for Aftermath3/4/2012 c3 
1owl7498
D: You write it in ten minutes and it's still better than any crap I try in an hour. Meh.
aha they were so adorable. Especially that last line of Terezi's
1owl7498D: You write it in ten minutes and it's still better than any crap I try in an hour. Meh.
aha they were so adorable. Especially that last line of Terezi's
3/3/2012 c3 6extraterrestrialAnchovy
The chapters are slow-moving, but I'm patient, so that's okay.
MOAR YUMMY KARTEZ.
Anyways, I think that Karkat may be swearing a bit too much in there. I mean, he's Karkat, but he's clever with his choice of words. Then again, I suppose he ws too overcome with emotions to think.
Oh well, I'll be waiting for more!
6extraterrestrialAnchovyThe chapters are slow-moving, but I'm patient, so that's okay.
MOAR YUMMY KARTEZ.
Anyways, I think that Karkat may be swearing a bit too much in there. I mean, he's Karkat, but he's clever with his choice of words. Then again, I suppose he ws too overcome with emotions to think.
Oh well, I'll be waiting for more!
2/26/2012 c2 1owl7498
Hmm, interesting.
I like the way you write the characters, and the dialogue.
Intriguing.
1owl7498Hmm, interesting.
I like the way you write the characters, and the dialogue.
Intriguing.
2/25/2012 c2 6extraterrestrialAnchovy
"I can shoosh-pap that fucker to oblivion."
You deserve a cookie. (::)
And yes, I reviewed. So that JohnJade is gonna come around sometime soon, yes? ;)
Ooh, cliffhanger, Karkat is just being too grumpy and not understanding enough, he's just jealous of Dave too much. YOU COMFORT THAT GIRL THIS INSTANT.
But wait!
Terezi called Karkat Pupa?
Pardon me if I'm a party-pooper, but I really can't stand anyone other than Tav being called Pupa (Yes, Vriska calls John that too, but fuck that. Just thinking of those two makes me mad.).
NOT THAT YOU HAVE TO CHANGE ANYTHING.
Hopefully later on in the story I'll be more useful.
6extraterrestrialAnchovy"I can shoosh-pap that fucker to oblivion."
You deserve a cookie. (::)
And yes, I reviewed. So that JohnJade is gonna come around sometime soon, yes? ;)
Ooh, cliffhanger, Karkat is just being too grumpy and not understanding enough, he's just jealous of Dave too much. YOU COMFORT THAT GIRL THIS INSTANT.
But wait!
Terezi called Karkat Pupa?
Pardon me if I'm a party-pooper, but I really can't stand anyone other than Tav being called Pupa (Yes, Vriska calls John that too, but fuck that. Just thinking of those two makes me mad.).
NOT THAT YOU HAVE TO CHANGE ANYTHING.
Hopefully later on in the story I'll be more useful.
2/25/2012 c2 7fruiTmajik
I nearly cried out in joy when I saw you updated.
This chapter...
You are forever my favorite.
7fruiTmajikI nearly cried out in joy when I saw you updated.
This chapter...
You are forever my favorite.
2/12/2012 c1 4NeoVictus
It's true the button is irresistible, but yes I would like to see how this will continue.
4NeoVictusIt's true the button is irresistible, but yes I would like to see how this will continue.
2/11/2012 c1 6extraterrestrialAnchovy
Hey author.
Let me just tell you that I love you for writing my fav ships.
Really, there ain't a lotta JohnJade out there when he has Karkat and Dave all to himself.
And yeah, I really don't see how John and Rose can be compatible! DaveJade sound a little boring, I think. You don't get a better pairing than putting together two smart mouthed, sarcastic siblings together.
You open to ship requests? :B
6extraterrestrialAnchovyHey author.
Let me just tell you that I love you for writing my fav ships.
Really, there ain't a lotta JohnJade out there when he has Karkat and Dave all to himself.
And yeah, I really don't see how John and Rose can be compatible! DaveJade sound a little boring, I think. You don't get a better pairing than putting together two smart mouthed, sarcastic siblings together.
You open to ship requests? :B
2/11/2012 c1 7fruiTmajik
*le really enjoys Karkat/Terezi, and hey this is good, you have a nice writing style, even if I caught a few typos.*
7fruiTmajik*le really enjoys Karkat/Terezi, and hey this is good, you have a nice writing style, even if I caught a few typos.*