for Sairento Yume Sairento Ai4/24 c2 
5XxxEiriYumeIchikawaxxX
Awww... poor Miuta ;;
This is really interesting so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
5XxxEiriYumeIchikawaxxXAwww... poor Miuta ;;
This is really interesting so far! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
4/24 c2 Annaerockz03
I really like the story ;) I really like the plot, conflict and Miuta too! Also I find it more unique than others. I hope you can update soon! :))
I really like the story ;) I really like the plot, conflict and Miuta too! Also I find it more unique than others. I hope you can update soon! :))
4/22 c2 Confusion
What you put in this chapter kind of conflict with what you said in the last chapter... Did you know that? Miuta was first disowned by her parents and sent to Japan (making me assume both parents were alive at the moment. Of course, I realized she could just have a stepmother instead.), but in this chapter you say that she was with her aunt and willing left... So which is true?
What you put in this chapter kind of conflict with what you said in the last chapter... Did you know that? Miuta was first disowned by her parents and sent to Japan (making me assume both parents were alive at the moment. Of course, I realized she could just have a stepmother instead.), but in this chapter you say that she was with her aunt and willing left... So which is true?
7/7/2012 c1 2invisible-gurl
lol wow... that was unexpected... sooo she's in ryo-chibi's class but is already friends with kuni-chan P great job and plz update soon
2invisible-gurllol wow... that was unexpected... sooo she's in ryo-chibi's class but is already friends with kuni-chan P great job and plz update soon
3/7/2012 c1 Anonymous
Wait a minute...Tezuka actually made a friend on his own? It's a miracle. Also, I kind of want this to be a Tezukaxoc, but its's up to you. Just giving you my figurative ten cents.
Wait a minute...Tezuka actually made a friend on his own? It's a miracle. Also, I kind of want this to be a Tezukaxoc, but its's up to you. Just giving you my figurative ten cents.
2/7/2012 c1 9Quietjay21
The story has a good start. The beginning though was a little rocky for me though because of the whole disowning thing but I want to see how you proceed with the story. Update soon. :)
9Quietjay21The story has a good start. The beginning though was a little rocky for me though because of the whole disowning thing but I want to see how you proceed with the story. Update soon. :)
2/7/2012 c1 6RockPrincess410
Miuta's a pretty name ^^
I dunno what to say, 'cause I love the plot!
Update soon :)
p.s. Happy Valentine's day (I'm really random :P)
6RockPrincess410Miuta's a pretty name ^^
I dunno what to say, 'cause I love the plot!
Update soon :)
p.s. Happy Valentine's day (I'm really random :P)