for Hua Feng4/3 c5 lostmagic564
ok story but i dislike the set-up way to much to go past this point.
the npc's were a nice touch and the father issues make sense he is trying but that doesn't make it all OK 18 years is a very long time. also Isaac kind of a ** to the point that he could go missing for no reason and i would have to try very hard to care.
i would like to post this as a guest but don't want to log out for it. not a flame... i don't believe this is a flame?
ok story but i dislike the set-up way to much to go past this point.
the npc's were a nice touch and the father issues make sense he is trying but that doesn't make it all OK 18 years is a very long time. also Isaac kind of a ** to the point that he could go missing for no reason and i would have to try very hard to care.
i would like to post this as a guest but don't want to log out for it. not a flame... i don't believe this is a flame?
2/14 c19 
2DarkNekoGreece
Oh Kami oh Kami oh Kami. I just love your story. I love how you being your own personal life into the plot and how you make each characters personality fit them. I can't wait to read more of your lovely work. Please update soon.
2DarkNekoGreeceOh Kami oh Kami oh Kami. I just love your story. I love how you being your own personal life into the plot and how you make each characters personality fit them. I can't wait to read more of your lovely work. Please update soon.
9/18/2012 c19 3Lightning Blade
Hi there, Sero! ) How are you there? Hope you are fine!
I have read this chapter, and I am looking forward to read about the trial. I hope that everything would go well for Feng and that Andrew would be punished severely for his crime. Nevertheless, I wish you the very best for your driving test, Sero! ) Jiayou! (All the best in Mandarin) ;)
3Lightning BladeHi there, Sero! ) How are you there? Hope you are fine!
I have read this chapter, and I am looking forward to read about the trial. I hope that everything would go well for Feng and that Andrew would be punished severely for his crime. Nevertheless, I wish you the very best for your driving test, Sero! ) Jiayou! (All the best in Mandarin) ;)
8/16/2012 c19 1SeaDevil
Got to love the broom closets. Where would the stories of the world be without them?
Sad to hear that you didn't like the vacation :(
You know, you could always take vengance upon your brother by annoying him when he wants to be alone. An eye for an eye?
Anyway, thanks for the chapter
1SeaDevilGot to love the broom closets. Where would the stories of the world be without them?
Sad to hear that you didn't like the vacation :(
You know, you could always take vengance upon your brother by annoying him when he wants to be alone. An eye for an eye?
Anyway, thanks for the chapter
7/29/2012 c18 3Lightning Blade
Yay! Another update! I like how Feng, Mairi and their friends were having so much fun! :) I truly hope Feng and Mairi would forget about that inhumane rapist because I truly agree with Feng that the best revenge is to 'live life to the fullest'...
I hope that you would recover soon, Sero. Oh, by the way, you have to travel to the jungle? Take care and chat with you soon. :) Anyway, I hope that you'll update soon when you have the time!
3Lightning BladeYay! Another update! I like how Feng, Mairi and their friends were having so much fun! :) I truly hope Feng and Mairi would forget about that inhumane rapist because I truly agree with Feng that the best revenge is to 'live life to the fullest'...
I hope that you would recover soon, Sero. Oh, by the way, you have to travel to the jungle? Take care and chat with you soon. :) Anyway, I hope that you'll update soon when you have the time!
7/24/2012 c1 2bebepantheon
There isn't a lot of 1/2 fanfics these days...though I am going to start reading it as soon as I get the time. Already added this as part of my list to read xD
2bebepantheonThere isn't a lot of 1/2 fanfics these days...though I am going to start reading it as soon as I get the time. Already added this as part of my list to read xD
7/15/2012 c17 3Lightning Blade
Hi Sero! How are you there? :) Hope everything's fine.
I've enjoyed reading this chapter, especially the part where Mairi called Feng to tell her that she, like Feng, is also a victim, and they have planned to meet to have a chat. I hope that they would feel better when they know that they aren't alone when it comes to this issue of sexual assaults...
I understand why Feng feels angry towards Dante for killing the attacker, and I like how kind she can be. Usually someone would want the assaulter to die for destroying his or her life, but she is also concerned about the assaulter's family, who would feel sad for his death. I really like Feng's personality. She's quite mature and wise for her age. :)
Hmm... Is there a typo error for this sentence?
"Someone must've heard me or else they were all deft." I think the word 'deft' should be 'deaf'? :S But this isn't important actually. xD I'm just wondering...
And I'm wondering whether Feng would log into Second Life soon. :D It has been a while since we see her in action in the game.
Thanks so much for answering my question, Sero! :) I didn't know that in New York, victims whose age is 16 years and above can have their names disclosed in the newspapers. In my country, I think the age is 18 or 21 years and above. Unless the victim is a deceased person, his or her name is rarely disclosed in the papers in my country...
Thanks again, and I'm looking forward to read your next chapter. :D Just write when you have the free time, Sero!
3Lightning BladeHi Sero! How are you there? :) Hope everything's fine.
I've enjoyed reading this chapter, especially the part where Mairi called Feng to tell her that she, like Feng, is also a victim, and they have planned to meet to have a chat. I hope that they would feel better when they know that they aren't alone when it comes to this issue of sexual assaults...
I understand why Feng feels angry towards Dante for killing the attacker, and I like how kind she can be. Usually someone would want the assaulter to die for destroying his or her life, but she is also concerned about the assaulter's family, who would feel sad for his death. I really like Feng's personality. She's quite mature and wise for her age. :)
Hmm... Is there a typo error for this sentence?
"Someone must've heard me or else they were all deft." I think the word 'deft' should be 'deaf'? :S But this isn't important actually. xD I'm just wondering...
And I'm wondering whether Feng would log into Second Life soon. :D It has been a while since we see her in action in the game.
Thanks so much for answering my question, Sero! :) I didn't know that in New York, victims whose age is 16 years and above can have their names disclosed in the newspapers. In my country, I think the age is 18 or 21 years and above. Unless the victim is a deceased person, his or her name is rarely disclosed in the papers in my country...
Thanks again, and I'm looking forward to read your next chapter. :D Just write when you have the free time, Sero!