for Harder Better Faster11/11/2012 c1 Anonnie
Please update soon! this is sooo good! Please! Please! *Puppy dog eyes*
Please update soon! this is sooo good! Please! Please! *Puppy dog eyes*
9/24/2012 c1 
14Won-Chan108
Are you EVER going to finish this? This story is REALLY good! Please update soon!
14Won-Chan108Are you EVER going to finish this? This story is REALLY good! Please update soon!
9/2/2012 c3 Guest
Oh my gosh, PLEEEEEASE FINISH THIS! It's SO good! I love it!
Oh my gosh, PLEEEEEASE FINISH THIS! It's SO good! I love it!
9/1/2012 c3 106ChloboShoka
This was a really interesting story and I liked how saucy it was. Just some minor grammar and punctuation errors that need to fixed such as you needing to start a capital letter in speech tags ect. Farla on this website owns a forum that has a good grammar guide so that could help you. Ash being hypnotized is very interesting but also quite creepy at the same time.
106ChloboShokaThis was a really interesting story and I liked how saucy it was. Just some minor grammar and punctuation errors that need to fixed such as you needing to start a capital letter in speech tags ect. Farla on this website owns a forum that has a good grammar guide so that could help you. Ash being hypnotized is very interesting but also quite creepy at the same time.
7/12/2012 c3 2HalfPrince
hot hot hot hot hot hothothothot. i accidentally clicked this story, thinking it was the one above. thank god for blonde moments.
2HalfPrincehot hot hot hot hot hothothothot. i accidentally clicked this story, thinking it was the one above. thank god for blonde moments.
7/3/2012 c3 Guest
Please please please please hurry up with the update make it longer please
Please please please please hurry up with the update make it longer please
6/20/2012 c3 Kyon-neko
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Please continue to make it a good as you have been ;)
I can't wait for the next chapter to come out. Please continue to make it a good as you have been ;)
5/28/2012 c3 14Won-Chan108
I love this story! Its so HOT and GENIUS! I look forward to your next update! _
14Won-Chan108I love this story! Its so HOT and GENIUS! I look forward to your next update! _
5/6/2012 c3 31The Fujoshi
besides some typos and weird sentence structures, it's really original.
I'm like "..." reading this. It's like so...twisted and dark in a way how he's manipulating Ash.
31The Fujoshibesides some typos and weird sentence structures, it's really original.
I'm like "..." reading this. It's like so...twisted and dark in a way how he's manipulating Ash.
4/2/2012 c3 scienceguy
Wow; this was hot.
You have a few minor grammar errors in your text (I should be capital), but primarily that's just me nitpicking.
There are few slash fanfics than have hypnosis; I sincerely hope you'll continue with this.
Wow; this was hot.
You have a few minor grammar errors in your text (I should be capital), but primarily that's just me nitpicking.
There are few slash fanfics than have hypnosis; I sincerely hope you'll continue with this.
3/13/2012 c3 OverladyAerix
AAAAAAHHHHHHH! THIS IS SO HOT! I LOVE IT! I hope you update this soon because this is exactly what I was looking for. Good job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! ;)
AAAAAAHHHHHHH! THIS IS SO HOT! I LOVE IT! I hope you update this soon because this is exactly what I was looking for. Good job, and I can't wait to read the next chapter! ;)