for Promises3/18/2012 c4
14The New Taisho Woman
Wow...that was interesting! Sorry for taking sooo very long to read and review, but i was being lazy and life caugh tup with me...so yea. Anyway like i said, that was really cool. i like the twist you put in this chappie. I mentally shouted "SUDDEN CHANGE IN PLOT!" in my head and now i'm officially hooked on curiosity as to what you'll do with the story from this point...so update soon!
14The New Taisho WomanWow...that was interesting! Sorry for taking sooo very long to read and review, but i was being lazy and life caugh tup with me...so yea. Anyway like i said, that was really cool. i like the twist you put in this chappie. I mentally shouted "SUDDEN CHANGE IN PLOT!" in my head and now i'm officially hooked on curiosity as to what you'll do with the story from this point...so update soon!
3/16/2012 c4
2Aozora no kishi
Don't say that you're a bad author, because you're so goooood! I was hooked the WHOLE time! (I swear it'll probably be the DEATH of me!)X_X I couldn't bear to tear myself away, and I'm psyched to read the next installment! Your opening/beginning was awesome, so don't say it stinks!:( Ok? :)
2Aozora no kishiDon't say that you're a bad author, because you're so goooood! I was hooked the WHOLE time! (I swear it'll probably be the DEATH of me!)X_X I couldn't bear to tear myself away, and I'm psyched to read the next installment! Your opening/beginning was awesome, so don't say it stinks!:( Ok? :)
3/16/2012 c4
15SuperAlpha96
I like it that you've added characters! And I think the new Inuhanyo will be interesting!
And the reincarnation? - That's going to be a blast!
I can just tell!
X33
Sorry it took so long to read your story!
15SuperAlpha96I like it that you've added characters! And I think the new Inuhanyo will be interesting!
And the reincarnation? - That's going to be a blast!
I can just tell!
X33
Sorry it took so long to read your story!
3/15/2012 c4
1xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx
Gasp! I won? Shock! Shock! Shock! ;D
Oh, yes, yes, yes- this chapter was very interesting. Either Sesshomaru had two love children by a human or those are Inuyasha and Kaggie's kids from the future.
Odd, but not impossible, eh? Eeee~eeh?
Chapter Question Answer: I'm thinking about "Kanna of The Void". She came in like episode...40...or 41. One of the two.
1xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXxGasp! I won? Shock! Shock! Shock! ;D
Oh, yes, yes, yes- this chapter was very interesting. Either Sesshomaru had two love children by a human or those are Inuyasha and Kaggie's kids from the future.
Odd, but not impossible, eh? Eeee~eeh?
Chapter Question Answer: I'm thinking about "Kanna of The Void". She came in like episode...40...or 41. One of the two.
3/1/2012 c3
14The New Taisho Woman
OMG THIS WAS SOOO GOOD! Lol on Kagome sleepwalking, nice creative spark there. Anyway I like how u did that part from Souta's PoV, it was a really good idea. I'm so proud of you! (IDK WHY i said that!)
Anywho update soon! I hope u get more reviews! 4 cookies for u 'cause of ur awesome chappie here!
14The New Taisho WomanOMG THIS WAS SOOO GOOD! Lol on Kagome sleepwalking, nice creative spark there. Anyway I like how u did that part from Souta's PoV, it was a really good idea. I'm so proud of you! (IDK WHY i said that!)
Anywho update soon! I hope u get more reviews! 4 cookies for u 'cause of ur awesome chappie here!
2/29/2012 c3
1xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXx
Hahaha, poor Souta. Had to eat paper-flavored graaa~aaass! =P
Another great chapter! Glad you updated it!
* "Wirr 'abbann wice amma uch a waccawwi"- I'm gonna take a whack at it and say 'We're having rice and a bunch of broccoli'. Heh, that sounds about right.
1xXxAddicted2ChocolatexXxHahaha, poor Souta. Had to eat paper-flavored graaa~aaass! =P
Another great chapter! Glad you updated it!
* "Wirr 'abbann wice amma uch a waccawwi"- I'm gonna take a whack at it and say 'We're having rice and a bunch of broccoli'. Heh, that sounds about right.
2/29/2012 c3
2Aozora no kishi
So goooooooood! Love this story so much! Really descriptive and there were a ton of expanded moments in there! Good job, leaving us at a tension part. It makes me want to say "Please continue with the story!" so much. Thank you for sharing this chappie on fan fiction and work hard! I think you're being cruel when you won't tell us what the last bit was about, but oh well! Guess it's all part of being a good writer! Do your best!
2Aozora no kishiSo goooooooood! Love this story so much! Really descriptive and there were a ton of expanded moments in there! Good job, leaving us at a tension part. It makes me want to say "Please continue with the story!" so much. Thank you for sharing this chappie on fan fiction and work hard! I think you're being cruel when you won't tell us what the last bit was about, but oh well! Guess it's all part of being a good writer! Do your best!
2/28/2012 c2 Aozora no kishi
Good job here. ^-^ But I think you could like, instead of just hello in the 1st paragraph of Kagome's POV, you add the parentheses around it. You know, in the sentence ( I phrase): "I hadn't even given them enough time to say hello before I stormed off to my room and slammed that door, too." Sorry, I'm just a "kohai" while you're my "sempai" at this. So who am I to talk, right? WRONG! It's called "peer editing", so we've gotta live up to it! Do your best! Go, PokePowerGirl100! Show them your style! o
Good job here. ^-^ But I think you could like, instead of just hello in the 1st paragraph of Kagome's POV, you add the parentheses around it. You know, in the sentence ( I phrase): "I hadn't even given them enough time to say hello before I stormed off to my room and slammed that door, too." Sorry, I'm just a "kohai" while you're my "sempai" at this. So who am I to talk, right? WRONG! It's called "peer editing", so we've gotta live up to it! Do your best! Go, PokePowerGirl100! Show them your style! o
2/28/2012 c1 Aozora no kishi
Wow! This is AWESOME! Good job, and please continue the story. I wanna know what happens next! What is going to happen?
Wow! This is AWESOME! Good job, and please continue the story. I wanna know what happens next! What is going to happen?
2/20/2012 c2
3Mrs.Inuyasha-1
more more i need more i love the story but the chaps r to short! and i wanna know wats gona happen please rite more soon and nice story btw :)
3Mrs.Inuyasha-1more more i need more i love the story but the chaps r to short! and i wanna know wats gona happen please rite more soon and nice story btw :)
2/19/2012 c2
14The New Taisho Woman
Lol this chapter was funny. Nice job on Shippo's POV! hurry up and update!
~Kagome-chan345
14The New Taisho WomanLol this chapter was funny. Nice job on Shippo's POV! hurry up and update!
~Kagome-chan345
