for Spilled Blood10/30/2012 c1
10Parvati48
Wow that was short and rather poetic as another reviewer mentioned lol. Though the Wizarding world doesn't know about God, he's a muggle concept. So instead of saying God!, you should said Merlin! Makes more sense lol. It's interesting, I like that Draco seems to feel bad and at least thinks of saving her. Good job. :)
10Parvati48Wow that was short and rather poetic as another reviewer mentioned lol. Though the Wizarding world doesn't know about God, he's a muggle concept. So instead of saying God!, you should said Merlin! Makes more sense lol. It's interesting, I like that Draco seems to feel bad and at least thinks of saving her. Good job. :)
4/18/2012 c1 midnight sun
Nice little drabble. You could write a story with this idea. Great job.
Nice little drabble. You could write a story with this idea. Great job.
2/25/2012 c1
2leafysummers
It's definitely short haha! :) You know, while I was reading it, it almost sounded...poetic. Do you know what poetry slams are? It could totally be recited at one! You should try writing stories, I'd be interested to read them! :)
2leafysummersIt's definitely short haha! :) You know, while I was reading it, it almost sounded...poetic. Do you know what poetry slams are? It could totally be recited at one! You should try writing stories, I'd be interested to read them! :)
