for Need You5/17/2012 c1 
16Dirtiest Girl In America
i actually liked this.
at first i was like 'ehh, ian touching mandy. not for me.'
but it actually worked.
and i absolutely loved the line about learning how to shoot straight.
16Dirtiest Girl In Americai actually liked this.
at first i was like 'ehh, ian touching mandy. not for me.'
but it actually worked.
and i absolutely loved the line about learning how to shoot straight.
3/1/2012 c1 14chips2
Toast,
That was really good. I was wondering where you were going with the Mandy thing but it came good. I love your style of writing; understated, concise, nice. And I love the scenes between the brothers. Looking forward to more.
x chips
14chips2Toast,
That was really good. I was wondering where you were going with the Mandy thing but it came good. I love your style of writing; understated, concise, nice. And I love the scenes between the brothers. Looking forward to more.
x chips
2/12/2012 c1 17GirlWednesday
Oooh that is quite an agreement they have got going on there, i reckon mandy has got a good thing going there.
Another M rated fic not quite as revealing as and so to bed but it made the right impression.
Lots of review love your number one fan xx
17GirlWednesdayOooh that is quite an agreement they have got going on there, i reckon mandy has got a good thing going there.
Another M rated fic not quite as revealing as and so to bed but it made the right impression.
Lots of review love your number one fan xx