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3/17 c3 15xxLunaTerraxx
Wow...I have to say I am very impressed by what I just read. I'm not a Twilight fan, nor do I know what Dark Angel is, but I really enjoyed reading this. The background you gave on Leo really caught my attention, it had my creativity swirling if you want me to be honest lol Also, the immediate attraction Marcus and Leo had was electrifying. I hope to get to read more interaction with them soon. - Some more about this organization, and maybe meeting some people from it, might be good as well. I know we've got names but to see the place where Leo was kept, and to see the people who created her, would be awesome (:
4/25/2012 c3 21Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Loving the chemistry between Leo and Marcus...damn Aro for his interruption.

I can't wait for Leo's reunion with Zane.

It's interest how Leo views Marcus' feeding as a form of art.

Great job!

Update soon!
4/3/2012 c2 Lourdes08
I like it!

Hope to read more soon.

=)
2/29/2012 c2 52Mrs Marcus Volturi
LOVE the new chapter! XD Brilliant and I love the relationship between Leo and Marcus...very cute :P

Well done love!

Crystal xxx
2/27/2012 c2 21Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Oh I love that both Marcus and Leo revealed the truth to each other! Now Marcus just has to tell Leo about his venomous bite.

Oh why must Evan interrupt them...I swear, they were about to kiss.

I love that Leo is immune like Bella (yet Leo is so much better!)

Great job!

Update soon!

I'm loving Marcus/Leo =D
2/27/2012 c1 heartsgirl
this story is good. i cant wait to read more. please update soon.
2/17/2012 c1 SageQ anyalev.vampyahoo.com
rather interesting
2/16/2012 c1 Dark-Supernatural-Angel
Very interesting and I'm definitely loving how Marcus and Leo met and how they can't get each other off their mind.

I do love Leo's immunity. Very glad that she has that.

Great job!

Update soon!
2/13/2012 c1 52Mrs Marcus Volturi
Ah I loved it! XD I know I have said that before but it's amazing! lol More please!

Crystal xxxx

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