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3abbyweyr
That was great. Kind of strange with her slow change starting once the Cullens had left. Close timing Alice and Edward returning to the house. Her anger and talk with Edward while still between was good. Nice that it restored her memory. She could have still been a little angry when she woke up fully vampire. But...so she could see and hear better his pain and the truth of what he was saying now. Some new and some shattered good place to start moving forward together.
3abbyweyrThat was great. Kind of strange with her slow change starting once the Cullens had left. Close timing Alice and Edward returning to the house. Her anger and talk with Edward while still between was good. Nice that it restored her memory. She could have still been a little angry when she woke up fully vampire. But...so she could see and hear better his pain and the truth of what he was saying now. Some new and some shattered good place to start moving forward together.
2/18/2012 c1 8MegsD2
What a wonderful story! Such a unique scenario, and you told it beautifully. I was teary multiple times through this... Bella by herself, Alice coming back, her remembering Edward for the first time... wow.
I love that the incident with James is what started this all, and ultimately did what it should have done in the first place.
8MegsD2What a wonderful story! Such a unique scenario, and you told it beautifully. I was teary multiple times through this... Bella by herself, Alice coming back, her remembering Edward for the first time... wow.
I love that the incident with James is what started this all, and ultimately did what it should have done in the first place.
2/18/2012 c1 17karenec
I really enjoyed this AU take on NM so much - wonderfully original! You captured everyone's emotions very nicely, particularly Bella's confusion and Edward's guilt.
17karenecI really enjoyed this AU take on NM so much - wonderfully original! You captured everyone's emotions very nicely, particularly Bella's confusion and Edward's guilt.
2/16/2012 c1 7KayMarieXW
Interesting concept and story. Clever that you managed to diverge things so completely from canon and then bring things back to the way they should be.
Great story, thanks for writing!
7KayMarieXWInteresting concept and story. Clever that you managed to diverge things so completely from canon and then bring things back to the way they should be.
Great story, thanks for writing!
2/11/2012 c1 3Rel8tivity
Holy smoke! This was one of the most unique concepts in the contest. So intriguing that the venom would lie dormant, then begin a slow transformation. I'm so glad to see that you're continuing this after the contest. I also voted for you. Bravo!
3Rel8tivityHoly smoke! This was one of the most unique concepts in the contest. So intriguing that the venom would lie dormant, then begin a slow transformation. I'm so glad to see that you're continuing this after the contest. I also voted for you. Bravo!
2/11/2012 c1 Angeldolphin01
I really love it. It's wonderfully written. Do you think that you might continue with it at some point?
I really love it. It's wonderfully written. Do you think that you might continue with it at some point?
2/9/2012 c1 4Bells. Just Bells
I really enjoyed this story and it was one of my favorite in the contest! So I thought I'd come over and repost my review :)
Oh, how intriguing! That was such a unique take and I enjoyed it. Thank goodness Jake was there. I loved the friendship you showcased there. I wanted to cry when Alice came back and even though I am SUPER happy Edward came back and she remembered and they are living happily ever after, I think he kinda deserved to be forgotten for a bit. And I'm glad Bella yelled at him some too. Good job! :)
4Bells. Just BellsI really enjoyed this story and it was one of my favorite in the contest! So I thought I'd come over and repost my review :)
Oh, how intriguing! That was such a unique take and I enjoyed it. Thank goodness Jake was there. I loved the friendship you showcased there. I wanted to cry when Alice came back and even though I am SUPER happy Edward came back and she remembered and they are living happily ever after, I think he kinda deserved to be forgotten for a bit. And I'm glad Bella yelled at him some too. Good job! :)