for The Lost Goddess3/20/2012 c1 
1Water Ripples
Oooh! Would you look at that?
Is that quite possibly... a mary sue?
You better change that... This story isn't even starting, and I'm think she's a mary sue.
You better impress me.
(I'm sorry for the flame, but maybe if you turn things around... this persons flames with turn into good reviews.)
1Water RipplesOooh! Would you look at that?
Is that quite possibly... a mary sue?
You better change that... This story isn't even starting, and I'm think she's a mary sue.
You better impress me.
(I'm sorry for the flame, but maybe if you turn things around... this persons flames with turn into good reviews.)
3/2/2012 c1 illeatthat
I really hope you know what your doing. So far, what I know about this character seems to make her look like a mary sue, and she hasn't even had a part yet. Please don't make an all powerful character, or one that's somehow more important than Link or Zelda. That doesn't work.
I really hope you know what your doing. So far, what I know about this character seems to make her look like a mary sue, and she hasn't even had a part yet. Please don't make an all powerful character, or one that's somehow more important than Link or Zelda. That doesn't work.
3/2/2012 c1 2ShadowDestroyerOfTime
you really know how to make someone want to read your stories that much more. cant wait
2ShadowDestroyerOfTimeyou really know how to make someone want to read your stories that much more. cant wait
2/1/2012 c1 Sting
oh, and keep your damn cookie.
oh, and keep your damn cookie.
2/1/2012 c1 Sting
This story is full of crap. Really.
This story is full of crap. Really.