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3/18/2012 c4 3DarkHanyou21
Love the story go on! PLZ!:)
3/18/2012 c4 14The New Taisho Woman
Wow...that was interesting! Sorry for taking sooo very long to read and review, but i was being lazy and life caugh tup with me...so yea. Anyway like i said, that was really cool. i like the twist you put in this chappie. I mentally shouted "SUDDEN CHANGE IN PLOT!" in my head and now i'm officially hooked on curiosity as to what you'll do with the story from this point...so update soon!
3/16/2012 c4 2Aozora no kishi
Don't say that you're a bad author, because you're so goooood! I was hooked the WHOLE time! (I swear it'll probably be the DEATH of me!)X_X I couldn't bear to tear myself away, and I'm psyched to read the next installment! Your opening/beginning was awesome, so don't say it stinks!:( Ok? :)
3/16/2012 c4 15SuperAlpha96
I like it that you've added characters! And I think the new Inuhanyo will be interesting!

And the reincarnation? - That's going to be a blast!

I can just tell!

X33

Sorry it took so long to read your story!
3/16/2012 c2 SuperAlpha96
well don't break your keyboard!
3/16/2012 c1 SuperAlpha96
I like it!
3/15/2012 c4 4Sakura Tsubari
Yay! YAY! You updated!
3/15/2012 c4 1xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx
Gasp! I won? Shock! Shock! Shock! ;D

Oh, yes, yes, yes- this chapter was very interesting. Either Sesshomaru had two love children by a human or those are Inuyasha and Kaggie's kids from the future.

Odd, but not impossible, eh? Eeee~eeh?

Chapter Question Answer: I'm thinking about "Kanna of The Void". She came in like episode...40...or 41. One of the two.
3/1/2012 c3 14The New Taisho Woman
OMG THIS WAS SOOO GOOD! Lol on Kagome sleepwalking, nice creative spark there. Anyway I like how u did that part from Souta's PoV, it was a really good idea. I'm so proud of you! (IDK WHY i said that!)

Anywho update soon! I hope u get more reviews! 4 cookies for u 'cause of ur awesome chappie here!
2/29/2012 c3 1xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx
Hahaha, poor Souta. Had to eat paper-flavored graaa~aaass! =P

Another great chapter! Glad you updated it!

* "Wirr 'abbann wice amma uch a waccawwi"- I'm gonna take a whack at it and say 'We're having rice and a bunch of broccoli'. Heh, that sounds about right.
2/29/2012 c3 2Aozora no kishi
So goooooooood! Love this story so much! Really descriptive and there were a ton of expanded moments in there! Good job, leaving us at a tension part. It makes me want to say "Please continue with the story!" so much. Thank you for sharing this chappie on fan fiction and work hard! I think you're being cruel when you won't tell us what the last bit was about, but oh well! Guess it's all part of being a good writer! Do your best!
2/28/2012 c2 Aozora no kishi
Good job here. ^-^ But I think you could like, instead of just hello in the 1st paragraph of Kagome's POV, you add the parentheses around it. You know, in the sentence ( I phrase): "I hadn't even given them enough time to say hello before I stormed off to my room and slammed that door, too." Sorry, I'm just a "kohai" while you're my "sempai" at this. So who am I to talk, right? WRONG! It's called "peer editing", so we've gotta live up to it! Do your best! Go, PokePowerGirl100! Show them your style! o
2/28/2012 c1 Aozora no kishi
Wow! This is AWESOME! Good job, and please continue the story. I wanna know what happens next! What is going to happen?
2/20/2012 c2 3Mrs.Inuyasha-1
more more i need more i love the story but the chaps r to short! and i wanna know wats gona happen please rite more soon and nice story btw :)
2/19/2012 c2 14The New Taisho Woman
Lol this chapter was funny. Nice job on Shippo's POV! hurry up and update!

~Kagome-chan345
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