for Potter's Clay12/9/2012 c6 
109Swellison
Very good hunt story, nicely paced action and resarch. Glad to see Bobby helping Dean out, and you did a nice job telling things from the golem's and losing-it!Sam's point of view.
109SwellisonVery good hunt story, nicely paced action and resarch. Glad to see Bobby helping Dean out, and you did a nice job telling things from the golem's and losing-it!Sam's point of view.
4/5/2012 c6 doyleshuny
Yeah like Sammy's never going to not listen to Dean again. Uh Huh! If Sam always listened to his big brother we would all wonder who this person was and what did he do with Sam? Dean would totally never buy it! I seriously loved this! It was really clever.
Yeah like Sammy's never going to not listen to Dean again. Uh Huh! If Sam always listened to his big brother we would all wonder who this person was and what did he do with Sam? Dean would totally never buy it! I seriously loved this! It was really clever.
4/5/2012 c5 doyleshuny
I want Dean to gank taht golem so bad! It turned poor Sammy into a vegetable? Taht golem will be lucky if all Dean does is gank it! Okay all I want is a ganked golem and Sammy to get better. If that happens I'll be happy. OMG I loooove this!
I want Dean to gank taht golem so bad! It turned poor Sammy into a vegetable? Taht golem will be lucky if all Dean does is gank it! Okay all I want is a ganked golem and Sammy to get better. If that happens I'll be happy. OMG I loooove this!
4/5/2012 c4 doyleshuny
So it's a freakin golem that is kind of on a power trip? I mean it's not doing what it's maker wanted. Holy crud. Now it's like one step from finishing up with Sam. This is probably one of the most clever stories I've ever read and I'm a total fanfic addict. My hubby has consider an intervention for my addictions to both Supernatural the show and the Supernatural fanfics. Don't worry it will never happen. Okay I have to go and see where Dean save's Sammy.
So it's a freakin golem that is kind of on a power trip? I mean it's not doing what it's maker wanted. Holy crud. Now it's like one step from finishing up with Sam. This is probably one of the most clever stories I've ever read and I'm a total fanfic addict. My hubby has consider an intervention for my addictions to both Supernatural the show and the Supernatural fanfics. Don't worry it will never happen. Okay I have to go and see where Dean save's Sammy.
4/5/2012 c3 doyleshuny
It's a golem? Okay I actually do know what a golem is? My mother was wrong. I do go to temple enough! LOL! Anyway I didn't even think of a golem. Pretty clever. So whoever is controlling the golem want's the beauty of the victims? It has to be the rabbi or the son. Or maybe the younger son who went to the mental hospital? SHEESE! I better read on to find out! Like I said this thing rocks! REALLY INTERESTING!
It's a golem? Okay I actually do know what a golem is? My mother was wrong. I do go to temple enough! LOL! Anyway I didn't even think of a golem. Pretty clever. So whoever is controlling the golem want's the beauty of the victims? It has to be the rabbi or the son. Or maybe the younger son who went to the mental hospital? SHEESE! I better read on to find out! Like I said this thing rocks! REALLY INTERESTING!
4/5/2012 c2 doyleshuny
Okay so it does have something to do with the way the victim looks. With the exception of the two rabbis all the victims are or were beautiful. Sam is beautiful. That's what attracts it. I'm Jewish and I don't have a clue what this thing is. Like my mother said. "If I went to temple more often I might no more." Who knew that would come back to bite me in my butt? Great Job! I'm loving this!
Okay so it does have something to do with the way the victim looks. With the exception of the two rabbis all the victims are or were beautiful. Sam is beautiful. That's what attracts it. I'm Jewish and I don't have a clue what this thing is. Like my mother said. "If I went to temple more often I might no more." Who knew that would come back to bite me in my butt? Great Job! I'm loving this!
4/5/2012 c1 doyleshuny
Uh oh. This can't be good. I like how you keep calling the monster an "it". I mean you're not calling it a male or female even though it had the busty female thing going before started falling apart. I wonder if it makes a difference if it touches somebody who's beautiful like one of the boy's? I guess I'll read on to find out. Great job!
Uh oh. This can't be good. I like how you keep calling the monster an "it". I mean you're not calling it a male or female even though it had the busty female thing going before started falling apart. I wonder if it makes a difference if it touches somebody who's beautiful like one of the boy's? I guess I'll read on to find out. Great job!
2/25/2012 c3 2Heatherlina
The scenes of Dean weighing his options and doing research were awesome. I like how the story is building but still keeping me guessing on what's next.
2HeatherlinaThe scenes of Dean weighing his options and doing research were awesome. I like how the story is building but still keeping me guessing on what's next.
2/25/2012 c2 Heatherlina
Whoa Sammy's in trouble. Can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully Dean can rescue him. Nice work!
Whoa Sammy's in trouble. Can't wait to read the next chapter and hopefully Dean can rescue him. Nice work!
2/24/2012 c6 12celeste301
YAY! alls well with the world again WHOOOO!
loved the last few lines, wrapped it all up nice and clean.
12celeste301YAY! alls well with the world again WHOOOO!
loved the last few lines, wrapped it all up nice and clean.
2/24/2012 c4 celeste301
:O Dean, stop eating snacks and go help Sam *shakes finger at Dean*
btw, did I mention how addictive this story is?
:O Dean, stop eating snacks and go help Sam *shakes finger at Dean*
btw, did I mention how addictive this story is?
2/24/2012 c3 celeste301
What a beautiful chocolate man! XD sorry, white chicks popped into my head when the creature called Sam beautiful.
Oh and btw OMG WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPY TO POOR SAMMY! *deep breaths* ok, moving on (to the chapter 4) lol.
What a beautiful chocolate man! XD sorry, white chicks popped into my head when the creature called Sam beautiful.
Oh and btw OMG WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPY TO POOR SAMMY! *deep breaths* ok, moving on (to the chapter 4) lol.
2/18/2012 c6 60Mali Bear's Buddy
Eww, ewww, eww on the decaying bodies. That's just gross...
OMG OMG OMG...it has Sam's memories and can break the wards? -dying-
I do love how Dean tells the golem it's nothing more than a cheap copy. That's... *sigh*
"Headache. Bad." - gee, you think?
Aww...what a great ending and a great story!
60Mali Bear's BuddyEww, ewww, eww on the decaying bodies. That's just gross...
OMG OMG OMG...it has Sam's memories and can break the wards? -dying-
I do love how Dean tells the golem it's nothing more than a cheap copy. That's... *sigh*
"Headache. Bad." - gee, you think?
Aww...what a great ending and a great story!