for Hua Feng7/7/2012 c16 
3Lightning Blade
Hi there, Sero! :D
I like this chapter, especially the part where Dante has punished Andrew... I think Dante is a cool character, and I am looking forward for his relationship with Feng to develop soon. :)
Hmm... Can I ask about the newspaper clipping? I was quite surprised that Feng's name was disclosed in the article. Usually the newspapers would not disclose the names of the victims to protect their identities... Or maybe is it because that Feng is a daughter of a millionaire?
I apologize if I sounded too realistic... xD You can just ignore my question. I'm still looking forward for the next chapter so I hope that you'll update soon once you're free. I'm wondering how Feng would react if she finds out that Dante has avenged for her...
All the best for your driving lesson, Sero! :) Have a nice day and take care!
3Lightning BladeHi there, Sero! :D
I like this chapter, especially the part where Dante has punished Andrew... I think Dante is a cool character, and I am looking forward for his relationship with Feng to develop soon. :)
Hmm... Can I ask about the newspaper clipping? I was quite surprised that Feng's name was disclosed in the article. Usually the newspapers would not disclose the names of the victims to protect their identities... Or maybe is it because that Feng is a daughter of a millionaire?
I apologize if I sounded too realistic... xD You can just ignore my question. I'm still looking forward for the next chapter so I hope that you'll update soon once you're free. I'm wondering how Feng would react if she finds out that Dante has avenged for her...
All the best for your driving lesson, Sero! :) Have a nice day and take care!
7/5/2012 c16 2PiKairiDreaM00n
I hope your mom gets better. . Hospitals suck.
I was guessing that she'd find out through his journals... Kinda sad about Dante's past. D: But yea... dislike the fact that he's a murderer even if he did help people... Hope we can see his past more. I'm pretty sure there's a good reason for that. I was honestly surprised she thought they were novels XD I thought first thing she'd do when she read about the murders would be to freak out.
Loved it. :) Have fun driving and I hope you can update soon.
2PiKairiDreaM00nI hope your mom gets better. . Hospitals suck.
I was guessing that she'd find out through his journals... Kinda sad about Dante's past. D: But yea... dislike the fact that he's a murderer even if he did help people... Hope we can see his past more. I'm pretty sure there's a good reason for that. I was honestly surprised she thought they were novels XD I thought first thing she'd do when she read about the murders would be to freak out.
Loved it. :) Have fun driving and I hope you can update soon.
7/3/2012 c16 1SeaDevil
Is your mum ok?
One thing I wondered: couldn't there be a third explanation to what stood in the books? One more in line with her earlier reasoning that it was stories? That he had read about the murders in the papers and then researched them and written about them? Because for some reason, Feng finding out seemed pretty sudden... That said, I wonder how she will react the next time she sees Dante...
1SeaDevilIs your mum ok?
One thing I wondered: couldn't there be a third explanation to what stood in the books? One more in line with her earlier reasoning that it was stories? That he had read about the murders in the papers and then researched them and written about them? Because for some reason, Feng finding out seemed pretty sudden... That said, I wonder how she will react the next time she sees Dante...
7/1/2012 c16 Guest
Hi! My account name is 'Meatbun Attack' but I'm too lazy to log in right now... "
This is an awesome story! I love it! And I suspected that Isaac was that handsome elf in the game from the second I read about him getting Feng from Sammy's house. XD
Keep up with the good work! 0
Hi! My account name is 'Meatbun Attack' but I'm too lazy to log in right now... "
This is an awesome story! I love it! And I suspected that Isaac was that handsome elf in the game from the second I read about him getting Feng from Sammy's house. XD
Keep up with the good work! 0
6/30/2012 c16 20Forever In The Fire
I hope Andrew burns in hell. After Dante's poison to the ** gets him.
20Forever In The FireI hope Andrew burns in hell. After Dante's poison to the ** gets him.
6/27/2012 c15 AlbinoAwesome
wow that was amazing and can't wait for another chapter and the way you worded everything I felt that fang was real and was telling that story to me face 2 face. keep this up and that might happen! I love the story and your writing ability's!
