for The Storm's Call for Unity2/14 c34
6Angelic Fluffle
This story's great! There's just one thing I'd like to mention: it's spelled rogue, not rouge. Rouge is what you wear on your cheeks to make them redder. Otherwise, I love it! You are an amazing author to come up with such a unique idea.
6Angelic FluffleThis story's great! There's just one thing I'd like to mention: it's spelled rogue, not rouge. Rouge is what you wear on your cheeks to make them redder. Otherwise, I love it! You are an amazing author to come up with such a unique idea.
1/21 c51
1LoudshadowRoss
Okay, WTF. Seriously. You don't just write a 50 Chapter epic and do this. If you delete the damn last chapter, then REWRITE the damn last chapter. We don't need this summary bullcrap. If you make a mistake, you fix the damn mistake. I used to love this story, but because of this you instantly removed it from my list of must-reads. I loved your writing, I loved your plot, I loved your characters. I loved the whole damned thing, and you screwed it up. You used to be my favorite author on this damned site. Now you have sunk to the lowest of the low. You have sunk to the level of a person who discontinues their fic at the climax of the story, you have sunk to the level of people who flame at good stories for no reason, you have sunk to the level of a person like me, who would write a long-ass review just to tell off an author who has sheer disregard for her 40 favs, 30 follows, and 280 other reviewers.
Good day.
-LoudshadowRoss
1LoudshadowRossOkay, WTF. Seriously. You don't just write a 50 Chapter epic and do this. If you delete the damn last chapter, then REWRITE the damn last chapter. We don't need this summary bullcrap. If you make a mistake, you fix the damn mistake. I used to love this story, but because of this you instantly removed it from my list of must-reads. I loved your writing, I loved your plot, I loved your characters. I loved the whole damned thing, and you screwed it up. You used to be my favorite author on this damned site. Now you have sunk to the lowest of the low. You have sunk to the level of a person who discontinues their fic at the climax of the story, you have sunk to the level of people who flame at good stories for no reason, you have sunk to the level of a person like me, who would write a long-ass review just to tell off an author who has sheer disregard for her 40 favs, 30 follows, and 280 other reviewers.
Good day.
-LoudshadowRoss
1/8 c53 Mossypelt11
You story is awesome. The end made me cry.
You story is awesome. The end made me cry.
8/24/2012 c52
57Starlight Warrior 1092
Hey, remember when you first started this story? Back a long time ago... You know. 2/3/12... A long time ago. I remember back, a few days after you posted this story, that I decided to click on it. I noticed that you had been updating it daily- sometimes more than once- and thought to myself "well, they really seem to have a story going here, maybe I'll check it out- it could use some loving reviews..." So I clicked on it. Read chapter one. Reviewed. Read chapter two. Reviewed. Read chapter... you get the point. I just want to say that this story has gone farther than I could've imagined when I first clicked on it. It's been so great, and I hope you know how wonderful of a writer that you truely are. I wasn't sure what to expect when I first clicked on it, but I have come to not try to expect things since you always had plot-twists that left be guessing what was next. Sometimes I had to really think before I even came up with a guess...
What I'm saying is that you're a great writer, and I'm really glad that I decided to click on this story. It's well worth it, believe me. I loved reading about everything in Stormynight's life along with Stephanie's, since though they were the same they were 'worlds apart'! You did amazing... fantastic... There are many words to describe this fan fiction.
Your next story sounds interesting, and if it's anything like this one I think that it'll be great too. And it's okay if you don't want to write an epilogue- I thought that the last sentance you had was a perfect way to end the story. It just seemed to... I don't know, fit. But... um, this isn't marked as 'complete'. Is there anything else that might be said here? XD But still, this was such a great fan fic that any Warriors fan should read.
57Starlight Warrior 1092Hey, remember when you first started this story? Back a long time ago... You know. 2/3/12... A long time ago. I remember back, a few days after you posted this story, that I decided to click on it. I noticed that you had been updating it daily- sometimes more than once- and thought to myself "well, they really seem to have a story going here, maybe I'll check it out- it could use some loving reviews..." So I clicked on it. Read chapter one. Reviewed. Read chapter two. Reviewed. Read chapter... you get the point. I just want to say that this story has gone farther than I could've imagined when I first clicked on it. It's been so great, and I hope you know how wonderful of a writer that you truely are. I wasn't sure what to expect when I first clicked on it, but I have come to not try to expect things since you always had plot-twists that left be guessing what was next. Sometimes I had to really think before I even came up with a guess...
What I'm saying is that you're a great writer, and I'm really glad that I decided to click on this story. It's well worth it, believe me. I loved reading about everything in Stormynight's life along with Stephanie's, since though they were the same they were 'worlds apart'! You did amazing... fantastic... There are many words to describe this fan fiction.
Your next story sounds interesting, and if it's anything like this one I think that it'll be great too. And it's okay if you don't want to write an epilogue- I thought that the last sentance you had was a perfect way to end the story. It just seemed to... I don't know, fit. But... um, this isn't marked as 'complete'. Is there anything else that might be said here? XD But still, this was such a great fan fic that any Warriors fan should read.
8/24/2012 c52
9Stormfeather of IceClan
Thanks for the cookie! I'm excited to read "Unmasked" it sounds really good and I like the name Maskkit a lot!
9Stormfeather of IceClanThanks for the cookie! I'm excited to read "Unmasked" it sounds really good and I like the name Maskkit a lot!
8/23/2012 c52
7FawnHasAnArmyOfEvilPuppies
I will read your new story. What do you mean, I might see Stormynight? I wanna know. I'm so sad this is ending. :.(
7FawnHasAnArmyOfEvilPuppiesI will read your new story. What do you mean, I might see Stormynight? I wanna know. I'm so sad this is ending. :.(
8/23/2012 c52 Angelina
Holy crap I was just reading ur 'book' when I saw that instead of 51 chapters there were 52 and btw great story
Holy crap I was just reading ur 'book' when I saw that instead of 51 chapters there were 52 and btw great story
8/23/2012 c52
7Shado Room of Souls
Okay, now it's the end.
Happy Sadness!
Thank you for writing a great story.
:D
See you in your next story!
7Shado Room of SoulsOkay, now it's the end.
Happy Sadness!
Thank you for writing a great story.
:D
See you in your next story!
