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5/20/2012 c1 7Silencing Hate
You did an excellent job in painting this scene! I can almost feel the tension and longing. Excellent story.
4/7/2012 c1 8JagfanNat
Love it...if only!
2/17/2012 c1 Michi uk
Loved this story,at last Harm and Mac let there fences down. Is there more to come?
2/15/2012 c1 16McRose
Very romantic in its way.

-jan
2/15/2012 c1 2alix33
"My victory was a hollow one. I'm afraid I wouldn't be very good company tonight." "But you won your case Mac," he said pressing her. She retreated a little, sounding depressed. "Oh yeah, I won, alright; he's leaving the service and keeping his four wives – some victory." "What do you want?" He asked curious. "Him hung from the nearest yardarm." She almost growled." - I agree with Mac: That oozing creep of a polygamist could not have been creepier if he tried. I questioned the taste of all those wives.

"threw on a pair of faded blue jeans and a scoop neck cream-colored t-shirt." - Cute, though very casual outfit.

"Harm in a brown tweed colored blazer, blue dress shirt and khaki dress slacks." - Cute outfit too, but Mac might feel, I don't know, underdressed now.
2/14/2012 c1 3achaon
Good story. Enjoyed it very much.
2/14/2012 c1 bookimpva
Very sweet Harm and Mac. I liked how you incorporated a specific episode and then ran with it. Great job.
2/14/2012 c1 7jpstar57
You did a nice job with this story. This is what should have happened in the series. The show's writers were such cowards.

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