for The Man10/28/2012 c9 Professor CatEars
I love the ending, i didn't think that would happen. I also never thought of john having irene's character, that was a good idea! I don't think anyone else thought of that , well... anyone that I know of, at least. I like this story a lot, I found funny and cute. And I really liked that part when john was naked infront of sherlock when they met, I was giggling the whole time i was reading that. oWo
I love the ending, i didn't think that would happen. I also never thought of john having irene's character, that was a good idea! I don't think anyone else thought of that , well... anyone that I know of, at least. I like this story a lot, I found funny and cute. And I really liked that part when john was naked infront of sherlock when they met, I was giggling the whole time i was reading that. oWo
8/10/2012 c1 Ulura
Oh my God this is funny to read! I love it!
I've read a story like this only it was Sherlock in John's position :P
Oh my God this is funny to read! I love it!
I've read a story like this only it was Sherlock in John's position :P
5/15/2012 c2 E
I love the idea behind the story but the language mistakes are ruining everything. You should have someone check your work very carefully before posting it.
I love the idea behind the story but the language mistakes are ruining everything. You should have someone check your work very carefully before posting it.
5/8/2012 c9 bakedham
Oh, very nice and very promising ending! I love how you made it quite sultry and non-angsty! Great job!
You followed ASiB pretty closely, but your twists made the plot so much more interesting-the concept of John being in the place of Irene was a refreshing idea. :)
There were a few misused words and some grammar errors, but seeing as English isn't your first/main language, it's quite excusable. Thanks for the read!
Oh, very nice and very promising ending! I love how you made it quite sultry and non-angsty! Great job!
You followed ASiB pretty closely, but your twists made the plot so much more interesting-the concept of John being in the place of Irene was a refreshing idea. :)
There were a few misused words and some grammar errors, but seeing as English isn't your first/main language, it's quite excusable. Thanks for the read!
5/8/2012 c9
2Lolita-mist
OMG... I've got a very naked, chained up, sherlock image in brain... I think I've died from brain hemorrhage and gone to Sherlock and John heaven! lol, I like this ending! Ha, to think that Mycroft and Lestrade is fooled by the "death by terrorists" story just tickles me (esp when John's wrapped around in Sherlock's blue dressing gown about to do some very naughty things to the detective...).
Loved it!
2Lolita-mistOMG... I've got a very naked, chained up, sherlock image in brain... I think I've died from brain hemorrhage and gone to Sherlock and John heaven! lol, I like this ending! Ha, to think that Mycroft and Lestrade is fooled by the "death by terrorists" story just tickles me (esp when John's wrapped around in Sherlock's blue dressing gown about to do some very naughty things to the detective...).
Loved it!
5/8/2012 c9 Jhonlock-lover
omg amazing! please write more!
omg amazing! please write more!
5/8/2012 c9 twistedsister-emogirl
AHHHH I loved this sooooo much! SEQUAL, John Watson as "the man" genius! I could not stop reading I loved the twists you put in, amazing please more!
AHHHH I loved this sooooo much! SEQUAL, John Watson as "the man" genius! I could not stop reading I loved the twists you put in, amazing please more!
5/8/2012 c9 Cherry-Anne Sponge
Thank goodness! I Thought you were going to make it John escaped but didn't come back! Very saucy!
Thank goodness! I Thought you were going to make it John escaped but didn't come back! Very saucy!
5/8/2012 c9
2Rebecca Cumberbatch
Oh my god that was a brilliant ending! That was an awesome story. Well done. Please wrote a little sequel (even if it's only a one-shot) :-) I have really enjoyed this.
2Rebecca CumberbatchOh my god that was a brilliant ending! That was an awesome story. Well done. Please wrote a little sequel (even if it's only a one-shot) :-) I have really enjoyed this.
5/8/2012 c9
20Lunabell Marauder Knyte
It's a very perfect end but at the same time I just want there to be more! TT~TT
I love the idea of Criminal John catching Sherlock's interest. I hope you write more on this idea. You're a talented writer with this pairing and this idea, so I hope to hear more from you.
If convenient never stop writing, if inconvenient never stop writing anyway :)
~IB
20Lunabell Marauder KnyteIt's a very perfect end but at the same time I just want there to be more! TT~TT
I love the idea of Criminal John catching Sherlock's interest. I hope you write more on this idea. You're a talented writer with this pairing and this idea, so I hope to hear more from you.
If convenient never stop writing, if inconvenient never stop writing anyway :)
~IB
5/8/2012 c9
2power0girl
You know what? That was brilliant. I LOVE the idea of John just hiding out in 221B 'punishing' Sherlock forever. Heh heh.
Ta!
2power0girlYou know what? That was brilliant. I LOVE the idea of John just hiding out in 221B 'punishing' Sherlock forever. Heh heh.
Ta!