Bye :3
wow that was amazing and can't wait for another chapter and the way you worded everything I felt that fang was real and was telling that story to me face 2 face. keep this up and that might happen! I love the story and your writing ability's!
Bye :3
6/23/2012 c15 3Lightning Blade
I feel very sad reading about Feng's story, and being a girl, I could somehow relate to her story. I have been reading news and stories about rape victims, and it must be very hard to get over the trauma. I always believe that the perpetrators should be sentenced to death. Rapists are also 'murderers', since they have destroyed peoples' lives. Being sentenced to a few years of imprisonment is just not sufficient, at least based on my opinion.
Please tell your friend to be strong, Sero. It is not her fault that it had happened to her. I've been sexually harassed before, and I used to blame myself for all the things that happened to me, so I wish your friend doesn't have such negative thoughts too.
By the way, I would like to applaud your bravery for writing this chapter out, Sero. It must be very difficult to write on the behalf of your friend, especially if is about a very bad experience. I'm sure that your friend would be touched if she knows that you care about her. One way to show our concern for someone is to write about him or her. :) By the way, does your friend read your story?
I shall send a shout-out to Exile Wrath. Although I haven't managed to read her story, I feel sad over what had happened to her. I almost couldn't believe that she is in a coma right now. I hope that she is recovering soon, and our prayers are with her.
Thanks for sharing the news about Exile Wrath with us, readers. You're a very nice and caring Half Prince fan. :D I'm looking forward to be reading your next chapter, but please take your the time to update it. :) Till then, have great days ahead.
P.S: Oh, I hope that Dante will teach that Andrew a good lesson!
3Lightning BladeI feel very sad reading about Feng's story, and being a girl, I could somehow relate to her story. I have been reading news and stories about rape victims, and it must be very hard to get over the trauma. I always believe that the perpetrators should be sentenced to death. Rapists are also 'murderers', since they have destroyed peoples' lives. Being sentenced to a few years of imprisonment is just not sufficient, at least based on my opinion.
Please tell your friend to be strong, Sero. It is not her fault that it had happened to her. I've been sexually harassed before, and I used to blame myself for all the things that happened to me, so I wish your friend doesn't have such negative thoughts too.
By the way, I would like to applaud your bravery for writing this chapter out, Sero. It must be very difficult to write on the behalf of your friend, especially if is about a very bad experience. I'm sure that your friend would be touched if she knows that you care about her. One way to show our concern for someone is to write about him or her. :) By the way, does your friend read your story?
I shall send a shout-out to Exile Wrath. Although I haven't managed to read her story, I feel sad over what had happened to her. I almost couldn't believe that she is in a coma right now. I hope that she is recovering soon, and our prayers are with her.
Thanks for sharing the news about Exile Wrath with us, readers. You're a very nice and caring Half Prince fan. :D I'm looking forward to be reading your next chapter, but please take your the time to update it. :) Till then, have great days ahead.
P.S: Oh, I hope that Dante will teach that Andrew a good lesson!
6/22/2012 c14 Lightning Blade
Hi there, Sero! :D Haha, this chapter is very funny! xD Isaac and Feng were battling each other out, and Yulian had to stop them. And Yulian is the scariest among the three of them...
Good popcorn machine... xD Hahaha, that made me giggle so much! xD
By the way, don't worry about the battle scene. I think you did it well, and I understand that it is challenging to describe a battle scene... I've been avoiding to write about battles too... xD
Hi there, Sero! :D Haha, this chapter is very funny! xD Isaac and Feng were battling each other out, and Yulian had to stop them. And Yulian is the scariest among the three of them...
Good popcorn machine... xD Hahaha, that made me giggle so much! xD
By the way, don't worry about the battle scene. I think you did it well, and I understand that it is challenging to describe a battle scene... I've been avoiding to write about battles too... xD
6/22/2012 c15 Guest
This story is great! I almost died from laughter on chapter 14. Please update.
This story is great! I almost died from laughter on chapter 14. Please update.
6/21/2012 c15 1rahmachayank
I love your story, so sad and so touching. I can't wait for next chapther thanks
1rahmachayankI love your story, so sad and so touching. I can't wait for next chapther thanks