for JAG: Sharing5/20/2012 c1
7Silencing Hate
You did an excellent job in painting this scene! I can almost feel the tension and longing. Excellent story.
7Silencing HateYou did an excellent job in painting this scene! I can almost feel the tension and longing. Excellent story.
2/17/2012 c1 Michi uk
Loved this story,at last Harm and Mac let there fences down. Is there more to come?
Loved this story,at last Harm and Mac let there fences down. Is there more to come?
2/15/2012 c1
2alix33
"My victory was a hollow one. I'm afraid I wouldn't be very good company tonight." "But you won your case Mac," he said pressing her. She retreated a little, sounding depressed. "Oh yeah, I won, alright; he's leaving the service and keeping his four wives – some victory." "What do you want?" He asked curious. "Him hung from the nearest yardarm." She almost growled." - I agree with Mac: That oozing creep of a polygamist could not have been creepier if he tried. I questioned the taste of all those wives.
"threw on a pair of faded blue jeans and a scoop neck cream-colored t-shirt." - Cute, though very casual outfit.
"Harm in a brown tweed colored blazer, blue dress shirt and khaki dress slacks." - Cute outfit too, but Mac might feel, I don't know, underdressed now.
2alix33"My victory was a hollow one. I'm afraid I wouldn't be very good company tonight." "But you won your case Mac," he said pressing her. She retreated a little, sounding depressed. "Oh yeah, I won, alright; he's leaving the service and keeping his four wives – some victory." "What do you want?" He asked curious. "Him hung from the nearest yardarm." She almost growled." - I agree with Mac: That oozing creep of a polygamist could not have been creepier if he tried. I questioned the taste of all those wives.
"threw on a pair of faded blue jeans and a scoop neck cream-colored t-shirt." - Cute, though very casual outfit.
"Harm in a brown tweed colored blazer, blue dress shirt and khaki dress slacks." - Cute outfit too, but Mac might feel, I don't know, underdressed now.
2/14/2012 c1 bookimpva
Very sweet Harm and Mac. I liked how you incorporated a specific episode and then ran with it. Great job.
Very sweet Harm and Mac. I liked how you incorporated a specific episode and then ran with it. Great job.
