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5/21/2012 c1 4Gifted Shadows
Aww... It's so fluffery! I love it! Once again, Great Job!
2/13/2012 c1 1d3activat3d
So, honey. I am a horrible person for not reading or reviewing this sooner. But guess who’s laptop got overheated in the middle of reviewing? Ugh. I need a new laptop. Also, I’m really sorry for not replying to any of our messages. I had a huge headache all weekend and I didn’t want to do crap. So… I’m sorry. ): But I’m here now and I’m just about to read a story that I KNOW is gonna be amazing! (; ♥

Logie Twins! YES! (‘: YAY! YOU PUT THAT THERE! … Awe, girly, you’re so sweet. :3 I LOVE YOU TOO. And gurl I bet’chu that this ain’t horrible, okay? Okay.

Damn, gurl! I’m reading this first paragraph and I am IN SHOCK! You are AMAZING at writing! Don’t know why I never read your stuffs before!

I know that split moment. I know it well. I had it today. And the day before that. And the day before that. That moment haunts me. )’: Awe! But it’s even worse because it’s Logan… LOGAN IS UBER IMPORTANT NAH’M SAYIN’. Poor baby… He’s reached the level of suffocation! I’m gonna cry already. ):

I hate how these boys always think they’re supposed to be strong. Sometimes you just want to grab them and smack their butts and tell them, BEG them, to be babies for once.

On the outside. That’s how I feel. I CRY TO MYSELF TOO! I SCREAM AT MYSELF TOO! I can breathe, though. Breathing is fairly easy. BUT ALL THOSE OTHER THINGS, I DO, TOO! Oh, my gosh.

Dude I love the point-of-view you’re playing with. I LOVE this point-of-view. Sometimes past tense kills me. But then I forget to write in present-tense ‘cause I’m stupid.

Stupid? No. Logan, you’re not stupid, okay? Oh, my gosh. Math. Math, math, math. Math is the worst subject in the history of the world. Except in high school I might have to take this AP Math class. So, now I’m screwed. Anyways, math is a bxcth (I am censoring the word with an x) and it should die in hxll.

DUDE. YOU’RE A STALKER. Just kidding. You aren’t a stalker, I love you. (: But INVISIBLE IS MY FAVORITE BTR SONG IN ELEVATE! (‘: ♥ Next to Cover Girl. Agh. You’re so amazing.

Gustavo, you fxcking bxstard. OMG. Dude, I am sorry for cussing a lot. I’m in a cuss-y mood today. Only because I had high school orientation and I’m kind of mad right now because I don’t want to go to high school. I think I’m going to take Biology ‘cause I have no interest upon the matter of quantum physics.

That had nothing to do with the story. Moving on! As you might now, I get distracted easily. Okay. YES, LOGIEBEAR! You were singing well! I promise you were singing well even though I’m just reading it! But I’m listening to you sing right now and you’re singing very, very well! In fact, for a period of time I thought you were the best singer! You sing amazing! ): I PROMISE. ~

Don’t lay low, dude. Mr. Brengard told us to lay low today and I don’t know what that means but I know it has something to do with hiding or something. Because when Mr. Brengard told us to lay low everyone shrunk. Or maybe that was because the high school orientation people were creepy…

YEAH, LOGES! YOU TELL THAT FXCKING TURD! YOU WERE SINGING GOODER THAN GOOD! AND GOODER ISN’T EVEN A WORD!

Logan. You sing so pretty. I’m listening to you sing Invisible right now and you sound so mother ducking pretty. So don’t listen to that ass and just sing, don’t let that wenis cut you off. Yes, I said wenis. That is the skin on your elbow, apparently.

GUSTAVO! Oh hell no. OH HELL NO. GUSTAVO, YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT TO LOGIEBEAR! DUDE! WHAT THE FUDGE IS YOUR MOTHER FUDGING PROBLEM! YOU’RE SUCH AN IDIOT! YOU SHOULD JUST GO DIE YOU FAT OLD MAN! I can’t believe I just said that. Ugh. LOL. I’m so messed up. But I’m so mad at Gustavo right now. Can’t you fudging see that Logan’s stressed out? DUDE. YOU’RE A TURD. NO WONDER NO ONE LIKES YOU, FATASS. … Dude, I’m being so mean to Gustavo.

… Dude, I LOVED that last part. Loved. You are so amazing at writing, gurl. I love it. I’m calling you gurl ‘cause I know you don’t like your name to be seen publicly, and just in case someone is stalking this review, I don’t want them finding out your name. So.

Black dots. Darkness overcoming him. I love it. I just love it. ♥ It’s perfect, gurl. It’s more than perfect. CAITLYN LOVES THIS. But seriously, poor Logan… I’m going to cry… I just want to hug and hold him…

Yeah, Gustavo! What the hell! You tell that ass, Kendall! You tell him! Gosh, Gustavo is a freaking idiot! I hate him right now! ): Kendall is trying to tell you some important information and all your fat head cares about is how Logan’s “screwing up.” You ass, it’s not helping. YOU GO, KENDORK! YOU TELL THAT FAT OLE MAN WHAT’CHUR TALKIN’ ‘BOUT. OH YES.

Ew, Gustavo apologized and gave them a day off. That’s weird. LOL. He’s such a weird old man. And he’s not even that old.

EXACTLY. LIFE’S BEEN A BXTCH TO HIM AND HE DESERVES SO, SO MUCH BETTER THAN THAT! D: MY POOR BABY! Actually, right now, Kendall and I are engaged but Logan’s still my baby regardless of mine & Kendall’s wedding plans. LOL.

