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64Slytherin Cat
Cute :p James sounds a bit like an idiot, but a nice one ;)
It's an interesting pairing and I liked how you described their relationship in this. I actually think I'd love to see more of this pairing... (I'll have to look into it :p)
Good work ;)
64Slytherin CatCute :p James sounds a bit like an idiot, but a nice one ;)
It's an interesting pairing and I liked how you described their relationship in this. I actually think I'd love to see more of this pairing... (I'll have to look into it :p)
Good work ;)
5/10 c1 Slytherin Cat
Great drabble :p I may not be a fan of RoseScorpius, but this was really good and I loved reading this. I liked that you wrote this using present, because I don't really read a lot of fics written in that time :p
I think those few lines described perfectly how I think their relationship would be though.
Good work :)
Great drabble :p I may not be a fan of RoseScorpius, but this was really good and I loved reading this. I liked that you wrote this using present, because I don't really read a lot of fics written in that time :p
I think those few lines described perfectly how I think their relationship would be though.
Good work :)
4/14 c57 73Fire The Canon
I liked this one too. Poor Molly, it would be a bit of a shock if your cousin just comes up to you and kisses you like that... dare or not...
Great writing.
73Fire The CanonI liked this one too. Poor Molly, it would be a bit of a shock if your cousin just comes up to you and kisses you like that... dare or not...
Great writing.
4/14 c77 Fire The Canon
Lol. This one made me laugh. Typical males... and there's two of them :P
Great, humorous fic here. I really liked this one.
Lol. This one made me laugh. Typical males... and there's two of them :P
Great, humorous fic here. I really liked this one.
4/13 c41 Fire The Canon
Poor Lily.
Mina sounds interesting, and I'm actually curious to see if you've written anymore about her (have you?)
Well done.
Poor Lily.
Mina sounds interesting, and I'm actually curious to see if you've written anymore about her (have you?)
Well done.
4/13 c83 Fire The Canon
Awwww, I like Jacques. He seems sweet. And he's French.
I liked that the two of them could bond of Quidditch - as boys do... boys and sport (I'd shake my head, but I am 10 times worse than any guy I know).
Great job.
Awwww, I like Jacques. He seems sweet. And he's French.
I liked that the two of them could bond of Quidditch - as boys do... boys and sport (I'd shake my head, but I am 10 times worse than any guy I know).
Great job.
4/11 c66 Fire The Canon
Awwww. But... it's Teddy :) It's canon :)
This was beautiful, bad sad. Well done in writing this. You did a great job!
Awwww. But... it's Teddy :) It's canon :)
This was beautiful, bad sad. Well done in writing this. You did a great job!
4/11 c76 Fire The Canon
Hahaha, I really like your Lysander :P Very blunt. And I thought the ending to this was great too. The way it ended... I love open-ended endings. They're the best kind.
Great job!
Hahaha, I really like your Lysander :P Very blunt. And I thought the ending to this was great too. The way it ended... I love open-ended endings. They're the best kind.
Great job!
3/30 c36 18MOLLY THE MONSTER
Another one I'd never consider. But I like it anyway. I especially like the way there's no space between LucyandLouis in the last line. And I like a lot of the themes in these drabbles. They don't care what anyone thinks. They're gonna do what they want. It's sweet. And I really like it.
18MOLLY THE MONSTERAnother one I'd never consider. But I like it anyway. I especially like the way there's no space between LucyandLouis in the last line. And I like a lot of the themes in these drabbles. They don't care what anyone thinks. They're gonna do what they want. It's sweet. And I really like it.
3/30 c35 MOLLY THE MONSTER
All of these weird pairings. Haha. All of the pairings I never would have considered. I mean, Lily and Victoire? But that's another reason why I like these drabbles. I mean, the idea of the cousincest weirds me out, but when I get past it, this was adorable. :) I loved the last line. You don't have to say what they're doing, but we know what they're doing. Haha.
All of these weird pairings. Haha. All of the pairings I never would have considered. I mean, Lily and Victoire? But that's another reason why I like these drabbles. I mean, the idea of the cousincest weirds me out, but when I get past it, this was adorable. :) I loved the last line. You don't have to say what they're doing, but we know what they're doing. Haha.
3/29 c117 132Cheeky Slytherin Lass
Lorcan/Rose. Never would have considered these two, but I like what you did with this piece. It was so simple, yet so lovely.
Very sweet. I absolutely Lorcan, and you captured him wonderfully here. I can't help but imagine he'd be like his mum, and that's exactly who he reminded me of here.
Overall, excellent job.
132Cheeky Slytherin LassLorcan/Rose. Never would have considered these two, but I like what you did with this piece. It was so simple, yet so lovely.
Very sweet. I absolutely Lorcan, and you captured him wonderfully here. I can't help but imagine he'd be like his mum, and that's exactly who he reminded me of here.
Overall, excellent job.
3/27 c33 18MOLLY THE MONSTER
Aww. That's so cute. I like that she's a year older than he is. And I like that Scorpius had no idea how she ever made time for him. And then it turns out that she liked him too. Aww. That's adorable. I approve. I love how I don't ship 90% of the couples in these drabbles, but I like them anyway!
18MOLLY THE MONSTERAww. That's so cute. I like that she's a year older than he is. And I like that Scorpius had no idea how she ever made time for him. And then it turns out that she liked him too. Aww. That's adorable. I approve. I love how I don't ship 90% of the couples in these drabbles, but I like them anyway!
3/27 c32 MOLLY THE MONSTER
Aww. Poor Hugo. I love how he'd ask her out even though she'd say no. So much unrequited love in these drabbles. It's so sad. They should try branching out and making friends with people other than their cousins. Haha. Also, the idea of the regular commentator getting injured by a Bludger really amuses me, though I'm not sure why.
Aww. Poor Hugo. I love how he'd ask her out even though she'd say no. So much unrequited love in these drabbles. It's so sad. They should try branching out and making friends with people other than their cousins. Haha. Also, the idea of the regular commentator getting injured by a Bludger really amuses me, though I'm not sure why.
3/27 c31 MOLLY THE MONSTER
Lysander doesn't care what people think because he's the son of Luna Lovegood of course! I can definitely see why Lysander doesn't care what anyone else thinks. And I agree with Lysander. If people don't want to be friends with them because the two of them are together, then who cares. Good for you Lysander. Haha.
Lysander doesn't care what people think because he's the son of Luna Lovegood of course! I can definitely see why Lysander doesn't care what anyone else thinks. And I agree with Lysander. If people don't want to be friends with them because the two of them are together, then who cares. Good for you Lysander. Haha.
3/27 c29 MOLLY THE MONSTER
Awww. Poor Lorcan. I imagine Victoire stringing him along, but not necessarily on purpose. She just flirts with all the boys, and Lorcan happens to be one of them. Poor kid. I also like how you sneak in your other headcanon bits, like Roxanne being a good Quidditch player and Lily being troublesome! Haha.
Awww. Poor Lorcan. I imagine Victoire stringing him along, but not necessarily on purpose. She just flirts with all the boys, and Lorcan happens to be one of them. Poor kid. I also like how you sneak in your other headcanon bits, like Roxanne being a good Quidditch player and Lily being troublesome! Haha.