for The New Girl9/8/2012 c6 Pizzagirl2060
Love it lala except you have a typo
Love it lala except you have a typo
7/27/2012 c9 
16Dally-Fang
I really enjoy your story so far, especially when Ponyboy adopted Layla. I think you portrayed all the characters correctly, and I love Pauleen. Great job! :)
16Dally-FangI really enjoy your story so far, especially when Ponyboy adopted Layla. I think you portrayed all the characters correctly, and I love Pauleen. Great job! :)
4/7/2012 c7 Could be better
I just read the first chapter and this is a very Sue related story. I mean it's not like they would immeadiately have the same classes and teachers her first day of school. And if he wasn't even talking to her at first and all of a sudden likes her? Unrealistic. Work on writing a more realistic story. Act like it was you and what would happen in real life.
I just read the first chapter and this is a very Sue related story. I mean it's not like they would immeadiately have the same classes and teachers her first day of school. And if he wasn't even talking to her at first and all of a sudden likes her? Unrealistic. Work on writing a more realistic story. Act like it was you and what would happen in real life.
2/27/2012 c4 SeeingBeliever98
Awwwwwww this is sweet but I doubt that they would feel that comfortable around eachother already. But I really do like it. :) update soon.
-Aislinn
Awwwwwww this is sweet but I doubt that they would feel that comfortable around eachother already. But I really do like it. :) update soon.
-Aislinn
2/14/2012 c3 Pidia
So cute and update soon
So cute and update soon
2/8/2012 c2 1TheCullenThatWasAGreaser
I really liked this. Please continue and update soon!
~Stay Gold
1TheCullenThatWasAGreaserI really liked this. Please continue and update soon!
~Stay Gold
2/8/2012 c2 Pidia
Awsome story cant wait for your next update, make it soon
Awsome story cant wait for your next update, make it soon