kisara questioning Kaiba's actions so much and his attitude. She just met him a day ago and she should not me this judgemental and he was nicer to her than all the others. Is she going off of what she's heard about him? Walking around in a cap to not be "noticed" is what every famous/rich person does, but she recognised those blue eyes! It's great to see them socialising and now going to a hang out. Why can't the Pharoah remember Kisara? And why is letting out the Dragon a bad thing? And why is the Pharoah going to be over thrown by Kisara? (the old one)
2/25 c5 Liwliwa-Janoah
Well Well Well. Kaiba got caught! I see I'm not the only one (along with the other readers) who sees that Kaiba likes Kisara Mokuba is spot on, Kaiba your guilty! I love Kaiba's sterness with Mokuba, being a big brother. I don't recall Kaiba being stern with Mokuba when I watched Yugioh. That Dragon is something else -_- I hope the dragon doesn't come out anytime soon, because I don't know how she'll explain that one. Great Chapter!
Well Well Well. Kaiba got caught! I see I'm not the only one (along with the other readers) who sees that Kaiba likes Kisara Mokuba is spot on, Kaiba your guilty! I love Kaiba's sterness with Mokuba, being a big brother. I don't recall Kaiba being stern with Mokuba when I watched Yugioh. That Dragon is something else -_- I hope the dragon doesn't come out anytime soon, because I don't know how she'll explain that one. Great Chapter!
2/25 c4 Liwliwa-Janoah
Great Chapter! I love seeing this soft side of Kaiba. Interacting with the "geek-squad" and all. Kisara really knows alot but why doesn't she know about the Duel Monsters? Even if she doesn't know about the game she should recognise the monsters from her past life in Egypt when they extracted them from humans and played the stone version. I'm waiting patiently to understand more about Kisara.
Great Chapter! I love seeing this soft side of Kaiba. Interacting with the "geek-squad" and all. Kisara really knows alot but why doesn't she know about the Duel Monsters? Even if she doesn't know about the game she should recognise the monsters from her past life in Egypt when they extracted them from humans and played the stone version. I'm waiting patiently to understand more about Kisara.
2/25 c3 Liwliwa-Janoah
Brown? Mokuba’s eyes are a shade of blue, seems to be somewhere around the navy blue colour.
I wanted to ask who was Steve in the previous chapter but I forgot. And now I know. How does she know people from this time, if she’s Kisara from the Pharoah’s time or is my entire assumption of time travelling wrong. Is she Kisara’s reincarnation? Now that would explain a lot.
Come to think of it, your description of Yugi’s hair was a bit off. I consider that part of his hair to be red (I don’t recall you saying red). You however had the blonde and black parts correct.
Where did Bakura come from?
It’s a mic (short for microphone) not Mike, that’s the name of a person…
Seeing Marik operate studio equipment was intriguing especially since I can’t envision him from how I’ve seen him on the show.
Great chapter!
Brown? Mokuba’s eyes are a shade of blue, seems to be somewhere around the navy blue colour.
I wanted to ask who was Steve in the previous chapter but I forgot. And now I know. How does she know people from this time, if she’s Kisara from the Pharoah’s time or is my entire assumption of time travelling wrong. Is she Kisara’s reincarnation? Now that would explain a lot.
Come to think of it, your description of Yugi’s hair was a bit off. I consider that part of his hair to be red (I don’t recall you saying red). You however had the blonde and black parts correct.
Where did Bakura come from?
It’s a mic (short for microphone) not Mike, that’s the name of a person…
Seeing Marik operate studio equipment was intriguing especially since I can’t envision him from how I’ve seen him on the show.
Great chapter!
2/25 c2 Liwliwa-Janoah
Great chapter! LMAO at her intrigue about the locker. And is she telling lie’s about her old school being demolished? Because that is one well thought up lie and Truth be told did she ever go to school?
