for The Other Battlefield4/20 c8 Silentx32
Light finally accepts herself and it's about damn time :D.
Great job like always these are always a pleasure to read so take your time.
Light finally accepts herself and it's about damn time :D.
Great job like always these are always a pleasure to read so take your time.
4/17 c8 
10Logos Minus Pity
Genril!
Short chapter or no, I have to say that I was very, very happy to see an update from you! And no need to apologize-life does have a habit of periodically "getting in the way", so to speak. Regardless, I enjoyed the chapter, short though it was. I thought it was a very good portrayal of everyone's respective reactions; you got the characters right on point, by my thinking, so well done!
Really, everything about the chapter was well put together and read very easily. I sincerely hope to see more from you in the future, and I hope that you're doing well!
Cheers,
Logos
10Logos Minus PityGenril!
Short chapter or no, I have to say that I was very, very happy to see an update from you! And no need to apologize-life does have a habit of periodically "getting in the way", so to speak. Regardless, I enjoyed the chapter, short though it was. I thought it was a very good portrayal of everyone's respective reactions; you got the characters right on point, by my thinking, so well done!
Really, everything about the chapter was well put together and read very easily. I sincerely hope to see more from you in the future, and I hope that you're doing well!
Cheers,
Logos
4/14 c8 1Naramis
Glad that you updated this :)
Really loving this story and this chapter fits in pretty well I think. And Fang's and Light's moment in the garden was sooo cute, had me smiling a lot here! I'm curious how this will develop further with the two of them :)
1NaramisGlad that you updated this :)
Really loving this story and this chapter fits in pretty well I think. And Fang's and Light's moment in the garden was sooo cute, had me smiling a lot here! I'm curious how this will develop further with the two of them :)
4/13 c8 chinpokoma
Back with a vengeance! It was nice to see Light struggle a bit with who she loves but not twist all the way into a knot of self-loathing or anything. And Fang carrying her in was sweet :)
Back with a vengeance! It was nice to see Light struggle a bit with who she loves but not twist all the way into a knot of self-loathing or anything. And Fang carrying her in was sweet :)
4/13 c8 5Hollow Panda
I'm okay with it being short as long as I get an update :) I loved it and that Snow wasn't his usual 'blonde' self. Keep up the good work!
5Hollow PandaI'm okay with it being short as long as I get an update :) I loved it and that Snow wasn't his usual 'blonde' self. Keep up the good work!
4/13 c8 Rayfinder
Well, it was certainly a good chapter, even if it was kinda short!
I'm glad that Lightning's finally starting to accept it now. I hope to see more from this story and soon! :p
Well, it was certainly a good chapter, even if it was kinda short!
I'm glad that Lightning's finally starting to accept it now. I hope to see more from this story and soon! :p
1/14 c7 WolffieC
That was quite a joy to read, quite a joy indeed. This is exactly how I imagine Fang and Light would be in the bedroom. I loved the awkwardness of the whole scene.
Looks like I am all caught up. I really hope you continue to write! I look forward to an update.
That was quite a joy to read, quite a joy indeed. This is exactly how I imagine Fang and Light would be in the bedroom. I loved the awkwardness of the whole scene.
Looks like I am all caught up. I really hope you continue to write! I look forward to an update.
1/14 c6 WolffieC
This chapter captured the essence of a large party very well. In a way, I felt like I was looking in on it from a shifting perspective. Excellent writing. Fang never ceases to amuse me, either.
This chapter captured the essence of a large party very well. In a way, I felt like I was looking in on it from a shifting perspective. Excellent writing. Fang never ceases to amuse me, either.
1/14 c5 WolffieC
Another solid chapter. I am glad Serah didn't end up freaking out about Fang and Lightning's relationship. I think it is a much better narrative decision for it simply to have been Lightning's own insecurities that made her feel threatened.
Another solid chapter. I am glad Serah didn't end up freaking out about Fang and Lightning's relationship. I think it is a much better narrative decision for it simply to have been Lightning's own insecurities that made her feel threatened.
12/31/2012 c7 cabby2299
I did enjoy it very much. I love Flight stories. Can't wait to read what comes next. Great work and thanks for sharing.
I did enjoy it very much. I love Flight stories. Can't wait to read what comes next. Great work and thanks for sharing.