for Guardian2/5 c19 Guest
Please come back to this fandom and write more T7s stories!
Please come back to this fandom and write more T7s stories!
2/5 c19 Guest
Badass story! Great job dude! Can't wait to read the sequel please write more T7s stuff!
Badass story! Great job dude! Can't wait to read the sequel please write more T7s stuff!
1/16 c13 Pamy
I really enjoy your story but it makes me cringes every time you confuse "Then" & "Than" or "Your" & "You're" .
Your/you're cat. (YOUR since it is yours.)
You're/Your a coward. (You're since You are a coward. You cannot possess a coward as an object/possession.)
I am more Then/Than a friend. (Than)
I rather kill him then kill you. (List of things to do).
Please fix them.
I really enjoy your story but it makes me cringes every time you confuse "Then" & "Than" or "Your" & "You're" .
Your/you're cat. (YOUR since it is yours.)
You're/Your a coward. (You're since You are a coward. You cannot possess a coward as an object/possession.)
I am more Then/Than a friend. (Than)
I rather kill him then kill you. (List of things to do).
Please fix them.
12/28/2012 c19 
68nannygirl
Thought this final chapter was a really great one! I really loved that you gave some bits of closure but still left some holes in there that can be filled with the sequel in the future.
Really felt so bad for Frankie at the beginning still blaming himself and wishing he had been left to die. Could completely understand Red and him not wanting to welcome Frankie back into his home but I loved how loyal Eric, Fez, and Kelso were wanting Frankie to stay in their lives. Very nice to read. Bet Hyde would have done the same if he were awake.
Nicely written action part with Fez and Frankie too, built up to the next scene with the other three. When the guys saw Bud…wish Hyde had been there to see his reaction too. Still can’t believe it was Bud this whole time and I so want to know the back story on this. Frankie’s words were strong but I was really surprised Bud just walked out like that, this definitely isn’t over.
Was kinda hoping for a bigger reunion scene with the girls but I’m glad they still got to thank Frankie especially before he did what he did. I did not see that part coming and the gangs reactions were great. Don’t think Frankie is dead though and not just because i don’t want to believe it, think he faked his death to keep the others safe and his father wouldn’t bother them anymore.
Overall I enjoyed this last chapter. It gave some closure but I think it also raised some questions. A sequel in the future is something I am looking forward to! :D
Congrats on completing this story. I look forward to reading more from you. Till then keep up the really great work!
68nannygirlThought this final chapter was a really great one! I really loved that you gave some bits of closure but still left some holes in there that can be filled with the sequel in the future.
Really felt so bad for Frankie at the beginning still blaming himself and wishing he had been left to die. Could completely understand Red and him not wanting to welcome Frankie back into his home but I loved how loyal Eric, Fez, and Kelso were wanting Frankie to stay in their lives. Very nice to read. Bet Hyde would have done the same if he were awake.
Nicely written action part with Fez and Frankie too, built up to the next scene with the other three. When the guys saw Bud…wish Hyde had been there to see his reaction too. Still can’t believe it was Bud this whole time and I so want to know the back story on this. Frankie’s words were strong but I was really surprised Bud just walked out like that, this definitely isn’t over.
Was kinda hoping for a bigger reunion scene with the girls but I’m glad they still got to thank Frankie especially before he did what he did. I did not see that part coming and the gangs reactions were great. Don’t think Frankie is dead though and not just because i don’t want to believe it, think he faked his death to keep the others safe and his father wouldn’t bother them anymore.
Overall I enjoyed this last chapter. It gave some closure but I think it also raised some questions. A sequel in the future is something I am looking forward to! :D
Congrats on completing this story. I look forward to reading more from you. Till then keep up the really great work!
12/28/2012 c19 Guest
That's it? Seriously? You have is wait so long for an update and you give us this? There could and should have beenuch more to have it end this way and after so long is truly disappointing. You have lost this reader and I'm sure many more.
That's it? Seriously? You have is wait so long for an update and you give us this? There could and should have beenuch more to have it end this way and after so long is truly disappointing. You have lost this reader and I'm sure many more.
