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10/30/2012 c1 10Parvati48
Wow that was short and rather poetic as another reviewer mentioned lol. Though the Wizarding world doesn't know about God, he's a muggle concept. So instead of saying God!, you should said Merlin! Makes more sense lol. It's interesting, I like that Draco seems to feel bad and at least thinks of saving her. Good job. :)
4/18/2012 c1 midnight sun
Nice little drabble. You could write a story with this idea. Great job.
2/25/2012 c1 2leafysummers
It's definitely short haha! :) You know, while I was reading it, it almost sounded...poetic. Do you know what poetry slams are? It could totally be recited at one! You should try writing stories, I'd be interested to read them! :)
2/11/2012 c1 madnessdownunder2
cute!

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