for This Is The End12/12/2012 c1 
15Tripod Gal
I like this piece. It is extremely well written and does highlight extremely well the situation within society today.
Congratulations for having the courage to write such a controversial and thought provoking piece, and doing it so in character as well. Bravo.
15Tripod GalI like this piece. It is extremely well written and does highlight extremely well the situation within society today.
Congratulations for having the courage to write such a controversial and thought provoking piece, and doing it so in character as well. Bravo.
5/1/2012 c1 131Avirra
Well done, though I hate that more of the crew didn't stand behind Jim.
I seem to remember when someone was trying to use the fact that victim had slept around in the past to say that meant that they couldn't have been raped (implying that only virgins could be raped). The response back was that just because they'd donated blood to the Red Cross, that didn't give anyone else the right to walk up and stab them.
131AvirraWell done, though I hate that more of the crew didn't stand behind Jim.
I seem to remember when someone was trying to use the fact that victim had slept around in the past to say that meant that they couldn't have been raped (implying that only virgins could be raped). The response back was that just because they'd donated blood to the Red Cross, that didn't give anyone else the right to walk up and stab them.
3/17/2012 c1 1Saavikam69
Thank you for this story. I think it helps put rape in perspective. NO ONE ever asks to be raped.
1Saavikam69Thank you for this story. I think it helps put rape in perspective. NO ONE ever asks to be raped.
2/24/2012 c1 Kalidris
Wow, that was an intense story. Are you planning a companion piece? I really hope so because I really would like to read about the thoughts Kirk's bridge crew has when they find out how wrong they have misjudged and treated him.
Wow, that was an intense story. Are you planning a companion piece? I really hope so because I really would like to read about the thoughts Kirk's bridge crew has when they find out how wrong they have misjudged and treated him.
2/13/2012 c1 lady
This is a very well written story. You did a great job with Jim's emotional conflicts. It is also a very educational story.
This is a very well written story. You did a great job with Jim's emotional conflicts. It is also a very educational story.
2/12/2012 c1 Melvin
Thanks for tackling this difficult subject with sensitivity. I felt Jim's pain to the point of tears, not just the physical pain of the assault, but the emotional pain of his friends turning him away without listening. I'm glad you had Bones and Pike stand by him to the end. I would love to read more from you.
Thanks for tackling this difficult subject with sensitivity. I felt Jim's pain to the point of tears, not just the physical pain of the assault, but the emotional pain of his friends turning him away without listening. I'm glad you had Bones and Pike stand by him to the end. I would love to read more from you.