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9avatoa
You never did reveal the identity of the kidnappers in this story. Who were they?
9avatoaYou never did reveal the identity of the kidnappers in this story. Who were they?
9/5/2012 c4 10Karra Greenfield
Good blend of the three shows. I can actually see Penelope and Rafael being related, they do look quite a bit a like and he had to learn his hacking skills from somewhere.
Had a little trouble with keeping up with the scene changes, and a slight problem with ending punctuation, but overall a very good story.
10Karra GreenfieldGood blend of the three shows. I can actually see Penelope and Rafael being related, they do look quite a bit a like and he had to learn his hacking skills from somewhere.
Had a little trouble with keeping up with the scene changes, and a slight problem with ending punctuation, but overall a very good story.
2/19/2012 c2 7I'm Yu
That is not a nice cliffhanger...jack will not be happy about this!
Have to admit, this shaping up to be a good story so far. Keep up the good work!
7I'm YuThat is not a nice cliffhanger...jack will not be happy about this!
Have to admit, this shaping up to be a good story so far. Keep up the good work!
2/18/2012 c2 Guest
Really. Funny but left me hanging
Really. Funny but left me hanging