for The Fanfic Incident10/13/2012 c9 soulreaper18
Love this story! i seem to be reading through all your lassiet tales as of late, and this was great as usual. The shawn and gus parts felt just like their antics in a real esp. of psych.
Love this story! i seem to be reading through all your lassiet tales as of late, and this was great as usual. The shawn and gus parts felt just like their antics in a real esp. of psych.
3/1/2012 c9 Gwynevere1
I liked the affectionate snark of this meta-fic. I also liked the original female characters. I am glad that you did not make any of the women the murderer.
As for the Joniettes' vitriol against the Daliettes-I see what you did there. I have never seen such hatred for a non-canon, non-chan, non-incest ship spouted by another group of shippers like Lassiter/Juliet is hated by Shawn/Jules shippers.
My one problem with your story is that there is no Gus equivalent on 'Fake'. Maybe you did this on purpose, as commentary on the way fandom, in general, ignores characters of color in favor of writing about white people. However, I feel you needed to make this more explicit-e.g., have Gus comment on how no one ever writes about the black guy.
I liked the affectionate snark of this meta-fic. I also liked the original female characters. I am glad that you did not make any of the women the murderer.
As for the Joniettes' vitriol against the Daliettes-I see what you did there. I have never seen such hatred for a non-canon, non-chan, non-incest ship spouted by another group of shippers like Lassiter/Juliet is hated by Shawn/Jules shippers.
My one problem with your story is that there is no Gus equivalent on 'Fake'. Maybe you did this on purpose, as commentary on the way fandom, in general, ignores characters of color in favor of writing about white people. However, I feel you needed to make this more explicit-e.g., have Gus comment on how no one ever writes about the black guy.
2/21/2012 c9 
38Hummingbird2
'Lawson's Coastal Dining' Hmm, why does that sound so familiar? That was great (and I actually had it figured out! Woohoo!), thank you!
38Hummingbird2'Lawson's Coastal Dining' Hmm, why does that sound so familiar? That was great (and I actually had it figured out! Woohoo!), thank you!
2/19/2012 c9 16whimsical-one-ga
Nice finish to a fun story, cute that everyone made the connection between characters. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
16whimsical-one-gaNice finish to a fun story, cute that everyone made the connection between characters. Thanks for writing and sharing it.
2/19/2012 c9 21dragonmactir
Oo, pure love. I am a little sad that it's over, but that means you're now free to start a NEW wonderful story, which is good (hint hint).
21dragonmactirOo, pure love. I am a little sad that it's over, but that means you're now free to start a NEW wonderful story, which is good (hint hint).
2/19/2012 c9 29Lawson227
First off, I really, really like the tweaks you made to CH 8- I don't think you had anything to be unhappy with, necessarily, but they really did add a lot emotionally.
WRT CH9, what a fun, lovely way to wrap it up, with a wonderful LOL moment in:
His eyes grew wide. "Jules, no! That—that goes against canon!"
Damn skippy it does... :)
29Lawson227First off, I really, really like the tweaks you made to CH 8- I don't think you had anything to be unhappy with, necessarily, but they really did add a lot emotionally.
WRT CH9, what a fun, lovely way to wrap it up, with a wonderful LOL moment in:
His eyes grew wide. "Jules, no! That—that goes against canon!"
Damn skippy it does... :)
2/19/2012 c9 hfce
Oh my goodness what a great wrap up of this story. I loved it. I am so sad to see it go but great job. :)
Oh my goodness what a great wrap up of this story. I loved it. I am so sad to see it go but great job. :)
2/19/2012 c9 9the-omnomnom-phenomenon
I think the word "gurgle" accurately describes the sounds I made at all the Carlton/Juliet moments!
And was so surprised (and delighted) at this update! I didn't think it would be so soon! I'm sad to see thins story end. though! I don't think I've ever read a story with such a unique plot! Keep it up Loafer!
9the-omnomnom-phenomenonI think the word "gurgle" accurately describes the sounds I made at all the Carlton/Juliet moments!
And was so surprised (and delighted) at this update! I didn't think it would be so soon! I'm sad to see thins story end. though! I don't think I've ever read a story with such a unique plot! Keep it up Loafer!
2/19/2012 c9 GiGi
Epilogue? i do hope so.
Epilogue? i do hope so.
2/19/2012 c8 the-omnomnom-phenomenon
I got sad when I saw the story alert, but then I realized it's not the last chapter! And I kinda wanted to slap Katherine because of how she was going off on the Detectives! And the best part was that Carlton/Juliet kiss!
I got sad when I saw the story alert, but then I realized it's not the last chapter! And I kinda wanted to slap Katherine because of how she was going off on the Detectives! And the best part was that Carlton/Juliet kiss!
2/18/2012 c8 hfce
Wow that was good. The kisses were unexpected but nice. The end was interesting. So many suspects but starting to narrow it done.
Wow that was good. The kisses were unexpected but nice. The end was interesting. So many suspects but starting to narrow it done.
2/18/2012 c8 16whimsical-one-ga
Nice to see Lassiter and Juliet buying into their "ship", nice kissing scenes also. Wouldn't mind seeing this on the show :)
16whimsical-one-gaNice to see Lassiter and Juliet buying into their "ship", nice kissing scenes also. Wouldn't mind seeing this on the show :)