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5/2 c11 17Son of Whitebeard
They are Masters of the Universe
2/10/2012 c11 2sz2000
Interesting story! It was different. I liked it. Nicely done. Keep up the good work.
2/7/2012 c11 5LilDevyl
I know, I know. You were waiting to here what I have to say all story long. Well, here it is. Well Done! Thought the ending wasn't quite what I had in mind. But still it was a pretty good story. Different, Darker, but still pretty good.
2/5/2012 c11 11emeyers
Whoa! Now *that* was an interesting story. Well done, girl. It was a pleasure reading. You sure caught me off guard with some of the different pairings (Ryan and Carter and Ethan and Kira to be precise) but no matter. I could definitely see Ryan and Carter together-Ethan and Kira was a shocker but then again you've been known to pull those! :P

Thanks for giving me a heads up about this story. It was lots of fun and I really liked how you made them evil. That was definitely intriguing and there aren't many fics (at least with Tommy/Jason/Kimberly/Katherine together like this. :P)

I especially found the first chapter, the connection spell, quite interesting. I've never seen that before and it definitely made their intimate moments even more intimate and *fun*! ;)

Once again great job, girl. Pleasure reading and keep up the good work. :D:D
2/5/2012 c11 6Anastasia Lunaria Dark Tenjo
I LOVE YOU FOR THIS I LOVE YOU SO FUCKING MUCH! CATCH YA ON THE DAMN FLIPSIDE AS I WILL MENTION YOU IN ALL OF MY STORYS FROM NOW ON

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2/5/2012 c11 Jeremy Shane
Good Chapter & More Please
2/4/2012 c11 hellobunny
aww i was sad to see it end so fast. i loved reading every chapter just to see what would happen. but yeah i'm sad it ended so fast...
2/4/2012 c11 oldtvlover
Awesome story!
2/4/2012 c11 5RangerJedi67
I was too interested to see where this was going to review the last couple chapters separately, so I'll do it all at once.

I couldn't stand Wild Force, so I'm okay with what happened to them.

Ninja Storm though, I'm torn. I think they might have had some use for the ninjas (because they have cool powers even when not rangers), but then again more teens would just be too much work I think.

Loved the ending. I was kind of hoping he'd recruit the Dino Thunder team early.

And just so you know, there is so much more you could do here. So if you ever feel like a sequel, I'm in :)
2/4/2012 c11 64the pilot of eva unit 04
Great fic I thought it was pretty cool though there were one or two very minor plotholes but they didn't take away from the story too much.
2/4/2012 c9 6Anastasia Lunaria Dark Tenjo
Just be nice to DT i dotn give a shit about NS..Catch ya on the flipside?
2/4/2012 c8 Jeremy Shane
Good Chapter & More Please
2/3/2012 c8 oldtvlover
Excellent chapter!
2/3/2012 c8 5RangerJedi67
Another good chapter.

So they won't age, huh? Cool.

There's one part of me that says it would have been interesting to have Eric join the bad guys. The Quantum Powers would have been a worthwhile addition to their forces. But the other part of me says Eric never would have willingly joined so his refusal was far more in character. Its your story, so its all good.

Will Carter make any appearances now that Ryan has broken him? It would be interesting to see how he fits into the picture.
2/3/2012 c8 6Anastasia Lunaria Dark Tenjo
Please say the Dino's and ninjas will become evil I don't want you to kill off my favorite teams! Please consider this...Catch ya on the flipside
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