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4/18/2012 c9 23BulletStrong
Very cute!
4/18/2012 c9 gchan.s2
Hey! I`m reviewing for the sake of keeping you going! Hehehe! :). Plus, this story is so amazing! :D. I love it, I really do! I know I`m kind of crummy for just reviewing now, when I`ve read all of the chaps & practically wait in anticipation for you to post the next chaps! :).

I usually do better reviews than this, but I`m a bit stretched for time right now.

Anyways, OMG! This was a really cute chap! :). I`m just going to point out that.. I LOVE DEMILY, THEY ARE THE CUTEST THING EVER. It was so funny & cute how Em got all jealous of Derek`s "Baby Girl". She should know by now that that`s just their little banter and loving friendship.. LOL! :P. But, it was also really nice that Derek had that such effect on Em & vice versa. Hehehe! :). Too cute.

Plus, its soooo sweet how they can both make each other smile just like that! :D. It seriously just melts my heart! *hearts* :). Okay, and how cute was it when Em went straight to his room. LOL! That was so cute.

It`s really nice to see that Em and Derek are really comfortable with each other. That they can talk to each other so easily and feel safe and relaxed with each other! :D. Ohhhh, plus, "Princess" is just about the sweetest nickname ever. Gaaahhh! I wish Derek would call her that in show! I think he should do it in the finale.. Bahahaha! Just saying :)).

& Gaaaahhhhhhhh! I absolutely looooveddddd how as Em was asking Derek if she could stay in his room that night, she was already snuggling up to him. OMG! JUST OMG! HAHAHAHA! :)). *heartsssssssss* :D. Then Derek was being all playful and said "You want to sleep with me?" .. OMG, just too funny! :)). I had to laugh at that and the wiggling eyebrows thing :P.

Then this whole thing happened == " He wrapped his arms around his favourite brunette. She sighed, completely at peace with his warm body surrounding hers.

"Good night Princess," Derek pressed a kiss to her temple.

"Night," She mumbled with sleep already over taking her. All she could think about was that she could stay here forever. They would need to talk when they got back to Quantico because their relationship was moving past friends, very quickly and neither had discussed it at all.

Just before sleep took her, she heard Derek's voice, "I love you, Em."

Emily smiled, they would really need to talk. " == Just, OMG! Waaaaaa! That was seriously... ahhhhh, my shipper heart! LOL! LOVE LOVE LOVE! *heartssssss* :). This was my favorite part! I absolutely cannot wait to read about when they talk back at Quantico.

Oh, and.. "I love you, Em" ... "Emily smiled..." .. My heart just melted at that! Very nice way to end this chap! Lol!

Ugh, but now I seriously cannot wait to read the next chap! Waaaaaaa! HAHA! :))).

Great job, on this chap & all the previous ones! :). Keep up the good work. I can`t wait to read the next chaps! :).

Mwah x
4/18/2012 c9 kendra185
I really like the story! Please continue ^^
4/18/2012 c9 47Nix1978
And now a jealous Emily... I love a jealous Emily too. So sweet when she went to him... I love the tender side of them. And he told her he loves her... Awwww

Looking forward to the next installment :)
4/18/2012 c8 Nix1978
Poor Emily falling in the mud... And ooh a jealous Derek. I love a jealous Derek ;)
4/17/2012 c9 2vampiresrockroza
Ahhhhhh omg update soon I'm soooo psyched for the next chappie sooo please type away as soon as possible. Loving it 3
4/17/2012 c9 3lovelover123
OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! Not only am I completely and totally intrigued by the case but even more importantly (because this is the reason I love this story)... the Derek and Emily relationship development made me jump up and down for joy! It was PERFECT! I thought it was interesting that you allowed Emily to be jealous. I would certainly have her get over that soon because we all know it is nothing to worry about but I thought it was very fitting to showing us and herself just how she really feels for Derek at this point. I'm definitely glad you incorporated her need for him while she slept. I would recommend showing hers and his need and desire for her in future chapters as well. And may I just say I squealed a little bit (and I shouldn't have because I was supposed to be quietly working on a Shakespeare paper in the library) when he told her he loved her! AHHHHHH! I can't stop smiling. I love the slow, realistic and beautiful progression of their love. You are just such an amazing writer and I just LOVE this story! I can't wait to read more!
4/14/2012 c8 Fluffy Muffin
I adore you! This fic is really good. Can't wait to read more =D

xo
4/12/2012 c8 2vampiresrockroza
I know you just updated but please update soon
4/12/2012 c8 3lovelover123
Every time I see an email that says you have added a chapter to one of your stories I do a happy dance. And this chapter certainly did not dissappoint! (As usual)

I feel so sorry for Emily and her unlucky streak but at least Derek is always there. I LOVED that you included his protective nature over her and that she did forgive him quickly. Also the part with JJ was adorable! Well done!

Very good case as well! I am just so impatient and want to know what else happens!

Are you going to detail Morgan possibly taking Emily back that night to change? Perhaps calling the hotel to have them run a bubble bath for her because he feels bad? I don't know how that would go down or if it would be too much but maybe he would do something to show how much he cares.

Also, are you going to bring up the sleeping arrangements issue? I know they're on a case and at a hotel but I have a feeling Emily and Derek would be missing each other's presence seeing as how they have grown to comfort one another. Even if they don't feel that it's professional you could include how they both feel about it or a small conversation or even one of them sneaking to the others room because they "couldn't sleep."

Just a thought! Thank you again for such a fabulous and wonderful story! I'm really enjoying it! Update soon! :)
4/12/2012 c8 2ayanamonique
Fantastically written.
4/9/2012 c7 3lovelover123
You are BRILLIANT! May I just tell you how much I absolutely positively LOVE your story! It is perfect! I loved this chapter. It was so cute to see them interact with the team and I'm also immensely intrigued by the case you have presented. I can't wait to read the next chapters - seriously! Update SOON! Keep up the awesomeness!
4/9/2012 c7 2vampiresrockroza
Update soon loving it
4/9/2012 c7 2ayanamonique
Great chapter and how Derek Emily work together during this case should be interesting.
3/20/2012 c1 Lalalala
Wow just wow your an amazing writer and your story us so captivating! Are you by any chance single and looking to mingle? ;)
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