for That's the Way the Cookie Crumbles4/22/2012 c1 
3Thoughts Like Raindrops
So I know this review is very late, but I wanted to say thank you for participating in the challenge that I gave you. You did a wonderful job with the prompts that you got and I must say that you're story is very well written! I'll be in touch about contest winnings!
Leslie
3Thoughts Like RaindropsSo I know this review is very late, but I wanted to say thank you for participating in the challenge that I gave you. You did a wonderful job with the prompts that you got and I must say that you're story is very well written! I'll be in touch about contest winnings!
Leslie
2/18/2012 c1 68the lola
This.Was.So.Sad. Aw! I loved it, why can't i be this good at writing? Heartbreaking. Loved how the memories didn't seem rushed or too few even though there wasn't many and they were quite short. The usage of the gingerbread house as a metaphor of their relationship was absolutely fabulous. I can't bring myself to look for things to criticize because I loved it so much so I'm just going to end it there and say a very well done!
68the lolaThis.Was.So.Sad. Aw! I loved it, why can't i be this good at writing? Heartbreaking. Loved how the memories didn't seem rushed or too few even though there wasn't many and they were quite short. The usage of the gingerbread house as a metaphor of their relationship was absolutely fabulous. I can't bring myself to look for things to criticize because I loved it so much so I'm just going to end it there and say a very well done!
2/18/2012 c1 35HeadlessHuntsman
Ok I am a huge Rose/Scorpius shipper but this made me wanna track them down and smack them with a framing hammer. You wrote this very well and the emotions seemed real. This just goes to show that if the girl thinks the guy is cheating most of the time it's with good reason.
Good Job
35HeadlessHuntsmanOk I am a huge Rose/Scorpius shipper but this made me wanna track them down and smack them with a framing hammer. You wrote this very well and the emotions seemed real. This just goes to show that if the girl thinks the guy is cheating most of the time it's with good reason.
Good Job
2/4/2012 c1 Cherriesxoxo2496
Awwww...I love Dominique and Scorpios! I think they're way better than Rose and Scorpios, I mean, Rose and Scorpios are really cliché and Dom and Scor aren't. Really good job though, loved it. Even if it made me sad...
Awwww...I love Dominique and Scorpios! I think they're way better than Rose and Scorpios, I mean, Rose and Scorpios are really cliché and Dom and Scor aren't. Really good job though, loved it. Even if it made me sad...
2/3/2012 c1 17CrystalIceLover
This is beautiful! I love it! It's so sad and I feel for Dom whenever she sees Scor and Rose together because she knows that there's something going on between them and even though she's with him she still can't shake that feeling. Scorpius is just so ugh. He's a cheater, and I absolutely loathe cheaters, but then he's so charismatic and cute but then there's the fact that he destroyed both Dom's gingerbread house and heart.
So I must reiterate. Beautiful.
17CrystalIceLoverThis is beautiful! I love it! It's so sad and I feel for Dom whenever she sees Scor and Rose together because she knows that there's something going on between them and even though she's with him she still can't shake that feeling. Scorpius is just so ugh. He's a cheater, and I absolutely loathe cheaters, but then he's so charismatic and cute but then there's the fact that he destroyed both Dom's gingerbread house and heart.
So I must reiterate. Beautiful.
2/3/2012 c1 61codependency
Wow, Lo, I'm really blown away by this! It's just so beautifully written, seriously, I love it so much! I loved the order you put this in, it really worked! I felt so sorry for Dom throughout this, this was so angsty & perfect. I loved the metaphor of the burnt cookies, avd the gingerbread house. Just amazing :)
61codependencyWow, Lo, I'm really blown away by this! It's just so beautifully written, seriously, I love it so much! I loved the order you put this in, it really worked! I felt so sorry for Dom throughout this, this was so angsty & perfect. I loved the metaphor of the burnt cookies, avd the gingerbread house. Just amazing :)
2/2/2012 c1 37courfeyracs
Ugh. Lo. LO. What is this even why is my heart hurting like this. Angsty Rose/Scor/Dom always gets me for some reason. I don't even know.
Okay, so of course I loved this. Your writing is absolutely brilliant, I can't tell you this enough. The metaphor at the beginning was just beautiful, with the whole gingerbread house shattering idea, I loved it so much. And Dominique trying to pretend that she's not hurt but she so obviously is ugh she just needs a hug.
And James and Scorpius friendship. YES. I love it. I need more of this. And when Rose comes out, all playfully angry and it's so easy to imagine being Dominique at this point, all the hurt she must be feeling.
And now Scorpius is being absolutely lovely to her and I want a Scor of my own. But the next line, about it ending in a crash. Noooo. The ending is so beautifully heartbreaking, I love it to bits. I'm kind of glad they didn't end up together because it's so much more realistic that way.
Absolutely brilliant work, Lo. I'm so glad this is for me, bb!
37courfeyracsUgh. Lo. LO. What is this even why is my heart hurting like this. Angsty Rose/Scor/Dom always gets me for some reason. I don't even know.
Okay, so of course I loved this. Your writing is absolutely brilliant, I can't tell you this enough. The metaphor at the beginning was just beautiful, with the whole gingerbread house shattering idea, I loved it so much. And Dominique trying to pretend that she's not hurt but she so obviously is ugh she just needs a hug.
And James and Scorpius friendship. YES. I love it. I need more of this. And when Rose comes out, all playfully angry and it's so easy to imagine being Dominique at this point, all the hurt she must be feeling.
And now Scorpius is being absolutely lovely to her and I want a Scor of my own. But the next line, about it ending in a crash. Noooo. The ending is so beautifully heartbreaking, I love it to bits. I'm kind of glad they didn't end up together because it's so much more realistic that way.
Absolutely brilliant work, Lo. I'm so glad this is for me, bb!