for Soulmates2/28/2012 c7 
6nadin-hime
I think, I`m jealous Gene to Mai, lol
Good things, Lin is already acknowledged)) by the way, is he know Gene`s pseudonym, or I someth missed in previous chapters?
Andoooo, I cant Naru is so cuuuuuuute ^^
6nadin-himeI think, I`m jealous Gene to Mai, lol
Good things, Lin is already acknowledged)) by the way, is he know Gene`s pseudonym, or I someth missed in previous chapters?
Andoooo, I cant Naru is so cuuuuuuute ^^
2/27/2012 c7 Jwongzy
Love this alot, gene is soooooooo cute when he gets jealous! Hahaha please do update more! :)
Love this alot, gene is soooooooo cute when he gets jealous! Hahaha please do update more! :)
2/21/2012 c6 1Bunnibutch
are sure its not a maixnaru fic i don't mind it but im pretty sure that can create problems haha wonder how gene will react! lol
1Bunnibutchare sure its not a maixnaru fic i don't mind it but im pretty sure that can create problems haha wonder how gene will react! lol
2/20/2012 c6 GracieFox
i lov the story an i cant wait till they start the case it should be interesting lolz
i lov the story an i cant wait till they start the case it should be interesting lolz
2/20/2012 c6 Yewberry Noon
I got really excited when I saw this story was updated :3
Ah, I love Gene and Mai together! Their personalities are so well-matched, and Gene is so protective of Mai!
Plus, he cooks, so that automatically makes him absolutely amazing! When I thought it wasn't possible to be even more jealous of Mai... :)
What a suggestive position Naru and Mai found themselves in *eyebrow wiggle*! If Gene knew about that little predicament, he'd certainly blow a fuse ;) And Naru, strangely enough, didn't seem to mind Mai straddling him!
Oh dear, what will become of Naru and Mai's relationship?
Now that Naru lives DOWN THE HALL from Mai, let's hope Mai and Gene don't receive any "surprise visitors"...because that would make for an awkward situation :)
I am excited for the next case! I would love to see an email telling me Ms. MagicalMagician has updated her wonderful story :) Either of her wonderful stories, since I'm following "Mai's New Family" as well!
Also, just a minor detail, but there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes in this chapter, such as the word straddling, and a few missing commas! Honestly, they are minor, but just for the sake of professionalism, I thought I'd mention them to you :)
Thank you!
I got really excited when I saw this story was updated :3
Ah, I love Gene and Mai together! Their personalities are so well-matched, and Gene is so protective of Mai!
Plus, he cooks, so that automatically makes him absolutely amazing! When I thought it wasn't possible to be even more jealous of Mai... :)
What a suggestive position Naru and Mai found themselves in *eyebrow wiggle*! If Gene knew about that little predicament, he'd certainly blow a fuse ;) And Naru, strangely enough, didn't seem to mind Mai straddling him!
Oh dear, what will become of Naru and Mai's relationship?
Now that Naru lives DOWN THE HALL from Mai, let's hope Mai and Gene don't receive any "surprise visitors"...because that would make for an awkward situation :)
I am excited for the next case! I would love to see an email telling me Ms. MagicalMagician has updated her wonderful story :) Either of her wonderful stories, since I'm following "Mai's New Family" as well!
Also, just a minor detail, but there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes in this chapter, such as the word straddling, and a few missing commas! Honestly, they are minor, but just for the sake of professionalism, I thought I'd mention them to you :)
Thank you!
2/20/2012 c6 8Sakura Ichigo Morihiko
Just watch, Gene's gonna appear as a guest on the case just to annoy the guy that's flirting with Mai.
He needs to protect what's his, after all.
8Sakura Ichigo MorihikoJust watch, Gene's gonna appear as a guest on the case just to annoy the guy that's flirting with Mai.
He needs to protect what's his, after all.
2/20/2012 c6 6nadin-hime
I was right, brothers` role so suit Naru))
Keep going, i really wanna see reaction on the reveling Gene. Masako gonna swoon xD
6nadin-himeI was right, brothers` role so suit Naru))
Keep going, i really wanna see reaction on the reveling Gene. Masako gonna swoon xD
2/20/2012 c6 8Chrysanthia-Sunshine
geez, you don't nee to repeat it over and over again Naru, you really overprotective to Mai..
I wonder what his true feeling toward Mai.
is it really a simple brotherly love like Gene said?
ugh, I can't wait for the next chapter. update again soon please ^^
8Chrysanthia-Sunshinegeez, you don't nee to repeat it over and over again Naru, you really overprotective to Mai..
I wonder what his true feeling toward Mai.
is it really a simple brotherly love like Gene said?
ugh, I can't wait for the next chapter. update again soon please ^^
2/17/2012 c5 Yewberry Noon
Yes! A Gene and Mai fic! I lap this stuff up like honey :3
Gene is basically the ideal boyfriend! Charming, giving, a little possessive, intelligent, and HAWT :)
Mai is a lucky girl, and he's a lucky man!
I can totally see Gene working gold contacts! When I thought it wasn't possible to become much more insanely attractive :) Good thinking, Mai!
Yay! They have a home together! How adorable and domestic!
I just want to see how Naru reacts when he finds out his sister is dating his brother...can you say awkward?
Can't wait for the update :)
Yes! A Gene and Mai fic! I lap this stuff up like honey :3
Gene is basically the ideal boyfriend! Charming, giving, a little possessive, intelligent, and HAWT :)
Mai is a lucky girl, and he's a lucky man!
I can totally see Gene working gold contacts! When I thought it wasn't possible to become much more insanely attractive :) Good thinking, Mai!
Yay! They have a home together! How adorable and domestic!
I just want to see how Naru reacts when he finds out his sister is dating his brother...can you say awkward?
Can't wait for the update :)
2/17/2012 c5 8Sakura Ichigo Morihiko
"Wait until you see his face when he knows it's me."
I WANNA SEE THAT FACE!
8Sakura Ichigo Morihiko"Wait until you see his face when he knows it's me."
I WANNA SEE THAT FACE!
2/17/2012 c5 8Chrysanthia-Sunshine
great chappie!
I love how you make gene in disguise.
gosh, he must be really hot in that appereance, lol
Update soon! ^^
8Chrysanthia-Sunshinegreat chappie!
I love how you make gene in disguise.
gosh, he must be really hot in that appereance, lol
Update soon! ^^
2/17/2012 c5 6nadin-hime
Wow, I cant wait until Narus` reaction ^^
Gene is really cute with his jealous, gold eyes and everything!
6nadin-himeWow, I cant wait until Narus` reaction ^^
Gene is really cute with his jealous, gold eyes and everything!