for Terror9/13/2012 c1 Guest
so great! please update!
so great! please update!
6/28/2012 c2 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE! I absolutely live your story and plot line! Please continue!
PLEASE UPDATE! I absolutely live your story and plot line! Please continue!
6/27/2012 c1 Guest
PLEASE UPDATE! Amazing story!
PLEASE UPDATE! Amazing story!
6/3/2012 c2 Guest
Amazing! Love it! Please update soon! Great story!
Amazing! Love it! Please update soon! Great story!
5/16/2012 c1 Sgdp1261
Great chapter! Thanks for updating! Im anxious to see how Justin plans on helping Alex and protecting her. Please update again soon! :)
Great chapter! Thanks for updating! Im anxious to see how Justin plans on helping Alex and protecting her. Please update again soon! :)
5/16/2012 c1 Sgdp1261
Great chapter! Thanks for updating! Im anxious to see how Justin plans on helping Alex and protecting her. Please update again soon! :)
Great chapter! Thanks for updating! Im anxious to see how Justin plans on helping Alex and protecting her. Please update again soon! :)
5/15/2012 c2 Guest
I love that Alex and Justin are talking again. I personally love it when he gets to be the all ovelyr protective-big brother. Great story! I love it! Please continue!
I love that Alex and Justin are talking again. I personally love it when he gets to be the all ovelyr protective-big brother. Great story! I love it! Please continue!
5/9/2012 c2 carol12
i really am glad that justin had said sorry and that max forgave her. Now she has to tall mason whether or not its true, this should be interesting. write soon!
i really am glad that justin had said sorry and that max forgave her. Now she has to tall mason whether or not its true, this should be interesting. write soon!
4/16/2012 c1 sgdp1261
I've literally read this story like thirty times and its still amazing. PLEASE UPDATE! You're a very talented writer and this story has me sucked in already and I need to know what happens next! the suspense is killing me!
I've literally read this story like thirty times and its still amazing. PLEASE UPDATE! You're a very talented writer and this story has me sucked in already and I need to know what happens next! the suspense is killing me!
4/15/2012 c1 Guest
Amazing! Please update, this is a great story line and I'm really interested in finding out what the monster thing does to alex next as well as if Justin tries to fix his mistake. Great story! I love it!
Amazing! Please update, this is a great story line and I'm really interested in finding out what the monster thing does to alex next as well as if Justin tries to fix his mistake. Great story! I love it!
2/25/2012 c1 Nobudie
I felt that justin was being a little inconsiderate too, actually since after he got demoted.
Really interesting idea! More please :)
I felt that justin was being a little inconsiderate too, actually since after he got demoted.
Really interesting idea! More please :)
2/25/2012 c1 sour2651
more more more more more more
more more more more more more
2/21/2012 c1 sour2651aol.com
this was an awesome story pleeeze continue it soon
this was an awesome story pleeeze continue it soon
2/13/2012 c1 
3My Silver Heart
I LOVED it! I think Justin was acting like a total jerk too -_-
PLEASE add another chapter when you can! I want to see what he does about this and how it hits him when he really realizes how bad he messed up...I mean, his little sister's hurt for crying out loud!
:)
3My Silver HeartI LOVED it! I think Justin was acting like a total jerk too -_-
PLEASE add another chapter when you can! I want to see what he does about this and how it hits him when he really realizes how bad he messed up...I mean, his little sister's hurt for crying out loud!
:)