for Near Death2/8/2012 c1 
24AVP5
Wow nice way to start the story and the ending was good too. Keep it up when your not busy bye.
24AVP5Wow nice way to start the story and the ending was good too. Keep it up when your not busy bye.
2/8/2012 c1 14shadowrose6x
for a one-shot this was very good, would be cool if you continued this though it would probably be very interesting if you went on with this plot :] I liked this, your writing is always fun to read and suspenseful ;D
14shadowrose6xfor a one-shot this was very good, would be cool if you continued this though it would probably be very interesting if you went on with this plot :] I liked this, your writing is always fun to read and suspenseful ;D