for Kettering2/4 c1 Miss mia
Very intriguing! Love the interactions, love the Planet's character, love the thought behind.
Very intriguing! Love the interactions, love the Planet's character, love the thought behind.
12/15/2012 c1 Guest
Ooooh. This is interesting! I like how you tie it in with PE, my fave fanfic. But I'm still confused, though. Hope you'll write more like this..
Ooooh. This is interesting! I like how you tie it in with PE, my fave fanfic. But I'm still confused, though. Hope you'll write more like this..
12/7/2012 c1 Tashaa27
Wow, the chills! Write more of these please! Love your PE-verse! And your writing too. :-)
Wow, the chills! Write more of these please! Love your PE-verse! And your writing too. :-)
4/29/2012 c1 
4Rayven49
Love love love this. It was different from your normal style but still recognizably you. In canon too, which was fun.
I like the way you tied in Ares and the Justice planet.
The only bit I didn't understand is why, at the very end, James Collins wakes up screaming. Does it have to do with Susan's wish?
I also had a minor spazz attack when you ended your Author's Note with "allonsy" because I've recently gotten into Dr. Who (David Tennant for life) and am slowly realizing that it is EVERYWHERE.
Yours,
Rayven
4Rayven49Love love love this. It was different from your normal style but still recognizably you. In canon too, which was fun.
I like the way you tied in Ares and the Justice planet.
The only bit I didn't understand is why, at the very end, James Collins wakes up screaming. Does it have to do with Susan's wish?
I also had a minor spazz attack when you ended your Author's Note with "allonsy" because I've recently gotten into Dr. Who (David Tennant for life) and am slowly realizing that it is EVERYWHERE.
Yours,
Rayven
4/22/2012 c1 basaltone
Very cool story, I love the idea of the Planet's actually have a corporal form. Is this just a one-shot or the beginning of a longer story? I would love to read more. Thank you
Very cool story, I love the idea of the Planet's actually have a corporal form. Is this just a one-shot or the beginning of a longer story? I would love to read more. Thank you
3/13/2012 c1 6Hagios
Collins? I thought he was gone...
Amazing story though, it's been so long since I've read any Narnia fic, and I just happened upon these so even better :)
This totally needs to be continued though, I feel like you can always continue your stories, they're so good.
I also like how you don't just spell out everything, but leave it to us to figue things out here and there.
Great job!
6HagiosCollins? I thought he was gone...
Amazing story though, it's been so long since I've read any Narnia fic, and I just happened upon these so even better :)
This totally needs to be continued though, I feel like you can always continue your stories, they're so good.
I also like how you don't just spell out everything, but leave it to us to figue things out here and there.
Great job!
2/24/2012 c1 27The Hobbit's Rhapsody
Whoa.
Mind. Blown.
This is amazing—a bit confusing before I got the hang of it, but nonetheless beautifully written and rather haunting. The incorporation of the mythologies was really interesting, and I enjoyed your very effective use of parallel structure. Anyways, I am definitely going to go stalk your other fics now.
27The Hobbit's RhapsodyWhoa.
Mind. Blown.
This is amazing—a bit confusing before I got the hang of it, but nonetheless beautifully written and rather haunting. The incorporation of the mythologies was really interesting, and I enjoyed your very effective use of parallel structure. Anyways, I am definitely going to go stalk your other fics now.
2/9/2012 c1 narniagirl
I LOVED THIS STORY! keep up the good work!
ASLAN BE WITH YOU,
NARNIA GIRL
I LOVED THIS STORY! keep up the good work!
ASLAN BE WITH YOU,
NARNIA GIRL
2/8/2012 c1 Benjaminjonathan
So, what, they died? Or did I read things that you haven't written? ... Did you made that sentence up, the one: star light, star bright, first star i see tonight, i wish i may, i wish i might, have the wish i wish tonight? because I love it. I just love your stories, and this one too, though indeed it isn't that clarified, the end, what in gods name (in Aslans name) did happen?
So, what, they died? Or did I read things that you haven't written? ... Did you made that sentence up, the one: star light, star bright, first star i see tonight, i wish i may, i wish i might, have the wish i wish tonight? because I love it. I just love your stories, and this one too, though indeed it isn't that clarified, the end, what in gods name (in Aslans name) did happen?