for The Will Of A Single Man7/27/2012 c25 Guest
Lol does anybody else wanna see some more Frost and Sasha or is it just me?
Lol does anybody else wanna see some more Frost and Sasha or is it just me?
4/23/2012 c22 Teir 1 guy
you keep misusing there, their, and they're other than that awesome story
you keep misusing there, their, and they're other than that awesome story
4/22/2012 c3 operator BEAR
What is with everyone misspelling and,
it's and not an,
What is with everyone misspelling and,
it's and not an,
3/21/2012 c34
4Capt.Freedom
you already know where i stand on all this so their is no point is saying it again for i think the 5th time lol. but this has been a great story.
4Capt.Freedomyou already know where i stand on all this so their is no point is saying it again for i think the 5th time lol. but this has been a great story.
3/21/2012 c34
6Antonio XZ
AWSOME! I ALMOST CRIED WITH THIS ENDING! AND THERE IS NO IF YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL!
6Antonio XZAWSOME! I ALMOST CRIED WITH THIS ENDING! AND THERE IS NO IF YOU HAVE TO MAKE A SEQUEL!
3/21/2012 c34
6SergeantJohnston
:'( I wanted to cry so much in this chapter. I have no idea of course, but I felt like it! I loved her dream with Soap, Grich and the rest of the team. I would've liked to hear Soap maybe ask Diamond something, like tell her whatever, but that would've been probably very cheesy so yours is better (as always!)
and, Oh my God, Diamond! Don't leave! Price will break into old-man-hysterics!
So, overall, I frickin' love this story and yes they better be a sequel or I want a refund! Lol, just kidding.
Please continue soon, would ya please? :D
6SergeantJohnston:'( I wanted to cry so much in this chapter. I have no idea of course, but I felt like it! I loved her dream with Soap, Grich and the rest of the team. I would've liked to hear Soap maybe ask Diamond something, like tell her whatever, but that would've been probably very cheesy so yours is better (as always!)
and, Oh my God, Diamond! Don't leave! Price will break into old-man-hysterics!
So, overall, I frickin' love this story and yes they better be a sequel or I want a refund! Lol, just kidding.
Please continue soon, would ya please? :D
3/20/2012 c33
4Capt.Freedom
you have to keep this story going there are no if. and's or but's unless you want me to kick yours lol jkjk. you should keep it going and all that plz plz keep it going.
4Capt.Freedomyou have to keep this story going there are no if. and's or but's unless you want me to kick yours lol jkjk. you should keep it going and all that plz plz keep it going.
3/19/2012 c33 Koishi K. Komeiji
This IS copied almost word-for-word from the transcript; it's just changed a little so that the Mary-Sue can fit in.
This IS copied almost word-for-word from the transcript; it's just changed a little so that the Mary-Sue can fit in.
3/19/2012 c33
6SergeantJohnston
Ignore the guy beneath me! This is awesome, though I'm sad there's not more but I don't care! I really hope there's going to be a sequel and soon! You know, before I go insane and yadda yadda lol:) Loved it all the way, every word of every chapter! I feel like re-reading just to feel it all over again! :D
6SergeantJohnstonIgnore the guy beneath me! This is awesome, though I'm sad there's not more but I don't care! I really hope there's going to be a sequel and soon! You know, before I go insane and yadda yadda lol:) Loved it all the way, every word of every chapter! I feel like re-reading just to feel it all over again! :D
3/19/2012 c33 Guest
This appears to have been taken directly from the COD Wikia transcript and just fiddled with...You didn't even change it from present tense to past tense. Lazy?
This appears to have been taken directly from the COD Wikia transcript and just fiddled with...You didn't even change it from present tense to past tense. Lazy?
3/15/2012 c32 SergeantJohnston
Awww Dream Makarov you suck! It still sucks that Grinch's gone and cannot wait until the next chapter. Lol, Melody can't do anything, I guess poor her :( I hope Diamond doesn't die but I don't want Yuri to die either... I'll just leave that decision to you:)
Please, pretty please, update soon before I go mad:D
Awww Dream Makarov you suck! It still sucks that Grinch's gone and cannot wait until the next chapter. Lol, Melody can't do anything, I guess poor her :( I hope Diamond doesn't die but I don't want Yuri to die either... I'll just leave that decision to you:)
Please, pretty please, update soon before I go mad:D
3/15/2012 c32
6Antonio XZ
So this story is not canon with come what may? HMM... oh well i think you should release a version that is! :)
6Antonio XZSo this story is not canon with come what may? HMM... oh well i think you should release a version that is! :)
3/15/2012 c32
4Capt.Freedom
this has been a great story i wish that you will continue it after the game maybe make stuff up for them and all that, that's about all i can say for this review lol.
4Capt.Freedomthis has been a great story i wish that you will continue it after the game maybe make stuff up for them and all that, that's about all i can say for this review lol.