12/18/2012 c18 Guest
Update!
Update!
9/1/2012 c18 68nannygirl
Great update!
A very very intense chapter. I really feel bad Laurie it’s really hard imagining her like that and the part where she started screaming at Jackie was just one of the very intense moments. The conversation with the two that followed was nice though.
But then Eric’s hand being tossed onto *Jackie’s* lap…an oh my gosh moment—and not a good oh my gosh.
Good job at doing the recap for both us readers and the girls. And another Oh my gosh moment… BUD is Frankie’s father? Did not see that coming! And now I’ve got so many questions! Like how did they not know this? What year is this supposed to b taking place? Is WB in the picture yet? And Red once beating Bud because he wasn’t a good father…wow another unexpected reveling piece…was that part of why he’s doing all of this now? Why would he do that to Steven?
Lots and lots of questions, looking forward to some answers! :)
Nice job on this chapter! Looking Forward to more! Keep up the great work!
68nannygirlGreat update!
A very very intense chapter. I really feel bad Laurie it’s really hard imagining her like that and the part where she started screaming at Jackie was just one of the very intense moments. The conversation with the two that followed was nice though.
But then Eric’s hand being tossed onto *Jackie’s* lap…an oh my gosh moment—and not a good oh my gosh.
Good job at doing the recap for both us readers and the girls. And another Oh my gosh moment… BUD is Frankie’s father? Did not see that coming! And now I’ve got so many questions! Like how did they not know this? What year is this supposed to b taking place? Is WB in the picture yet? And Red once beating Bud because he wasn’t a good father…wow another unexpected reveling piece…was that part of why he’s doing all of this now? Why would he do that to Steven?
Lots and lots of questions, looking forward to some answers! :)
Nice job on this chapter! Looking Forward to more! Keep up the great work!
8/9/2012 c17 eric cartman 1987
You really had Eric's hand cut off and Hyde's eye shot out. I thought you were joking
You really had Eric's hand cut off and Hyde's eye shot out. I thought you were joking
8/9/2012 c17 Zen Master 93
You should let Frankie leave, just so they can see that they need him and have him come back
You should let Frankie leave, just so they can see that they need him and have him come back
8/7/2012 c17 68nannygirl
Wonderful work on this chapter! So very happy to see an update on this story!
Poor Frankie is really beating himself up on this. And having Red screaming and being angry at him I’m sure isn’t helping. Of course I can understand completely why Red si so upset and I think he has every right to be but at the same time I’m with Kelso who’s making a lot of sense. He may not always be the brightest light bulb but in this chapter he really did shine. Very nice job on that!
So glad that Eric is going to be okay! The scene with him and Red was very nicely done! I liked the bit with Eric sleep talking was very sweet. Loved Eric arguing against Red about kicking Frankie out, that was very much something I could see him doing.
Oh no Hyde’s fallen into a coma? That’s not exactly good news or maybe it’s one of those comas that the patient falls into to so that their bodies can recover. Let’s hope its that kind!
Terrific work on this chapter! Thank you so much for an update! Looking forward to the next chapter! And keep up the wonderful work!
68nannygirlWonderful work on this chapter! So very happy to see an update on this story!
Poor Frankie is really beating himself up on this. And having Red screaming and being angry at him I’m sure isn’t helping. Of course I can understand completely why Red si so upset and I think he has every right to be but at the same time I’m with Kelso who’s making a lot of sense. He may not always be the brightest light bulb but in this chapter he really did shine. Very nice job on that!
So glad that Eric is going to be okay! The scene with him and Red was very nicely done! I liked the bit with Eric sleep talking was very sweet. Loved Eric arguing against Red about kicking Frankie out, that was very much something I could see him doing.
Oh no Hyde’s fallen into a coma? That’s not exactly good news or maybe it’s one of those comas that the patient falls into to so that their bodies can recover. Let’s hope its that kind!
Terrific work on this chapter! Thank you so much for an update! Looking forward to the next chapter! And keep up the wonderful work!