For a second I thought Kaiba was the teacher. because of this “ Kaiba walked up to the teacher's desk, where he sat and pointed to Kisara.” but I guess I misread it. You’re just saying they have a male French teacher.
Why was she upset that she had to sit next to Kaiba again? She should be glad that she’s seeing a familiar face.
Blueshipping? Kaiba dodging them? I guess I’ll find out in the next chapter.
I always wondered why everyone in the Pharoah’s past or whatever it’s called, was so dark and Kisara was always so pale. Do you have a theory for that?
And she said she was shipped from Egypt is that another lie? I know she’s on a mission but it seems to me she’s sort of a time traveller because when the story began she was in a dungeon and then it seemed as if she was dreaming but I assume differently, so is she time travelling or something else?
Great chapter! LMAO at her intrigue about the locker. And is she telling lie’s about her old school being demolished? Because that is one well thought up lie and Truth be told did she ever go to school?
For a second I thought Kaiba was the teacher. because of this “ Kaiba walked up to the teacher's desk, where he sat and pointed to Kisara.” but I guess I misread it. You’re just saying they have a male French teacher.
Why was she upset that she had to sit next to Kaiba again? She should be glad that she’s seeing a familiar face.
Blueshipping? Kaiba dodging them? I guess I’ll find out in the next chapter.
I always wondered why everyone in the Pharoah’s past or whatever it’s called, was so dark and Kisara was always so pale. Do you have a theory for that?
And she said she was shipped from Egypt is that another lie? I know she’s on a mission but it seems to me she’s sort of a time traveller because when the story began she was in a dungeon and then it seemed as if she was dreaming but I assume differently, so is she time travelling or something else?
2/25 c1 Liwliwa-Janoah
AMAZING! Kaiba is actually not irritable towards her. As I recall, Kisara was Poor so how in the world did she learn all those instruments? And in Pharoah's time, I don't think it even had half of those instruments she called. The interactions between her and the dragon are HILARIOUS! I guess she had a great first day, and Kaiba is turning heads because we all know that Kaiba's not that nice.
AMAZING! Kaiba is actually not irritable towards her. As I recall, Kisara was Poor so how in the world did she learn all those instruments? And in Pharoah's time, I don't think it even had half of those instruments she called. The interactions between her and the dragon are HILARIOUS! I guess she had a great first day, and Kaiba is turning heads because we all know that Kaiba's not that nice.
2/24 c15 2Magdalene Thorne
An update, hurray! Small, but good nevertheless. I know snake bites are no joke, so let me say how lucky Atem was back then. Kisara to the rescue XD
2Magdalene ThorneAn update, hurray! Small, but good nevertheless. I know snake bites are no joke, so let me say how lucky Atem was back then. Kisara to the rescue XD
2/23 c15 16K5Rakitan
This chapter was amazing! I lobed the vivid description of Kisara caring for the snake bite!
16K5RakitanThis chapter was amazing! I lobed the vivid description of Kisara caring for the snake bite!
1/19 c14 2atwistedconundrum
Awww, so cute! I love this fic; it's so fluffy! I would like to state my opinion of there being blueshipping as the main ship. I would also like to offer another suggestion and it would be interesting if you can work this into the fic. The reason Kisara dislikes Pegasus is that he wielded the Millennium eye. Great work on the fic so far and I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
2atwistedconundrumAwww, so cute! I love this fic; it's so fluffy! I would like to state my opinion of there being blueshipping as the main ship. I would also like to offer another suggestion and it would be interesting if you can work this into the fic. The reason Kisara dislikes Pegasus is that he wielded the Millennium eye. Great work on the fic so far and I look forward to the upcoming chapters.
12/17/2012 c14 2Magdalene Thorne
Do not apologize. This was a great update! A super special awesome early Christmas present :) You take as long as you want to update. The end result is always great.
2Magdalene ThorneDo not apologize. This was a great update! A super special awesome early Christmas present :) You take as long as you want to update. The end result is always great.