for Limitless3/8 c4
2Samtastic V2.0
Wow! I'm surprised Violet is taking crap from some B*tch she could easily cripple just like that (snap!) And Ethan seems like some creep who wants to ask Vi out and then hopes to "get some" on the first date. But hey, he could be something more.
It's a little sad, seeing as it's obvious Vi isn't ready to live on her own, and seems to be trying a little too hard. But still, can't wait to see what happens next
2Samtastic V2.0Wow! I'm surprised Violet is taking crap from some B*tch she could easily cripple just like that (snap!) And Ethan seems like some creep who wants to ask Vi out and then hopes to "get some" on the first date. But hey, he could be something more.
It's a little sad, seeing as it's obvious Vi isn't ready to live on her own, and seems to be trying a little too hard. But still, can't wait to see what happens next
3/4 c3 taburde
It's nice to see a fic that is centered around Violet and doesn't have Syndrome in it. He's dead and should stay dead.
On a note of this fic: loving it! Looking forward to a new update.
It's nice to see a fic that is centered around Violet and doesn't have Syndrome in it. He's dead and should stay dead.
On a note of this fic: loving it! Looking forward to a new update.
10/10/2012 c3
36Hockeygirl28
wow i love this, there's so much mystery and suspense, i dont think i've read a story just about violet that is as good as your's i think you wrote the character well and overall you've done a fantastical job so far, keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! (please i am very much in love with this story)
-HockeyGirl out...
36Hockeygirl28wow i love this, there's so much mystery and suspense, i dont think i've read a story just about violet that is as good as your's i think you wrote the character well and overall you've done a fantastical job so far, keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON! (please i am very much in love with this story)
-HockeyGirl out...
7/28/2012 c3 Andy Nonomous
Ok, I don't like Jenny. She honestly reminds me of my mom's boss: an airhead with a big head. Repeating orders is NOT brown nosing. If I can suggest something: have something she charishes (like her car or something) get destroyed "accidentally" by Violet in some Super stuff, even though Violet doesn't want to do that anymore.
And the Strongholds seem like jerks. Just because another super comes to town and stops a mugger does NOT mean they're trying to take over. Maybe Violet shouldn't go to their meeting, just to tick them off.
These aren't criticisms, just annoyance.
I do feel bad for Violet. Having to leave home, getting a ratty apartment and an arrogant boss, and possibly being forced back into supering. So sad.
But hey, I'm sure you've got good ideas for this story, so updatre soon.
Ok, I don't like Jenny. She honestly reminds me of my mom's boss: an airhead with a big head. Repeating orders is NOT brown nosing. If I can suggest something: have something she charishes (like her car or something) get destroyed "accidentally" by Violet in some Super stuff, even though Violet doesn't want to do that anymore.
And the Strongholds seem like jerks. Just because another super comes to town and stops a mugger does NOT mean they're trying to take over. Maybe Violet shouldn't go to their meeting, just to tick them off.
These aren't criticisms, just annoyance.
I do feel bad for Violet. Having to leave home, getting a ratty apartment and an arrogant boss, and possibly being forced back into supering. So sad.
But hey, I'm sure you've got good ideas for this story, so updatre soon.
7/27/2012 c3
2Samtastic V2.0
Is Violet gonna go? I mean, she doesn't wanna be a super anymore, she just couldn't stop herself at that one moment.
If I could offer a suggestion, have her not go, then see what happens. OOH! Maybe have her not do any supering for a while, but have the Stronghold's be sure that she's up to something. Just suggestions.
Please update soon :)
2Samtastic V2.0Is Violet gonna go? I mean, she doesn't wanna be a super anymore, she just couldn't stop herself at that one moment.
If I could offer a suggestion, have her not go, then see what happens. OOH! Maybe have her not do any supering for a while, but have the Stronghold's be sure that she's up to something. Just suggestions.
Please update soon :)
3/5/2012 c2
4SonicxAmyFan4Life
Violet's having a hard time today. :/ Well, old habits are hard to break. I don't know if she'll honestly ever 'BE NORMAL' even though that's what she wants the most. Idk, that's just me. Enjoyed reading the chapter! Keep going! :D
4SonicxAmyFan4LifeViolet's having a hard time today. :/ Well, old habits are hard to break. I don't know if she'll honestly ever 'BE NORMAL' even though that's what she wants the most. Idk, that's just me. Enjoyed reading the chapter! Keep going! :D
2/7/2012 c1 SonicxAmyFan4Life
I've never viewed Violet in this way, but reading this has given me a different perspective of how the REAL Violet could be. :) I really like it so far and am anxious to see how she'll do! Keep going!
I've never viewed Violet in this way, but reading this has given me a different perspective of how the REAL Violet could be. :) I really like it so far and am anxious to see how she'll do! Keep going!