San Francisco. I always hated that place. I feel sorry for Katie and Mrs. Knight. Like, I don’t care if they’re visiting family friends. I went there yesterday to visit family friends—hell, I go there every Sunday—and it’s gross and it smells like smoke and has stupid pigeons. So I feel bad for Mrs. Knight and Katie because they have to suffer seeing that ugliness. Also, there are stinky hobos on the street that aren’t even pitiful. They smoke and they beg for money so they can buy beer.

Anyways…

AWE. POOR GUY IS EXHAUSTED. AWE. I CAN IMAGINE THAT SCENE SO VIVIDLY, GURL. AWE. I’M AWE-ING RIGHT NOW. LIKE SERIOUSLY, I’M BOUNCING IN MY SEAT AND GOING, “AWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!” ♥ AWE. AWE. AWE. AWE. AWE. AWE. AWE. I CAN’T STOP SAYING AWE. AWE. THAT’S SO CUTE. AWE.

Logan’s birthday, huh? I wonder how his 21st birthday was like. Did he get drunk or high? I’m such a loser. LOL.

This is so typical of them. Carlos squashing a cake. Kendall and James fighting over whose gift was from who. That’s hilarious… In a sad way. Why is it sad? I don’t know, BECAUSE OUR BOYS ARE SAD CASES? LMFAO. LIKE SERIOUSLY. I pity them sometimes because they’re way too crazy for their own good. In the show, I mean. In real life their craziness is perfect. But in the show… Oh, Lord, it’s a miracle they survive. LOL.

Logie’s lost! –gasps- OH NO. –cries- HE CAN’T BE LOST. HE CAN’T BE—

Oh. They found im. BUT THEY FOUND HIM CRYING! Dude… that’s so sad… He’s… awe… Logan… Gurl, I’m starting to cry here… like seriously, my legs are pulled up into my chest and I’m typing away while reading but I’m crying and I’m not laughing over how blue my tongue is anymore. Because I’ve been laughing at my blue tongue.

Yeah, crying really hard makes people sick… I’ve cried so hard that I threw up. Wow. That was too much information. Sorry ‘bout that. I’m an open book…

Dude. I’m crying. I feel just like how Logan is right now and I can totally relate and now I’m sad. But it’s sad in a good way.

NO! BABY, YOU’RE NOT WORTHLESS! WHAT THE FXCK IS WRONG WITH YOU, LOGAINE? YOU’RE SMART (in the show, in real life, you’re a hopeless case, honey… (; LOL.) YOU’RE SWEET, YOUR DIMPLES ARE FUDGING CUTE, YOUR EYES ARE SO SOULFUL, YOUR DANCING AND BACKFLIPPING SKILLZ ARE AMAZING, YOU SING SO. FUDGING. AMAZING. AND YOU’RE NICE AND TALENTED AND YOU’RE JUST CRAZY FOR NOT FREAKING KNOWING THIS.

Exactly. Kendal is correct. I am proud of my husband right now. –claps-

YES. OMG. THIS IS 1OO PERCENT ACCURATE. He IS smart, he IS kind, he IS good-looking, he IS a great athlete and performer…OH, MY LORD. This is 1OO percent accurate. –claps- Yeah, why isn’t life fair to our little cutie? ):

Fluttering open and shut… -dies-

Awe. Awe. Awe. –dies- THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH. ♥ (‘:

Dude. I feel the same way. I didn’t even remember it was my birthday until I came out of the shower and then changed and then I remembered something, and then my dad mentioned it and called me his little fourteen year old and I was like dude wtf. LOL. I just ramble and ramble away, don’t I? I’m funny. ~ No, just kidding.

Making their lives so much better… -cries- LOGAN CHANGES PEOPLE’S LIVES. ♥ -cries again, and dies-

The last paragraph made me cry. Dude. Wow. Oh, my Lord. Am I supposed to be sobbing? Gurl, you amazin’. You’re seriously amazing and I can’t believe that you wrote this for me. Thank you so much. And I am smiling… and crying. DUDE. I love you. And now I’m going to start crying, okay? Okay. I love you. ♥ Thank you so much. (‘:
2/13/2012 c1 17CelestialSonata7
Aaaaaaaw this is so sweet! I love their brotherly relationship! ^^

What I love about Caitee is that she is so nice and encouraging! :)
2/8/2012 c1 55BTR'slovesong
Awe! I am so glad you decided to write this! it was beautiful and sad! I loved how Kendall got soo protective! WIN! And oh girl you know me and Logan whump, can't get enough! I love a tiny, crying Logie, however sadistic that sounds! XD

What I love about Caitee! whew. ok.

Whenever I see her messages in my inbox, it brights up my night! I LOVE looking in there and seeing about a kajillion messages all from avnjkdfiwfnblah (rofl I can't spell her name ok it's different everytime) but really... Something about that girl, she makes me feel important. She's always there to encourage my stories and just... I can't even explain it. She's just Caitee and my life is ten times brighter because of it.
2/8/2012 c1 9PizzaTop21
Wow. That was... amazing. I am impressed. You're such a gifted writer and Caitee will love this!
2/8/2012 c1 36JaylaHeart
I loved it. Sweet, touching story that really hits with how much they all feel like brothers. Love it!
2/8/2012 c1 KendallsCGU
Don't you even dare say this wasn't good... It was perfect! I loved it! So much friendship! So cute! So, today's Caitee's birthday? I'm gonna wish her a happy birthday! Mine's coming up soon as well, it's next Friday on February 17th. I'm so excited! So, I loved this story to pieces. Thank you for writing it. :)

~ BigTimeRush-BTR

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